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Old 06-28-2011, 05:34 PM   #135 (permalink)
Connie
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Janet Lynn Gordon
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Hey ~Otty. On the edge of my seat. Can't stand the thought of Ottery being undead.
This next part tore at my heart. Where's the little Dutch Boy holding up the Dike? We could get him to take Ottery's place.
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Maybe if he didn't try so hard to be such a pain most times ... or if he could just make people stop caring about him Ottery could get on with his crazy adventures. But the prospect of no one caring about him made him sad. Like someone holding up a wall against the tides of evil protecting nothing.
Why can't people care for him and have crazy adventures too? I mean... it's not like they mother him and tell him things are to dangerous. (I would if I was there, but I'm not so... Ottery should be able to have his caring person (people) and have his adventures too.
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"I'm ... turning ... into ... one, not ... one ... yet," the boy exclaimed through gritted teeth.
There is hope yet! ^ There has to be a fell safe in Ottery's master plan. I'll put my hope in that.

Great chapter Ottery. I'll be watching for your edit.
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