Heya! New reader!
I love it! You are doing a very good job. There's a few spots where I am confused, but they are working themselves out.
I love what you've done with Snape. He seems so much more caring now. And the visual of him with a mohawk and earrings is quite the image!
And now Ron's just being an absolute git in not wanting to admit his feelings for Hermione and that he truly does love her. But it's also quite funny. He's just being overly nervous and a worry wart.
Great job!
-Rachel