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Old 03-23-2011, 03:24 AM   #4 (permalink)
Luna_Midnight

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Can I ask where you get these ideas from gosh...
And will you tell me who the dad is?

Okay anyways great prologue..Cant wait to read more..
Which means I will be trying to break into your laptop!!

PAMS

love your sister who will find the password and break into your computer
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Alexis
HAHA!! :lmafo:
Thats my secret :wink: and NO that would ruin it! And my laptop has maximum security on it so good luck

Love Alyssa thanks for reading
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WHAAAAAAAAAT! Who's there daddy?!?? *stomps foot and then awaits next chapter*

Haha, I liiiiiike it, I also like the names Raven and Rose, and yea, awesomeeeeeeee!
thanks that makes me so happy to know that I dont suck at writing like I think I do...
Yeah it took me forever to find two perfect names that would fit them
Love Alyssa thanks for Reading so far...
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Okay I will be editing in the Next Chapter..
i will be skipping the Hogwarts Letter they are just getting ready to go on the train.

Chapter 1:Raven's Hugs..

Raven I heard my mum yell...I relucidlly got out of bed and walked over to my kitty calander, and saw the date..September 1st...I looked over at the clock 5 o'clock....WHAT WAS HER PARENTS PROBLEM! Well they did live 3 hours away...Raven sluggishly walked over to her closet and pulled on her "Im Rose that's Raven" shirt that Rose made esppecialy for her birthday. I walked over to the sink and splashed my face with water...After doing so I was immediatly wide awake!

I walked down the stairs by using the railing and not the stairs. Quickly jumping off just before I got to the bottom. As I walked into the kitchen I said Hey mum...Where is Dad...Mum why are you crying?!My mum looked up cheeks all blochy and napkins all over the table...I heard a scream from upstairs...I giggled my dad had to do the 'Special Way of waking Rose' again. I walked over to her mum and pushed the napkins into my hand and put them into the garbage can. I heard an "Eww!" from behind her. I said back Its called being nice The normal retort was the same "You should at least wash your hands" This had been going on for a week already ever since we sent the Hogwarts letters back. I awnsered I was waiting to whip them on you This time she had had to think a bit and then Rose said I wouldnt you would be ruining the birthday present you gave to me I turned around to see her in a black skirt and in fact the shirt I had gave her the same time she gave me mine...I gave her the look, why are you wearing the same thing I am... I saw her roll her eyes and then walk over to the cupboard...I turned and looked out the window remembering when we gave the shirts to each other and our parents had said Looks like that twin telepathy of yours kicked in and thats how Rose knew that Raven would love the 'I'm Rose that's Raven' and Raven knew that Rose would love the 'I'm Raven that's Rose' shirt. Mine was red and hers was green... By the time it was 5:30 we were in the car and the next thing I knew I was being shaked awake and my mum saying Raven were here, come on its 8:45 we have to go if you want to make it... I was glad I had catched up on my sleep I just wished I could stay asleep forever.

My sister reminded me to get my stuff as I was about to just walk up to the train staion doors. I went and grabbed my trunk and my midnight black part kneazle and part cat, Luna. I set them on the trolley that my dad had gaven me. I struggled a while trying to put my trunk on their but after 5 minutes or so I had gotten it in and my mum had us back onto track. We had made it to Platform 9 and 10 but I didnt see a 9 and 3/4. I was really confused until my mum told me Raven I will go in first okay? Go back a little you will need a running start. Run straight into the middle of Platforms 9 and 10...I did as she said a little unbelieving at first. As soon as we were in...I was in my mum's arms...Everytime I tried to tell her that I had to go she held on tighter. From the corner of my eye I saw Rose whisper something into dad's ear but I wasnt able to see anything else after that mum was telling me that if I wanted to come back that she would come get me and I was just saying okay and nodding...

It had been 20 minutes until my dad put a hand on my mum and was able to pry me apart as I walked away I heard my dad say "Good luck at school see you here on Christmas break...", my mum whisper two words "Where's Rose?", and my dad's faint chuckle as I got my trolley over to the man and I was on board looking for my runaway of a sister, Rose.
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