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Ladybug · 09-12-2011, 05:58 PM

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Dedicated to my three close friends; Laila, Maura and Stef

Created; Falling In Love At A Coffee Shop

A month went by since Snape's outburst with no real excitement. The students had yet to return to Hogwarts after their holidays. Though he doubted many would - he wouldn't have and didn't blame those that didn't - and those that decided to would be under the wrath of the Carrows, more than him that was true. He'd be strict and he'd advise the other professor's to do that same, this was after all a school and given the current situation, but it fell to the Carrows to force discipline. God knows whose idea this was and at the thought of an earlier memory filtered through his mind.

...His black hair covered one side of his face more than the other but he didn't care. He was far too busy keeping his thoughts running wild as he listened to the shocking news given to him.

The man standing before him was tall and lanky, hardly a Death Eater material. His pitch black robes held loosely to his thin body, his arms were stretched out before him holding a fresh looking parchment.

"...and until which time the Dark Lord decides different the Carrows will remain here at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry..." The man's lazy tone cut through his thoughts as he finished speaking. Once finished, the man closed the parchment and dropped his hands to his side.

Snape let the words sink in while he pondered on what to say. His mind was blank, no thoughts flashed around. Only one sentence appeared before his eyes; 'They cannot come here...', over and over again.

Finally brushing a stray hair from his face he spoke, "Very well, is there anything else from the Dark Lord?" It felt like a lifetime since the time the man stopped speaking till the time Snape began to, but in actual fact only mere minutes.

"Yes.." A high pitched voice said from the shadows, "I will take over Muggle Studies as Professor as our dear friend had vanished..." The voice continued as the speaker stepped out of the shadows. Alecto Carrow sneered at the headmaster, her small structure taking up no room beside her companion.

"And I will teach the Dark Arts, it seems you have no Professor to take that role," another voice, Alecto's brother, stepped from the same shadows and up beside her.

Snape glared at the trio with hatred as well as shock. He hadn't been expecting this when he was given the role of headmaster. This made him think that maybe the Dark Lord didn't trust him, but no he had done all that had been asked of him. They were waiting for him to speak but he said nothing, his hand curled up on his lap. He tried to control his anger.

He still said nothing.

"...The Dark Lord also stated that the Carrows will deal with discipline and you should advise the professors to hand over troublesome students..." The first man spoke slowly, unease in his voice.

Snape opened his mouth, "Very well..."

A crash behind him pulled him from his thoughts. The clash of metal against stone rang though his ears with pain. Snape whirled around.

