Hello Emily. Very nicely written. I enjoyed the setting, it seemed very real. The game was exciting, and the rest was very cute. A French kiss seems very forward for a first kiss, but I know you know what your readers like to read, so never mind about my opinion. And I hope James goes easy on Ruthie for saving Scorp's life from that murderous bludger. He reminds me a bit of Wood when he was Captain. It's all about winning the game at all cost. Great post Emily, and I'll catch you later.