08-06-2011, 02:47 PM
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Puffskein
Join Date: Feb 2011 Location: England
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Megara Kostas First Year | Quote:
Originally Posted by Lady of the Lake Very cute and amusing chapter, I loved this part especially :
And have a great holiday!  Yayy thank you!
My holiday was fantastic thanks I will get the next chapter up as soon as possible Quote:
Originally Posted by Connie Hey Jazz. Another great chapter.  Poor Izabella. So lonely, and poor Sirius, so lonely. Wish they could be able to get together and talk things out. But I think maybe this is best that she ignores him for a bit. In my opinion anyway. If she tried to talk to him now, he might just make up excuses, and not take it seriously, because he'd just be so excited that he wasn't lonely anymore. He's such a child. (and adorable child though)
I totally can see her dragging her feet, and rolling her eyes behind Severus and her mothers' back. So funny.
This sentence was written so well! You know that her mind isn't on the dresses at all. This quite possibly is my favorite sentence in the chapter. It is so simple, but the the statement she is really making is a big deal. Is she just being sarcastic, and says this because she knows her mom wants to make a big impression on the Malfoys?(one in particular) Or is she thinking of Sirius and decides to wear green to spite him for what he said? Or is she thinking of Lucius, and wants to acknowledge his stature by wearing green for Slytherin? At any rate you gave me something to wonder about until you post again. Great work Jazz.  Thankyou very much Connie! Your praise means a lot to me
Why did she choose green? I'm sure it'll all be revealed
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