Hey Jazz. At first as I was reading this, I thought it was starting with a flesh back. Nice work here Jazz. The story is easy and fun to read. And you did a good job of making me want to keep reading it. I'm anxious to read what prank The Marauders just pulled off, and I'm anxious to find out why Eileen and Abraxas Malfoy are doing there.
Great start Jazz. I'll be watching for your next.