Thread: Harry Potter: Love You, Too - Sa16+
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Old 05-19-2011, 06:09 PM   #498 (permalink)
crookshanks_kitty
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carrot lover (not) // torturously friendly // secret spy // HP nerd // <3 sparkles // who am I?

Here I am! What did I miss! Ooh *looks up and down the page and finds two new chapters!* Sorry for my tardiness, I'll shall catch up now!

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I pointed my wand at my ginger locks, deciding going for a proper style would probably look good. I was straight with a slight curl at the bottom.
How I wish making my hair in the morning was that easy! Sigh!

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"...This really is a once in a lifetime opportunity. And after the way I watched you play today, I would think you’d have no problem. You really are a fantastic team player, and the Harpies would be honoured to have you.” I was stunned. I smiled at him delighted. This was defiantly my year!
Wow! Congrats Ginny! I'm so happy for her.

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“...Give the papers back to Proffessor McGonagall. She will Owl them to me. It’s been great speaking with you.” He stood up once more and shook my hand again. I left bidding the man goodbye then skipped back to the Gryffindor common room singing.
I just wanted to point out that I found it cute when he said "she will Owl them to me." It sounds funny.

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“When you’re an international Quidditch player, I hope you remember me. Cause I’m the one that spent countless hours with you practicing!” Harry whispered.
LOL! Good point! She better!

oh and I just want to point out to the fact that the H/G dance was so sweet.

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In the distance the hills seemed to have gone from a snow covered blanket of white, to a bright, vibrant, plush green where the shadows of the clouds were seen to drift along the top. The Black Lake was a more friendly blue colour as it reflected the sky. I smiled at my surroundings. How I missed home!
OMG! This bit of description was beautiful. I love your creative writing and the use of imagery. Love it!

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“Hermione, where is Harry?” I shouted, worried.
Umm I sure don't want to be near Ginny when she has that sudden rush of anger. That was unexpected. And I hope everything is okay with Harry.

Loved your new chappies. Keep it up!

Edit: Sorry I just read your note. I hope everything is going well for you in school. Don't ever worry about having to update often as we can understand how hard it can be joggling school work and keeping up with your ff at the same time. We'll all be here patiently waiting for your return.

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