Hey Emily. Your new ff is great. I'm really enjoying it. I Loved the way you expertly went through the chain link of time. Opening with fun and danger in the first chapter and then fun and heart break in this one was brilliant. I also loved the true to life emotion you gave us with Abi's anticipations of getting to see her heart throb, only to have him gently brush her off. I don't think he is being mean, it's just the age he is. It doesn't however, sound like he is with the best group of people to be friends with.
Great job Emily. Keep up the great work.