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Lady Mouldywart · 09-19-2011, 03:05 AM

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Originally Posted by LillyJames

I AM A HORRIBLE PERSON!!! NOW I SHALL MAKE TWO LONG COMMENTS!

SPOILER!!: Comment one

SPOILER!!: chapter five

You're not a horrible person :O and TWO long comments? *dies*

I did try to make Mr Burke seem a little like Mr Dursley...in a way that you'd have to hate him if you read it. Aahah, and I love how you nicknamed Mrs Burke Mrs B

Can you resist the power of the spoiler?

SPOILER!!: :)

Oh btw, '...other than Ron of course'...that made me laugh

Also, does anyone know what came over Mrs B (as you would call her

) and why she's acting so weird? It's a pretty easy answer

09-19-2011, 03:05 AM	#52 (permalink)
Lady Mouldywart Gnome Join Date: Aug 2011 Posts: 276 First Year	Quote: Originally Posted by LillyJames I AM A HORRIBLE PERSON!!! NOW I SHALL MAKE TWO LONG COMMENTS! SPOILER!!: Comment one Love the way you describe the family, it is so much like them. And I could just picture Percy like that. I would too when I was eleven, summer was fleeting and we want to play! And they're all so excited for their letters! Adored the imagery there! ‘ Good job bringing that Gringotts bank break in into the story! YAY! THE LETTER! This made me think of Mr. Dursley, which made me kinda dislike Mr. Burke. YEAH, good job Mrs. B! :O Now I very much dislike him. > The slimy old what? I have a few words to fill in that blank... WEASLEYS TO THE RESCUE! So did she...but that slimy old ** wouldn't let her read it. Nobody calls MY Ginny a wet blanket! Agreed. That's how I'd act! I feel like crying. And I <3 commenting. SPOILER!!*: chapter five* . Uh-oh.. I doubt she really even heard her.. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO*Deep breathOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! NO! WRONG! IT'S AMARA'S! NO thanks, you mean... I feel like I'm fighting a loosing battle... EVIL Igor... Who could eat at a time like this? Other than Ron of course.. Hm.... It's not stupid to cry at! I'm going to cry about it! A bunch of good stuff and one horrible thing. Sweet Dreams Amara..... You're not a horrible person :O and TWO long comments? dies I did try to make Mr Burke seem a little like Mr Dursley...in a way that you'd have to hate him if you read it. Aahah, and I love how you nicknamed Mrs Burke Mrs B Can you resist the power of the spoiler? SPOILER!!: :) Here's a little note for you guys... At one point Amara will go to Hogwarts :3 Oh btw, '...other than Ron of course'...that made me laugh Also, does anyone know what came over Mrs B (as you would call her ) and why she's acting so weird? It's a pretty easy answer __________________ The Eighth Horcrux SA13+ - Click anywhere over here to read ^.^ Last edited by Lady Mouldywart; 06-30-2012 at 11:06 AM.