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10-01-2010, 06:52 PM
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Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L) great post  Thanks, Kerri |
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10-02-2010, 11:16 AM
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| Snidget
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Great posts Emily!!!
I haven't been on in a few days, I haven't purposely ignored you!
I think Sophie is hinting correctly if I'm honest  Is there a baba on the way????
PAMS PAMS!!!
K xx
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10-02-2010, 01:59 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by KatielovesHP Great posts Emily!!!  Thanks, Katie Quote:
I haven't been on in a few days, I haven't purposely ignored you! Sure sure Quote:
I think Sophie is hinting correctly if I'm honest  Is there a baba on the way????
No, there is not a baby on the way.
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10-02-2010, 05:24 PM
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| Firecrab
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great posts Ems!!! <3<3<3
so sad for Brandon 
PAMS!!!!!
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10-02-2010, 05:35 PM
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Originally Posted by SarahLestrange great posts Ems!!! <3<3<3 Thanks, Lauren Quote:
so sad for Brandon 
PAMS!!!!!
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10-03-2010, 02:49 PM
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| Firecrab
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Secret Snape First Year | You can quote, disagree with, glorify or vilify me But about the only thing you can't do is ignore me Quote:
Originally Posted by emilyblack A little boy was being thrown around by a group of three Snatchers. O.o. EVIL SNATCHES! LEAVE HIM ALONE! Quote: What do you think? Oh, and the next post is where stuff actually starts happening and what not... You'll see WHAT! WHAT ARE YOU PLANNING! I just pray to god it's something good... Who am I kidding, this is emilyblack we're talking about... Nahh, jokes 
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10-03-2010, 02:55 PM
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| Snidget
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Are you just being mean or is there actually not a baby on the way??? And, what do you mean stuff??
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10-03-2010, 04:31 PM
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Originally Posted by Ruby85 WHAT! WHAT ARE YOU PLANNING! I dunno Quote:
I just pray to god it's something good...
:evillaugh Quote:
Who am I kidding, this is emilyblack we're talking about...
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Originally Posted by KatielovesHP Are you just being mean or is there actually not a baby on the way??? A little of both. But I'll say it again: There is not A baby on the way. Quote:
And, what do you mean stuff??
You'll see...  :evillaugh
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10-03-2010, 05:01 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Florida
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Janet Lynn Gordon Fifth Year | Werecats are people too! Reader of Fan Fictions
Hello Emily. Great post. I have mixed emotions for Dumbledore now. I've always loved him, but, I can't say I do now I think. It's too much to expect a young newlywed woman to be the caretaker of the world. These things she's doing she could do in the comforts of her own home. Like superman, he lived at home, and worked, but when the call for help was given he was there. She has the Diluminator to let her know when someone needs help. Just because he worked alone, doesn't mean she has to. And George would just have to be ok with it. My only thoughts in saving Dumbledore from my wrath is that maybe he's getting her used to being away from all she loves so she won't be distracted when the time for her to get in the heavy duty stuff. Quote:
So, she spent weeks upon weeks changing locations and traveling the country side. She spent most mornings throwing up, wishing the bug would go away, but it didn’t. At one point, she figured that since it only ever happened in the morning, when she first woke up and realized George’s arms weren’t around her, that she was just home sick, which made her physically ill. She was also incredibly bored and lonely.
But still I'm sure she has another thought that she keeps pushed in the back of her mind. Does she just assume she is late again?
Great post Emily. Know that you're doing a great job writing when you can get me all riled up against someone I love. I'll be watching for your next post. |
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10-03-2010, 05:14 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by Connie Hello Emily. Great post. Thanks, Connie! Quote:
I have mixed emotions for Dumbledore now. I've always loved him, but, I can't say I do now I think. It's too much to expect a young newlywed woman to be the caretaker of the world. These things she's doing she could do in the comforts of her own home. Like superman, he lived at home, and worked, but when the call for help was given he was there. She has the Diluminator to let her know when someone needs help. Just because he worked alone, doesn't mean she has to. And George would just have to be ok with it. My only thoughts in saving Dumbledore from my wrath is that maybe he's getting her used to being away from all she loves so she won't be distracted when the time for her to get in the heavy duty stuff.
