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09-05-2010, 07:52 PM
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| Snidget
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Connie, I'm Katie
Great post Ems, reminds me of sitting on my bed crying me yes out at this part of this book. My Dad kept asking me 'Why are you so sad?' and I couldn't bring myself to tell him
PAMS PAMS!!
K xx
(this was really good by the way, didn't really say that before)
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09-05-2010, 08:36 PM
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#877 (permalink)
| Puffskein
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Great post Emily
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09-05-2010, 08:50 PM
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#878 (permalink)
| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by Ruby85 Sorry I haven't posted for ages, but trying to juggle 4-5 active Fan-Fic's is tiering. Ohh! Hii! yeah, I know what you mean... Kind of. Mine mainly has to do with school work and the other fics I've started writing on Microsoft Word... Quote:
And, thinking about the sequel, I think I know why George is crying, and Emily is cold, but I mustn't spill, incase I'm right. But what I think... -shudders-
Haha, you might be right then  You're more than welcome to share in a PM Quote:
Loved the reunion.
Thanks Quote:
Baha, like Father, like Daughter.  That was really funny.
Haha, some things will never change  Thank you Quote:
Originally Posted by KatielovesHP Great post Ems Thanks, Katie Quote:
reminds me of sitting on my bed crying me yes out at this part of this book. My Dad kept asking me 'Why are you so sad?' and I couldn't bring myself to tell him Ohmygosh, I know what you mean! My mom always catches me crying in the sad parts of the books, and when I tell her, she just looks at me like I'm so weird. (She hasn't read or seen Harry Potter and refuses to do either) One time, I tried to hide the fact that I was crying, but she still found out. Quote:
(this was really good by the way, didn't really say that before)
Thanks, Katie Quote:
Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L) Great post Emily  Thanks, Kerri! |
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09-07-2010, 09:23 PM
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| Firecrab
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love the update Emily even though it is really sad ) ; I hope that this secret that she's keeping from everyone won't ruin the relationship she has with anyone, especially George...post soon 8D
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09-07-2010, 10:30 PM
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#880 (permalink)
| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by SarahLestrange love the update Emily Thanks, Lauren Quote:
even though it is really sad );
I know,, but it had to happen... Quote:
I hope that this secret that she's keeping from everyone won't ruin the relationship she has with anyone, especially George...post soon 8D
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09-09-2010, 02:30 PM
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#881 (permalink)
| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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| ♥ 2G FC| Narnian!| Fremione|Full Sail Girl ♥| Dramione| Shadowhunter!| Jesse ♥ Here's the happy post I told you about
Emily and George Apparated into the living room of her childhood home. She glanced around and noticed the coffee steaming on the kitchen table and the television turned on in the living room. “Huh, wonder where he is,” George thought aloud. Emily pointed to the back door, where she saw him through the window. They went to inspect, peeking around the curtain. “Oh my gosh,” Emily said, pulling her hand up to her mouth. “Is he...proposing?” George asked, shocked. “Look, I think he is!” Emily exclaimed excitedly as she pointed to Tonks, who was perched in the tree. She was smiling down at him as he rambled on, finally pulling out an engagement ring. He must have asked those four little words, because she shouted “YES!” so loudly that even inside the house, it could be heard. She jumped down from her branch and landed in his arms. Emily and George watched as they kissed passionately after Remus placed the ring on Tonks’ left ring finger.
George let the curtains fall, blocking out their view. He had a grin on his face. “That’s awesome,” he said. “Do you think that’s why he asked us over for breakfast? To share the happy news?” she asked her husband. “Either that or help him get through the depression if she had said no,” George replied. Emily slapped his arm playfully.
George wrapped his arms around her waist, like he always did. “So,” she said, “I wish we could go back to our honeymoon.” She pouted at him and he chuckled. She wanted to be alone with him before she said goodbye to go on her mission. She had finally given up on the distancing herself from him, not worrying about her pregnancy scare. She loved him, and kids or no kids, she would love him until the end of time. “Me too, love, me too, but we can’t. We have Bill’s wedding and evidently Tonks and Remus’ wedding. And I have the shop—Fred can’t do it by himself,” he said. He moved his fingertips over her bottom lip that was sticking out. “Don’t worry, love, we have forever,” he chuckled. “And always,” she breathed as he kissed her neck. She started giggling when he nibbled her ear. “Well, well, well, I didn’t know you were here already,” Remus said happily as he and Tonks came through the back door. Emily giggled as George stepped back slightly from his wife, embarrassed, but she just moved with him. “Emily! George!” Tonks trilled. “Guess what?” she asked brightly. She was shining with happiness. “What?” Emily asked in fake suspicion, playing along. “Remus and I are getting married!” she squealed happily.
