Thread: Harry Potter: In Hiding - Sa13+
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Old 01-06-2011, 01:48 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Hmmmm, very interesting start. I love it! Your writing is very well done as I can see so far and I love how you put the dialogue in a different colour, makes it that much easier to read!

Quick note, was the asterik after Snape said Asha's name meant to be there? If so, what for?
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