Hello Abi, and Emily. You have both written very good chapters. There was a few things that really made me feel sorry for the girls. First of all of course knowing what was about to happen would be terrifying for anybody. But I can imagine how desperate Emily might be feeling knowing she needed desperately to talk to her dad and let him no she loves him, and how sorry she was for the things said in anger. I caught my breath when Alisha said, I can't imagine the feelings of terror, and confusion going through her mind.
Emily, the way you made it feel like a gun going off inside her body was chilling. Very well written. Both of you did a very good job. I'll be watching for your next. But be forewarned, just like my commenting on these chapters of late; I might be very late commenting on them. But know that I am keeping up.