Remus grinned happily as Emily ran over to them. “It’s about time, you two,” Emily joked. She hugged Tonks tightly. And then she turned to Remus. He was beaming, looking years younger. “I’m so happy for you, Rems. You deserve happiness,” she whispered as she hugged him tightly. “I love you, Daddy,” she whispered. Remus hugged her back. “I love you too, kiddo,” he said. He kissed her hair. “Let me see the ring!” Emily said as Tonks and George broke apart. Tonks held it out to her. “It’s gorgeous, Tonks! You have pretty good taste,” Emily said, looking at Remus. He chuckled lightly. “Do you have any idea when you want to do it?” George asked. “I was thinking sooner rather than later,” Remus said, looking at Tonks. She nodded fervently. “How soon are you willing?” he asked softly. “Right now, if you want,” she replied, wrapping her arms around his middle. “I’m in,” he said softly, kissing her hair. She giggled softly as he threaded his hands in her hair.
George came up behind Emily and wrapped his arms around her waist, resting his chin on her shoulder. She threaded her fingers with his and watched the happy couple before them. Tonks and Remus locked lips and Emily sighed, happy that her godfather is finally getting his happily ever after. George twisted his head the same time that Emily twisted hers. Their lips met, and he smiled against her mouth.
By noon that very day, Emily and George were able to convince the very Minister that laid Dumbledore to rest to marry Tonks and Remus. Tonks convinced her parents to come to the wedding, though her mother wasn’t highly happy at the quickness of it. But they explained that they had waited a lifetime for each other and were done waiting. They wanted to start their lives together as soon as possible, especially since time was limited with the coming war.
Emily was Tonks’ Maid of Honor while George was the Best Man. Mr. and Mrs. Tonks sat in two pearly white chairs that were set near the shade of the huge oak tree in the backyard. Emily and George carved Tonks and Remus’ initials in the tree with a heart around it and the date of the day.
Remus had dragged out his dress robes from Emily and George’s wedding. Emily magically turned the sea green to a sky blue. She transfigured Tonks’ clothes into a wedding dress that looked amazing on her petite figure. The bust was created into a beautiful woven design. Around her waist was a sash that was snug to her curves, coming together on the side with intricately put together beads. The material dropped down below her waist to the floor, leaving a train behind her. Tonks’ curls were a light shade of blue to match Remus’ robes, George’s shirt, and Emily’s dress.
Emily transfigured one of her summer dresses into an elegant bridesmaid dress. Its pleated dropped waist hugged her curves with a bubble hem. The light blue color brought out her red hair against her ivory skin. George couldn’t keep his eyes off her.
Tonks and Remus repeated their vows and said the two faithful words “I do,” sealing it with a kiss. Emily decorated the living room in white and light blue. Emily brought over her radio and they listened to music, dancing the night away. Remus asked Emily to grab one of her favorite CDs for Remus and Tonks’ special dance. She ran up the stairs and grabbed it, smiling happily at its memories. Skipping downstairs, Emily placed it in the radio and hit play. The music filled the room. “Ladies and Gentlemen,” Emily announced. “It is time for the traditional first dance as man and wife.” Emily held her arms out wide as Tonks and Remus took the floor. Emily sat in George’s lap, snuggling up to his side. All 4-one’s sweet melody filled the air as Remus spun Tonks around and then held her tightly. Emily listened as one of her favorite parts came up. She kissed George’s neck. And I swear by the moon
And the stars in the sky I’ll be there
I swear like the shadow that’s by your side I’ll be there
For better or worse
Till death do us part
I’ll love you with every beat of my heart
And I swear
Tonks’ head leaned against Remus’ chest as he started whispering the lyrics in her ear. She giggled, occasionally sighing. The song was quickly coming to an end, but the happiness never wavered. They were all one big happy family and nothing could change that. And I swear (I swear) by the moon
And the stars in the sky I’ll be there (I’ll be there)
I swear (and I swear) like the shadow that’s by your side
I’ll be there (I’ll be there)
Emily glanced over at Tonks’ parents. Ted stole a kiss from his wife, who smiled happily at her husband and daughter. Emily grinned as George started kissing her neck. She turned and they locked lips. For better or worse (better or worse)
Till death do us part I’ll love you
With every single beat of my heart
I swear, I swear, I swear
Remus kissed Tonks on the lips as tears fell down her cheek. Her hair turned a bright green.
Tonks and her father had their father-daughter dance, and then everybody ate. They all lounged around the house for the rest of the day until Ted and Andromeda decided it was time to leave. Emily and George left shortly after, returning to their own home. **Disclaimer: The song I Swear is performed by All-4-One and written by Gary Baker and Frank J. Myers.
