Hello ~Otty. I keep reading this chapter and trying to come up with intelligent points of view to write, but having troubles because, ... well it's my mind I'm trying to make be intelligent.
The trouble I'm having is picking out things to comment on without cluttering up your post. It is a magnificent piece of writing, and I absolutely love it. You write Madison so real here. I just love reading it. I'm glad she is able to keep her mind working while she is distracted by the love of her life lying at deaths door. I would be leery of leaving Freddy with the evil ones.
I am curious about this,
Quote:
"Anything to keep the truce! You wouldn't understand. You don't belong to a pack, your loyalty easily wavers. I've got to watch out for me and mine. And this stupid little war of yours is fixing to explode all over our territories and I'll lay down with whoever I have to to see that my pack make it out alive."
I guess the war expands to all territories, but the way it sounds is he is really on the good side for now. Maybe because it suits his purpose for the moment.
Anyway, wonderful chapter that I enjoy reading over and over just to visualize in my head. I do hope Freddy makes forward progress recovering so they can get the plant to Ottery. I'm so afraid of them turning him into an undead thing.
Love your story ~Otty. I'll be watching for your next post.