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Ladybug Graphorn Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University. Posts: 17,325 Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year	The person Voldemort has is NOT the same person in the last chapter. Sorry Workaholic \|\| HOGwart \| iloveyou. \|\| SnowQueenEviee. SPOILER!!: Comments Quote: Originally Posted by LillyJames Oh my! I love it! It's so good, you're writing style is amazing! I can't wait for more!! Why thank you, I do try bows It's so good to read your comments! Quote: Originally Posted by bonnieginnyfan1 Love it, Eviee! Love it! <3 Keep up the excellent work! Can't wait to see what happens in the nest chappie..... ♥Stef♥ Stef! Thank You! I'm running out of pre-written chapters! I hope you enjoy this chapter as much as the last although It's mostly thought. Quote: Originally Posted by narnia_potter Hey, great chapter! though, I have to say, I am super confused. I know you probably won't tell, but here goes: who is the girl? who is looking at her/scared of her/who she loves? is she the girl voldie is holding? if not, who is that girl? Well, now that ive pestered you with questions, I shall say again, you did a great job! -Rachel Rachel I'm so sorry for getting you confused. The girl in the last chapter on the hill is NOT the same person Lord Voldemort has. Not this chapter but in a few chapters I will go back to the women Voldemort is holding. As for the little, you wont know who she is till the end of the story. Sorry! Thank You again. Quote: Originally Posted by KP1 I love it! Haii, Thank You! Quote: Originally Posted by Mordanyes Woah, awesome chapter! I'm having a few ideas of who the girl is... SPOILER!!: Mah guessssssss Maybe a certain Lily Evans ... Just a guess, only from what was said in the new chapter. Nice guess! I wont tell you who the girl is. You'll have to wait and read! Thanks for reading! Quote: Originally Posted by LillyJames That had been my guess too Mordanyes, but only for the second girl, I doubt they are the same person. You are quiet right they are not the same person! I fear I've confused everyone! hides Quote: Originally Posted by ashfig Ooh this is really good! It is incredibly well written, and I'm practically on the edge of my seAt wondering what will happen next. I, too, assumed the same as ^^ but I suppose we will have to wait and see. Great job! Thank You for reading! Ah I hope this next chapter will keep you sorted till the next chapter! Quote: Originally Posted by crookshanks_kitty Hi Evie! Wow! Just wow! I absolutely adore the imagery you use to describe the beautiful setting you have created in your mind. These descriptive words are like a breath of fresh air and it blows me away. Anyway, I'm going to make two guessed on who the girl may be. I know you're not going to confirm whether I'm right ot not just yet. I'll give it a shot anyway. Is is young Lily and possibly young Snape? Or she may be a squib? Not sure why. Just a random guess. I can't wait to read more! PAMS!!! Ava Thank You, I wrote this in my spare time while on holiday and I know I wont get a chapter like this again anytime soon but with the next chapter with the little girl I hope to get at least halfway there. Your words are magnificent even if only used as a comment Your right I wont confirm the girl's identity but I like your guesses, a Squib? That's interesting no one else has thought of that but if that's who you believe it is then part of it's gotta be true right? Guys I've started college again and my clubs are to follow meaning I will have less time to post chapters. Although I will take my writing pad to college to write. Sorry for the trouble. You are all AMAZING readers and I love you all. Eviee. Dedicated to my three close friends; Laila, Maura and Stef Created; Falling In Love At A Coffee Shop A month went by since Snape's outburst with no real excitement. The students had yet to return to Hogwarts after their holidays. Though he doubted many would - he wouldn't have and didn't blame those that didn't - and those that decided to would be under the wrath of the Carrows, more than him that was true. He'd be strict and he'd advise the other professor's to do that same, this was after all a school and given the current situation, but it fell to the Carrows to force discipline. God knows whose idea this was and at the thought of an earlier memory filtered through his mind. ...His black hair covered one side of his face more than the other but he didn't care. He was far too busy keeping his thoughts running wild as he listened to the shocking news given to him. The man standing before him was tall and lanky, hardly a Death Eater material. His pitch black robes held loosely to his thin body, his arms were stretched out before him holding a fresh looking parchment. "...and until which time the Dark Lord decides different the Carrows will remain here at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry..." The man's lazy tone cut through his thoughts as he finished speaking. Once finished, the man closed the parchment and dropped his hands to his side. Snape let the words sink in while he pondered on what to say. His mind was blank, no thoughts flashed around. Only one sentence appeared before his eyes; 'They cannot come here...', over and over again. Finally brushing a stray hair from his face he spoke, "Very well, is there anything else from the Dark Lord?" It felt like a lifetime since the time the man stopped speaking till the time Snape began to, but in actual fact only mere minutes. "Yes.." A high pitched voice said from the shadows, "I will take over Muggle Studies as Professor as our dear friend had vanished..." The voice continued as the speaker stepped out of the shadows. Alecto Carrow sneered at the headmaster, her small structure taking up no room beside her companion. "And I will teach the Dark Arts, it seems you have no Professor to take that role," another voice, Alecto's brother, stepped from the same shadows and up beside her. Snape glared at the trio with hatred as well as shock. He hadn't been expecting this when he was given the role of headmaster. This made him think that maybe the Dark Lord didn't trust him, but no he had done all that had been asked of him. They were waiting for him to speak but he said nothing, his hand curled up on his lap. He tried to control his anger. He still said nothing. "...The Dark Lord also stated that the Carrows will deal with discipline and you should advise the professors to hand over troublesome students..." The first man spoke slowly, unease in his voice. Snape opened his mouth, "Very well..." A crash behind him pulled him from his thoughts. The clash of metal against stone rang though his ears with pain. Snape whirled around. __________________ ♥♥♥♥♥__________Chapter 17 of "A Broken Wing" Is up now!___________♥ ___________________Look Who's Back. Beware. Last edited by Ladybug; 09-14-2011 at 05:26 PM. Reason: Correct spelling.