Hello ~Otty. I absolutely love your new post!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You write like the plays, only I can understand what you're saying.
You write so ummmm eloquently. What I mean to say is that your writing is so exspressful and meaningful, and vivid with your word usage. I just love reading your work.
The story line. I think you know that Harry Potter is my most favorite character of all time, so, even if you was aloud to, I would hope you wouldn't kill him off.
I love the characters of Madison and Freddie. It's very romantic in a tragic sort of way, and I think to kill either of them off would be detrimental to your story, (and me).
Tiffany and Teddy cannot be killed off, because they are such an intricate part of your story.
None of the Hogwarts kids should be killed off, and that includes Nicholas (sp?)
I could go on and on why different ones shouldn't be killed off, but the thing is... it's your story. You need to decide. (And by the way, why does anyone need to be killed?)
I think Scrimgeour, if anyone, should be the one to die. I'm so angry with him putting Ottery in jail in the first place.
Now, this brings me to Ottery. You can't possibly even hope to kill off Ottery. I will cry for hours even days if you do. And I hope you don't make him undead either.
(Which, that sounds like a contradiction in itself. Undead is alive isn't it?)
And lastly: This chilled me to the bone!
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The werewolf smiled in a way that gave away his true predatory nature. Madison had dealt with all manner of basiliks, all manner of conniving, self-centered egotists, and narcissistic rich little playboys who fancied themselves heaven sent to women, but she could see in the werewolves eyes that he did not see her as merely another pretty thing, or a lovely morsel of love's conquest to be had at his delight ... oh no, and true fear struck her in the knowledge, but she could see the sociopathic murderous nature of his true being betrayed in his eyes, a bottomless well to the depths of his dark soul.
Brilliant writing ~Otty. I loved every part of it. And I loved the song at the beginning, because it so fits with what I think of your ability to write. Keep it up. It's all wonderful.
