Hey Adelaide. This was great. I don't blame her for wanting to ask questions. And Lucius better remember his place. His pride is so huge, it's hard for him to swallow.
I love your story, and I think it's written very smooth. No problems understanding it, and it all fits together great. I'll be watching for your next post. (And on a side note I have read the other also, just haven't had time to send you a reply yet, but it's great. Kinda thrilling.)