Hello Sophie. I really enjoyed your writing here Sophie. As I was reading what Thomas Reid was proposing to Ginny, I couldn't help but feel like things were changing, but really they were still the same? Hard to explain, but then you wrote this;
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“You don’t seem too happy. Don’t you want to go?”
“It’s just I feel like it’s the end of something. I’m not sure what though. And I feel like it will be a new beginning for us.” I looked up at him, hoping he’d have a solution.
“Yeah, I know.” He held me close wrapping his arms tightly around me, and then he planted a kiss on my forehead.
It was very good writing to lead me into that the way you did. It was all natural and casual. Also I loved this part;
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“You know, a bed isn’t the most practical place to get changed.” I said wobbling on the mattress as I pulled on the sweat pants. I used a charm to make them fit better and I cropped the legs so they looked marginally better. The tee-shirt I keep big. It was comfy but fell off one shoulder. I dramatically pulled back the curtains. “How do I look?” I asked pouting followed by a laugh. He grabbed me around the waist and spun me to the ground.
It might be my favorite part of the chapter. But it's hard to say cause it's all very good.
Great post Sophie. I'll be watching for your next, when you can get to it.
