Thread: Crossover: Harry's First Summer at Camp Half-Blood - Sa13+
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Old 05-14-2011, 08:11 PM   #17 (permalink)
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Great chapter overall. But you need to edit where it says "Harry's POV" to "Ron's POV" other than that it was amazing.
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