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He blinked and cocked his head at me, "What's that supposed to mean?" Boys are really oblivious to everything.
Typical boys! And they must look so cute walking together!
I can just see them in my mind.
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And they lived with it, even managed to fake a few friendly hellos when he came by. It was kinda funny, (Ever notice how often I use the word kinda?) and gave me and William some amusement.
lol yes as I've noticed!
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Scorpius was the seeker for the Snake's team so this would be fun. We walked out onto the field just as it started to rain. Cool. An epic battle in the rain. As their team walked onto the field and the captains shook hand I searched for Scoprius, not that hard since he was one of the smallest members on the team. We met eyes and smirked at each other. We had one of those wordless conversations where you just speak with your facial expression.
Wow! Epic battle on the Quiditch field indeed. Interesting to see Bethany go against Scorpious. And squeee!!!
They're sooo cute!
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Scorpius had seen the snitch first and I had been lagging behind him. But he had become too cocky when he saw how far behind I was. He tried to tease me, slowing down then speeding up again. It was during this that I slowly caught up and that he lost sight of the snitch. I manage zoom ahead and grab it just as our chaser were beginning to fall behind in points.
Scorpius and I joked about it later, he kept saying he let me win and I would just brush him off, knowing full well that no Malfoy, no matter which one, would let you win at anything.
OMG they're adorable! Sorry I must be getting a bit overexcited here. *Cools self down* And that last sentence was so true.
Brilliant as always. And as for whether I think you should continue on with this story, well I think I'm in agreement with all the people before me who said that perhaps it's best that you end it here and decide to go with a series later as although as much as I love to read more, it would seem like the plot would be dragging on a bit after it came to a fair conclusion. This way you'd be wrapping it up nicely. So yeah, that's my personal opinion. I hope it helps.