What do you think?**
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09-09-2010, 03:34 PM
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#882 (permalink)
| Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8)
Awhh that was so nice. I was nice to have a happy chapter for once 
I loved the dress and i thought the Wedding was amazing  Great chater Emily
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09-09-2010, 03:58 PM
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#883 (permalink)
| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L) Awhh that was so nice. I was nice to have a happy chapter for once   Don't get too used to it. The next one isn't really happy... Quote:
I loved the dress and i thought the Wedding was amazing Thanks! I fell in love with that dress when I found it! Quote:
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09-09-2010, 04:08 PM
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| Puffskein
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Hello Emily. Awe Emily it was great! The ring is beautiful, I love the wedding gown for Tonks, and Emily's dress is gorgious! I love the shade of blue you picked. The wedding was beautiful, and I'm so happy that Mr. and Mrs. Tonks came, even though they weren't happy about things. But as wonderful as all that was, this is my favorite part: Quote:
George wrapped his arms around her waist, like he always did. “So,” she said, “I wish we could go back to our honeymoon.” She pouted at him and he chuckled. She wanted to be alone with him before she said goodbye to go on her mission. She had finally given up on the distancing herself from him, not worrying about her pregnancy scare. She loved him, and kids or no kids, she would love him until the end of time.
 And to think of all that wasted time she could have put to better use! 
Great post Emily.  I'll be watching for your next.
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09-09-2010, 04:15 PM
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#885 (permalink)
| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by Connie Hello Emily. Awe Emily it was great! Thanks, Connie! Quote:
The ring is beautiful, I love the wedding gown for Tonks, and Emily's dress is gorgious! I love the shade of blue you picked. The wedding was beautiful, and I'm so happy that Mr. and Mrs. Tonks came, even though they weren't happy about things.
 Thank you  I had fun picking them all out. Quote:
But as wonderful as all that was, this is my favorite part:  And to think of all that wasted time she could have put to better use!  That is very true Quote:
Great post Emily.  I'll be watching for your next.
Thanks, Connie! |
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09-09-2010, 05:02 PM
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|  X-treme Horcrux Slayer! Puffskein
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Hi Emily! Quote:
Originally Posted by emilyblack Here's the happy post I told you about  Ah They got married! I'm so glad there's a happy post. We've been needing one! Quote: “Is he...proposing?” George asked, shocked.
 Ah it's sooooo cute. I'm glad Remus has finally found a bit of happiness! Quote:
He was beaming, looking years younger.
Aww bless. I'm so happy! OMG! Remus has very good taste. I love the ring! It's so pretty. Quote: “Right now, if you want,” Yes!!!! It's sooo exciting! Quote:
She transfigured Tonks’ clothes into a wedding dress that looked amazing on her petite figure.
Tonks Dress was soooooooooo pretty. I want that dress. I love it! I think it's my favourite of all the dresses I've seen on SS. Please don't hate me but I wasn't too keen on Emily's dress but I think it's the chocolate colour in the picture. I can imagin it in blue and it's so much nicer. Quote:
Tonks’ head leaned against Remus’ chest as he started whispering the lyrics in her ear.
Awwww. It's so lovely. I cryed here! Quote:
The song was quickly coming to an end,
And then I thought that Remus won't be here for much longer He was coming to an end too
PAMS Emily! Great Post. I wish Remus didn't have to die. He and Tonk's deserve longer together.
Soph x
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09-09-2010, 05:05 PM
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#887 (permalink)
| Snidget
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Finally, happiness!!
Great post Emily
Love the ring and the dress!!
PAMS PAMS
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09-09-2010, 05:46 PM
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#888 (permalink)
| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by Morag Ah They got married! I'm so glad there's a happy post. We've been needing one!  I know, but don't get used to it. The next isn't too happy... Quote:  Ah it's sooooo cute. I'm glad Remus has finally found a bit of happiness!
Me too! He deserves it. Quote:
OMG! Remus has very good taste. I love the ring! It's so pretty.
 Thanks, I had fun picking it out Quote:
Tonks Dress was soooooooooo pretty. I want that dress. I love it! I think it's my favourite of all the dresses I've seen on SS.
Ah! Me too! I really hope that when and if I get married, that dress is still available! I want it majorly! Quote:
Please don't hate me but I wasn't too keen on Emily's dress but I think it's the chocolate colour in the picture. I can imagin it in blue and it's so much nicer.
Yeah, I know what you mean. But it was one of the only ones I could find at the time. I hate the brown color it's in, but I think it would look better in the blue. Quote:
Awwww. It's so lovely. I cryed here!