See, I was kind of afraid of this. Do you remember when I told you guys that I changed the ending of the story? And the part I changed was her mission because I didn't think it was very believable, even though I wish I had just left it how it was now... But anyways, that's not the point. The way I had it, there was no way possible she could have done it from home. She had to leave to do that mission. And some things fell into place that were essential for later on, so when I changed the story line for the end, I still needed her to be gone so that other stuff would happen. That's why it's not even good right now. I'll be honest. I hate these posts I've been posting, just hoping that it could hurry so I could get to the main post (which is my next post).
And also, would she have really been able to communicate with Snape if she stayed home? Nobody was allowed to know that he was on the good side--it could jeopardize everything. So, George really wouldn't have been able to know about him.
But anyhoo, I hope you can cut Dumbledore some slack, since it is my fault that it is this way... Quote:
Great post Emily. Know that you're doing a great job writing when you can get me all riled up against someone I love. I'll be watching for your next post. Thanks, Connie! I'll post the next part either tonight or tomorrow... It depends on how long it takes me to finish my Geology homework... :/
And I also wanted tell everybody that they should head over to the Marauder's Drabbles Competitions, if you haven't already checked it out! They have a couple of games going on and what not, including Hangman. And everyone should go vote for their favorite drabbles! The more the merrier!
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10-03-2010, 05:49 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sophie Potter First Year | Ruadh gu brath! | | Friendships are better than normal Ships Quote:
Originally Posted by emilyblack But I'll say it again: There is not A baby on the way. OMG!!!! Theres more than A baby. There's more than one!!!! Ahh I'm sooo excited!!!
I now think I've got you sussed out emily! And now my theory as changed slightly. I know whats going to happen I give this way too much thought |
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10-03-2010, 06:50 PM
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Originally Posted by Morag OMG!!!! Theres more than A baby. There's more than one!!!! Ahh I'm sooo excited!!!
I now think I've got you sussed out emily! And now my theory as changed slightly. I know whats going to happen I give this way too much thought What are you rambling about Now?? I have no idea how you come up with this stuff... |
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10-03-2010, 07:12 PM
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| Firecrab
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Secret Snape First Year | You can quote, disagree with, glorify or vilify me But about the only thing you can't do is ignore me OH SHUT UP YOU LOT! Really, How is she meant to post a new chapter if you lot keep asking questions? No offence to Anyone  Anyway, when she said A Baby, it was probably just a typing error
I think... Any who, PAMS please! Pretty Please with a cherry and sugar and whipped cream and chocolate?
I'm hungry now.
{goes off into kitchen and comes back with chocolate milkshake, a can of squirty cream and a bar of cadburys dairy milk}
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10-03-2010, 08:31 PM
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| Snidget
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OMG POST PLEASE!!!
A baby....??? Evil, very extremely evil!!!
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10-03-2010, 08:56 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sophie Potter First Year | Ruadh gu brath! | | Friendships are better than normal Ships Quote:
Originally Posted by Ruby85 OH SHUT UP YOU LOT! Eh well, Its only me that is coming up with theories, and it just shows how must I love Emilys story and proves I am her number one reader and how totaly addicted I am cause she's a brilliant authour Quote: Really, How is she meant to post a new chapter if you lot keep asking questions? No offence to Anyone The way I see it is she'll post quicker and it shortens the time between post because we're still discussing the previous post Quote: Anyway, when she said A Baby, it was probably just a typing error. Are you sure? But I guess we'll just have to wait for Emilys next post
Emily if you want me to cut down my comments please let me know ok?
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10-03-2010, 09:48 PM
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Originally Posted by Ruby85 Any who, PAMS please! I will most likely post tonight (my time). Quote:
Pretty Please with a cherry and sugar and whipped cream and chocolate?
