03-03-2011, 08:48 AM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Florida
Posts: 1,415
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Janet Lynn Gordon
Fifth Year |  Werecats are people too! Reader of Fan Fictions
Hello Maxie.  Too much time has gone by without my comment and you deserved one right away. You have written another chapter that has just got me so intriqued. Of course the title has me thinking in two diffrent directions for me to ponder upon. But I will only say this one, so as to save time and space. "Consist in Shades of Three" I could be very wrong, but to me this means beings of three living inseperably in one. Firstly, Ginny in present day only wishing to see the world and live her dream, but finding she is having dreams of a different world she's never known, and (secondly) another Guinevere who's lived in another lifetime than she's understood. Then thirdly, the present day Ginny living the life that is being carved out for her and smashed into as a tomatoe would be smashed and poured into the mold to conform to the wants and wishes of her Great Aunt. At any rate, whatever your meaning, I love it. I love thinking and trying to work out things I know nothing about. 
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"Must you close the windows at night, Ginevra? Your room is stuffier than a broomshed and, horror of horrors, it smells like your home. How careless you are, stuns me. Do you not care for yourself, at all? I am sure it is the lack of fresh air that makes your hair this red – almost like a tomato - were the colour to wear off, I would be more satis –”
Honestly Maxie! What inspires you to write so incredible? I loved this part so much. I'm sure I could hear Muriel ranting in my head as I read it.  Quote:
“I have been through your mail,”
The nerve!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't... well it being her I can imagine the nerve, but that is so wrong. It makes me wonder about the grubby hands grabbing her letter to Hermione. Oh wouldn't it be wonderful if Hermione showed up unexpectedly to see Ginny. Oh sorry, got carried away there for a second. 
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“Your hair considered, he is a most suitable match, and you must thank your stars that he has not been grabbed a dozen times already. Of course, I have yet to figure out if his interests are genuine, and if marriage between the two of you might be possible, but you can not miss your chance, that much is clear – a sutiable match is, after all, what your poor mother sent you here to find!”
Is Aunt Muriel so full of herself that she could actually think that Molly thinks the same as she does about why she was sent over to live with her?
Great post Maxie. I loved every shade of it. Wonderfully and masterfully written. I'll be watching for your next post Maxie. Much love to you. |
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