 Don't cry! Quote:
And then I thought that Remus won't be here for much longer He was coming to an end too See, you can cry when he dies, not now... Quote:
PAMS Emily! Great Post. I wish Remus didn't have to die. He and Tonk's deserve longer together.
Soph x
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Originally Posted by KatielovesHP Great post Emily  Thanks, Katie! Quote:
Love the ring and the dress!! Hehe, thanks, they were fun to pick out |
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09-10-2010, 04:54 PM
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#889 (permalink)
| Firecrab
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Parmis Fifth Year | carrot lover (not) // torturously friendly // secret spy // HP nerd // <3 sparkles // who am I?
New Reader!  Emily I love love love love love this fanfiction. The way you right is so intriguing that I want to keep reading more. You are very talented. The descriptions you provide in every chapter are breathtaking. Right now I'm on chapter two so I'm going to comment on every chappie from now on until I catch up with your other readers.
I'm guessing Emily Black is the one from the La Push reservation, Forks, in Twilight? Or am I totally off? I love the awkward but rather cute interaction between Emily and Draco, though if my previous guess is right, then I wonder how Draco got there. I guess I have to read more to find out. Oh and as I said before the prologue was awesome.
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09-10-2010, 05:05 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by crookshanks_kitty New Reader!  Hey, Ava! Welcome to Meet You Under the Moon! Quote:  Emily I love love love love love this fanfiction. The way you right is so intriguing that I want to keep reading more. You are very talented. The descriptions you provide in every chapter are breathtaking.
Awe, thanks, Ava  That means a lot to me Quote:
I'm guessing Emily Black is the one from the La Push reservation, Forks, in Twilight? Or am I totally off?
Umm, you're kind of off. You're probably about to read about; I can't even remember that far back where I put it in at... Oh wait! Yeah, you're about to read about it. She's not from La Push and neither is Draco. Remus and Emily just used to visit there when she was younger... And Draco...just happened to stumble upon it? I didn't really go into detail of how he knew the place, but I've always assumed his parents traveled for vacations and what not, so we'll say he's been there a few times Quote:
I love the awkward but rather cute interaction between Emily and Draco, though if my previous guess is right, then I wonder how Draco got there. I guess I have to read more to find out.
Hehe, thanks. That part was really fun to write Quote:
Oh and as I said before the prologue was awesome.
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09-11-2010, 07:36 PM
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| SS Vaulter Firecrab
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| I love it, Ems!
I really like how they just get married straight away...!
Oh, Emily is going to be so upset...
WHAT IS HER TASK?
I think we have the right to know as she had to endure Snape!!!
PLEASE!!
I honestly it! 
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09-11-2010, 09:19 PM
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#892 (permalink)
| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by 3uzz3ee I love it, Ems! Thanks, Abs! Quote:
Oh, Emily is going to be so upset...
Yes, yes she will. Extremely You'll find out soon, Miss Impatient Quote:
I think we have the right to know as she had to endure Snape!!!
PLEASE!!
And you will...when that post comes up... Quote:
I honestly  it!  Hilarious. Real funny.  Thank you |
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09-12-2010, 05:38 PM
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| Firecrab
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Originally Posted by emilyblack  Don't get too used to it. The next one isn't really happy...  WHAT! WHAT ARE YOU DOING! Ok, who kills, who gets killed, what the hell's gonna happen!!!!!!!!!!!!! Grrrr :hack:
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09-12-2010, 06:17 PM
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#894 (permalink)
| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by Ruby85 WHAT! WHAT ARE YOU DOING! Ok, who kills, who gets killed, what the hell's gonna happen!!!!!!!!!!!!! Grrrr :hack:  I never said anything about killing anyone off. It's all from the book anyway, so don't blame me |
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09-12-2010, 10:08 PM
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| Firecrab
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I love the post emily!!!! OMG! that was perfect I never really thought about Tonks and Lupin's wedding I was just to happy that they finally got married 8D
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09-12-2010, 11:21 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by SarahLestrange I love the post emily!!!! Thanks, Lauren! Quote:
OMG! that was perfect I never really thought about Tonks and Lupin's wedding I was just to happy that they finally got married 8D
 Me either until this fanfic.
