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Originally Posted by
Lily<33 
aww...he broke her heart! :'( that's SOOOO sad
did she truthfully ever stop liking Teddy? I really, really, really hope not!
Like I'm actually going to tell you.
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PAMS! PAMS! PAMS!
love you!
Thanks, Ren! Love you, too!
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Originally Posted by
3uzz3ee
I'm wondering if you'll pull any twists in this, Ems
Not a clue. 
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Can't wait!
I know it'll be great!
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Originally Posted by
z999993 Great Emily!
Thank you!
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Ok so they're five years apart???
Yesh, five years.
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It's so sad that Abi had her heart broken.. I think she's too good for him
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Anyways, that was wonderful, as always.
Keep it up. PAMS
Thank you!
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Originally Posted by
KatielovesHP Oh Emily i like this! of course i like teddy and victoire together but i can let it slip for abi!
good job, pams!
Thanks, Katie
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Originally Posted by
Connie Hey Emily. Your new ff is great. I'm really enjoying it.
Thanks, Connie! I'm glad you like it!
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I Loved the way you expertly went through the chain link of time. Opening with fun and danger in the first chapter and then fun and heart break in this one was brilliant.
Thanks! I was worried it wouldn't go over well, but I'm happy with the transitions, and there are many more transitions, just so you know.
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I also loved the true to life emotion you gave us with Abi's anticipations of getting to see her heart throb, only to have him gently brush her off. I don't think he is being mean, it's just the age he is.
Thanks, Connie! I don't think he's being mean either; I think it's the age, too, and not wanting to look like a dork or something in front of his friends.
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Great job Emily. Keep up the great work.
Thanks, Connie!