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Old 09-13-2011, 11:00 PM   #30 (permalink)
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Annoying School and house work, keeping me from doing my duty as a reader!

Quote time!!

SPOILER!!: my comments that are really long!
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'But why? Why can’t I play?’
Poor "little" Ginny...I SUPPORT YOU GIN!
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‘Hey, keep me out of this...’
Hahahaha Loved this.
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The twins grinned. Just like their older brothers had teased them about not being old enough for Quidditch when they were younger, they enjoyed doing the same to their little sister.
Sigh...I can understand, as I am the youngest I've seen it happed to all my siblings..
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‘I know how to fly, if that’s what you’re saying,’ said Ginny, her arms crossed as she stood outside the back door of The Burrow.

‘How can you know?’ laughed Fred. ‘Hey – wait! You haven’t—’

‘She can’t have, Fred,’ said George rationally. ‘The broom shed’s always locked.’
MWaHahhahahahaha!
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‘Yeah, you’re just bragging,’ Fred told his sister, convinced. ‘Well, see you! Go play with the gnomes or something.’
Stop underestimating your sister.

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‘We’re playing as two teams today, Ron,’ said Fred. ‘You’d better fly better, at least try to outstrip the speed of a butterfly this time.’
I laughed, the twins are just too funny!

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Ron scowled and punched his brother playfully. ‘It’s not my fault my broom’s lousy. Anyway, how are we supposed to have two teams with just the three of us?’
Amara the awesome, that's how!
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Her broom lay at her feet, a Nimbus 1000 she’d borrowed from the Burkes’ broom shed. It was quite old, the handle was badly scratched and some of its twigs were bent, but it was good as far as she was concerned.
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‘Is that a Nimbus?’ George said, walking over and gazing at the broom with wide eyes.
HAHAHA yeah, I'd say it's "Good as far as" ANYONE "is concerned.


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‘Thanks for pointing that out, Ron, we wouldn’t have realised if it wasn’t for you,’ Fred said, rolling his eyes. Ron’s ears turned scarlet.
Don't be embarrassed Ron! I know how you feel...

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‘Yeah, and how come Ickle Ronniekins gets to try the Nimbus and we don’t?’
‘Because at least he supports a decent team,’ said Amara, grinning at the twins’ indignation.


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‘You and Ron against us,’ said George, smirking identically.

‘We were going to be nice and let both of you pair up with one of us—’
Very sportsman like guys, very sportsman like (Insert eye roll here)

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OK, then,’ he said. ‘Mount your brooms. Ready? – Oh, what’s that behind you Ron? – GO!’
CHEATERS! But also sooo sibling like!
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Thirty feet above the ground and she was glad she was wearing shorts instead of a skirt – the wind was strong at this height.
Very Glad!
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She caught his eye and couldn’t help it any longer; she burst out laughing too.
I almost started laughing, laughter IS contagious!

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the ball lying innocently in the shade of a tree.
Ooh...well, you are quite a bit younger than them Amara and you have only played once before..


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An hour passed, and as Amara saved another goal (they had changed course a few times and now Amara was Keeper and the others were all trying to score), a bob of red hair and shining glasses appeared below them, yelling something.
YOU GO GIRL!
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‘What’s that, Perce? Sorry, I can’t hear you!’ George shouted back, flying around in circles to annoy him.
As much as I love Fred and George, they must have been insufferable to live with.
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‘MUM SAYS—’
‘Oh, who cares what Mum says?’ said Fred.
Wrong move Freddie boy, you should ALWAYS care what your mum says.
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‘—SHE SAYS IF YOU DON’T COME NOW, YOU’LL BE DE-GNOMING THE GARDEN EVERYDAY FOR—’
For how long??



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‘Mum’s really angry, you know,’ cut in their brother, pushing up his horn-rimmed glasses. ‘Half the chickens have escaped—’

‘Why’s she blaming us?’ said George innocently.

‘—she found a bunch of gnomes eating Ginny’s birthday cake and Dad’s clothes have gone missing!’

‘The ghoul was cold! That old pyjama he had—’

‘It’s summer, Fred!’ snapped his brother, but Fred and George went on conversationally:

‘What baffles me is how she knew we’d fed the chickens that weird potion—’

‘—we did try to keep them from flying away, mind—’

‘—but we definitely didn’t let any gnomes near Ginny’s birthday cake, at least not on purpose.’
<= That is all I can say..
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Their brother looked on the brink of exploding,
Yeah, I can picture that.

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Something thudded to her right and she heard a soft ‘umph!’ as someone fell.
Ginny! You naughty girl, you!

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‘What? That’s stupid,’ said Amara sympathetically.
Agreed!


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‘Um, Keeper, I think...’
You're most definitely a keeper!

Final comments!!

I love the way you portray the siblings together, it reminds me of my famiy together.

PAMS
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