Ewe, I'm a picky eater and I actually don't like cherries or whipped cream... Quote:
Originally Posted by KatielovesHP OMG POST PLEASE!!! Soon Quote:
Originally Posted by Morag Eh well, Its only me that is coming up with theories, and it just shows how must I love Emilys story and proves I am her number one reader and how totaly addicted I am cause she's a brilliant authour   You crack me up, Soph. And thank you; you're too sweet Quote:
The way I see it is she'll post quicker and it shortens the time between post because we're still discussing the previous post I agree with you here. It does shorten the time in between and, depending on what I'm doing, I normally post quicker. Quote:
Emily if you want me to cut down my comments please let me know ok?
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10-04-2010, 01:09 AM
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Emily almost left in the middle of October, but when she used her Deluminator, she landed near a village. She glanced around in confusion and heard voices suddenly. Emily appeared to be standing about ten feet away from a group of six people.
Ron was in their midst—he looked like he’d been captured and everything. She saw his wand in someone else’s hands. They all looked excited to have caught him, but one of them had heard her pop. While the others started arguing about whether Ron was Stan Shunpike or not, the one stared right at her, his wand rising slowly. “Look! There’s another one!” he said. Ron’s head snapped round as the bloke said it. His eyes went round as he saw Emily. She wasn’t hidden with different disguises today. She nodded slightly to him and he returned it.
Ron hit the one holding him in the stomach and Emily shot a body stunner at the one who had noticed her first. Ron grabbed the guy’s wand and disarmed the one holding his wand. Emily ran over to them and helped Ron up. “Get out of here,” she whispered. He nodded slightly and Disapparated. The other two surprised Emily from behind and grabbed her wand. “OY!” she yelled as one took hold of her wrists. “Well, well, well, who do we have here?” asked one of the guys as the other guy helped the one she had stunned off the ground. They circled her, her wand in one of their hands. “Let go of me!” she said firmly. “I don’t think so… It seems you’ve been on the run, sweetheart. Why is that? Are you a Mudblood by chance?” he asked. Emily shook her head, struggling against the guy’s hold on her. “I think you’re lying… Why else would you be on the run?”
“That’s none of your business,” she spat. Emily elbowed the guy holding her, and he doubled over in pain. She knocked out the guy with her wand, which flew a little ways to the side. She dove for it, but one of the other guys pulled a knife and stabbed her leg. “Argh!” she cried. Emily stumbled as blood gushed down her leg. She was in too much pain that she could barely handle it. Tears flooded her eyes as she pulled the knife out of her thigh and threw it at the guy who stabbed her. The knife went through his chest and he fell backwards. Emily scooted backwards on the wet earth. Her hair was completely drenched from the pouring rain.
She finally reached her wand, but not in time. The only guy still standing had reached his wand first. “Sectumsempra!” he yelled at her, pointing his wand at her heart. Emily felt more pain than she could ever imagine. More and more blood was leaving her body and she knew that she would die if she didn’t get out of there. She Disapparated, concentrating with all her might.
She watched the bloody scene in front of her fade away as different woods came into view. She staggered and fell over. She thought she heard her name, but wasn’t sure if she was imagining it or not. Her vision became blurry and she blacked out. The last thing that went through her mind was George’s smile. Okie dokie, let me know what you think |
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10-04-2010, 05:20 PM
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| Snidget
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OMG!! That is so sad!! 
So, this is THE post you mean? What about the more-than-one baby-thing when she got hit in the stomach?? :O
Oh no!! PAMS right now!!!
K xx
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10-04-2010, 05:31 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by KatielovesHP OMG!! That is so sad!! 
So, this is THE post you mean? What about the more-than-one baby-thing when she got hit in the stomach?? :O Well, kinda. This is where things start happening, instead of having fillers. And I never said there was a baby; that was you guys. Quote:
Oh no!! PAMS right now!!!  Thanks, Katie. I'll post soon |
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10-04-2010, 05:39 PM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: My own little world
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Secret Snape First Year | You can quote, disagree with, glorify or vilify me But about the only thing you can't do is ignore me You want to know what I think? Well, I think... YOU'RE PURE EVIL!
PAMS PLEASE, DON'T LEAVE US LIKE THIS!
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10-04-2010, 05:43 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by Ruby85 You want to know what I think? Well, I think...
