Hello Kae. Wonderful writing. There is only one thing I can say that I liked most. Everything else I loved equally cause you did such a great job with it. But this one thing says a lot.
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"What if it happens again, Professor?" she began, "What will I do if the memory haunts me, and impedes on my...responsibility...to the Order?"
"Do not let it into your heart," Dumbledore firmly stated, "for that is the thing you will need to lead with from now on; in place of your head."
Indie nodded, choosing not to speak at the moment. Considering, before she'd entered this meeting, she'd scolded herself for letting her heart take control, even though it was the blatant truth.
Great job Kae. I'll be watching for your next.