YOU'RE PURE EVIL! Being evil is fun Quote:
PAMS PLEASE, DON'T LEAVE US LIKE THIS!
I will, soon |
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10-04-2010, 08:22 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Scotland
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8)
awhhhh that was cute great post
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10-04-2010, 08:25 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sophie Potter First Year | Ruadh gu brath! | | Friendships are better than normal Ships
Hey Emily. I actually read this post earlier during school but then the period ended as I was getting to your comment. Quote:
Originally Posted by emilyblack
While the others started arguing about whether Ron was Stan Shunpike or not, the one stared right at her, his wand rising slowly. Oh no he di'unt. Don't hurt her because A- she has to go back to Georgie at the end of this and B there is the possibility of there being more than "A baby" on the way Quote:
Emily ran over to them and helped Ron up.
I hope Ron is ok. Does he need glomps? Quote:
They circled her, her wand in one of their hands.
Emily! Ruuuuuuuuuuuun! Quote:
“That’s none of your business,” she spat. Emily elbowed the guy holding her, and he doubled over in pain. She knocked out the guy with her wand, which flew a little ways to the side.
 Go Emily! Go Emily! Go Emily! Quote:
She dove for it, but one of the other guys pulled a knife and stabbed her leg.
Oh No Emily! Please pass the sick bucket. I'm terribly squeemish and go all faint at blood and guts. Eww! I'm sorry Quote:
She Disapparated, concentrating with all her might.
Aw Hen. It's just a little too late  It's ok Dr.Soph is here....Hold on I'm squeemish *faints* Don't worry. I'll get him with my mighty hacker :hack: Quote:
The last thing that went through her mind was George’s smile.
Ahhhh!!!! Is George there! Oh pleeeeeeeeeeeease say he is! I've missed him soooooo much Quote: Okie dokie, let me know what you think Terrific post. It was sad though wasn't it. But all very exciting. I can't wait for the next post!!!!!!
PAMS!
Soph x
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10-04-2010, 08:53 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L) awhhhh that was cute great post  Thanks, Kerri Quote:
Originally Posted by Morag Oh no he di'unt. Don't hurt her because A- she has to go back to Georgie at the end of this and B there is the possibility of there being more than "A baby" on the way   Well... Quote:
Ahhhh!!!! Is George there! Oh pleeeeeeeeeeeease say he is! I've missed him soooooo much Er, don't get your hopes up, okay? Quote:
Terrific post. It was sad though wasn't it. But all very exciting. I can't wait for the next post!!!!!!
PAMS!
Soph x
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10-05-2010, 03:59 AM
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| Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Janet Lynn Gordon Fifth Year | Werecats are people too! Reader of Fan Fictions
Hello Emily. Please don't be afraid of anything I said in my last comment. It really is a great compliment when a writer can sway the feelings of the reader. And I trust your writing that you would never allow my feelings to stay guarded against Dumbledore. I know that you had to have things a certain way  for the other things whatever they are down the storyline to work correctly. I'm sure my love for Dumbledore will be reinstated. And besides, it's just this one and a couple other ff's that his reputation is in jeopardy.  Breath easy, your story is a great success, and you know I love it.
[QUOTE]“Well, well, well, who do we have here?” asked one of the guys as the other guy helped the one she had stunned off the ground. They circled her, her wand in one of their hands.[QUOTE]Go ahead punk, make her day. 
Emily! That battle was breathtaking! I held my breath through the whole thing! Oh my goodness! I can't say anything, really I'm speechless. Quote:
She watched the bloody scene in front of her fade away as different woods came into view. She staggered and fell over. She thought she heard her name, but wasn’t sure if she was imagining it or not. Her vision became blurry and she blacked out. The last thing that went through her mind was George’s smile.
 Oh please Emily! Is she in safe hands?  So, she's in the woods.  I can't think where she might be. Was the name said in question like someone thought she was Emily? Or was the name said in surprise like she WAS recognized, but, couldn't believe she was there. OK, I have a theory, and I'll not reveal it to anyone to save my embarrassment if I'm wrong.
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