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09-13-2010, 04:24 AM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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| ♥ 2G FC| Narnian!| Fremione|Full Sail Girl ♥| Dramione| Shadowhunter!| Jesse ♥ Okay, so here's the not so happy post, but remember that I did NOT come up with this. Which brings me to the fact that if you recognize any quotes and what not, they're JK Rowling's
It was the night that Harry was to be picked up by the Order members. Emily sat in the house with Mrs. Weasley and Ginny. Remus and George talked her into not going, and she regretted it as soon as they took off. She was extremely worried when Ron, Tonks, Mr. Weasley, and Fred missed their Portkeys. She had a gut feeling that something was terribly wrong. The three women stared out the back door, waiting for their family and friends to come home as Harry and Hagrid fell onto the grassy earth from nowhere. They all started running towards them, screaming. “Harry? You are the real Harry? What happened? Where are the others?” Mrs. Weasley said frantically.
Emily watched the sky as Harry explained about the Death Eaters waiting for them. Emily’s stomach dropped into her toes. Ginny started explaining the order in which they were supposed to be back. George and Remus were next. She only had about a minute to worry. If they didn’t come back, then she would try to find them. She wasn’t going to wait around all night when they could be in some fight, needing her help. “Mum!” Ginny shouted suddenly. As a blue light appeared in the darkness, where she was pointing, Remus and George appeared. Remus was supporting George, who was unconscious. Emily and the others hurried over to them. “George!” Emily cried as Harry grabbed his feet and helped Remus take him to the couch. Emily sat on the edge of the couch, clutching her husband’s hand tightly as she cried. Remus seized Harry and took him back in the kitchen, but Emily didn’t care. She was too worried about her husband, whose side of the head and neck was drenched in blood. She looked at the hole in the side of his head—it seemed his ear had been cursed off. Mrs. Weasley cleaned George up and his ear was tended to. Ginny caught Emily’s eye as the two of them had a silent conversation about the others that hadn’t come back yet. “How is he?” Harry asked as he rejoined them. “I can’t make it grow back, not when it’s been removed by Dark Magic. But it could have been so much worse…He’s alive,” Mrs. Weasley said. Emily choked back a sob at these words—what if he hadn’t come back? Emily pushed the thoughts aside as she brushed some of George’s hair out of his eyes. “Yeah, thank God,” Harry said. “Did I hear someone else in the yard?” Ginny asked as she looked over at Harry. “Hermione and Kingsley,” Harry answered. “Thank goodness,” Emily heard Ginny whisper.
Emily heard a crash from the kitchen, and her head snapped around. “I’ll prove who I am, Kingsley,” Mr. Weasley was saying, “after I’ve seen my son, now back off if you know what’s good for you!” Mr. Weasley burst into the living room, Fred right behind him. They were both pale, but unharmed. “Arthur! Oh thank goodness!” Mrs. Weasley cried. Mr. Weasley kneeled beside George’s head. Fred gaped over the back of the sofa and George stirred.
Emily’s hand tightened around his. “How do you feel, Georgie?” whispered Mrs. Weasley. “Saintlike,” he murmured as he groped the side of his head. “What’s wrong with him? Is his mind affected?” Fred croaked, looking terrified. “Saintlike,” George repeated as he opened his eyes, looking at his brother. “You see…I’m holy. Holey, Fred, geddit?” Mrs. Weasley sobbed as Fred’s color came back to him. “Pathetic,” Fred said. “Pathetic! With the whole wide world of ear-related humor before you, you go for holey?” Emily giggled in spite of herself. “Ah well,” George said as he grinned. “You’ll be able to tell us apart now, anyway, Mum,” he said as he looked at the tear stained face of his mother. George wouldn’t look at Emily and it worried her. He tightened his hold on her hands as he addressed Harry. “Hi, Harry—you are Harry, right?”
“Yeah, I am,” Harry said as he moved closer to the couch. “Well, at least we got you back okay. Why aren’t Ron and Bill huddled round my sickbed?” George asked. “They’re not back yet, George,” Mrs. Weasley said quietly. George’s grin dropped from his face.
Harry and Ginny left the group as George stared round at everybody. When he made it to Emily, he looked at their hands instead of her face. George moved his other hand to their intertwined hands and lightly played with her wedding band. Emily’s tears leaked out of her eyes as everyone around them turned their backs slightly to give them a bit of privacy.
Emily untangled one of her hands from his and put her forefinger under his chin, bringing his face up to look at hers. Their eyes met and they stared at each other wordlessly. George’s fingertips grazed over her cheeks, wiping her tears away. He cupped the side of her face and she choked back a sob. “You scared me,” she whispered. “All I could think about was you—coming home to you, seeing your face, kissing you,” George whispered back. “Georgie,” she whispered before she leant forwards and kissed him full on the mouth. His arms tightened around her waist as her hands knotted in his hair. They broke apart and stared deeply in each other’s eyes. “I don’t want to lose you.”
“You won’t,” he whispered. “Never scare me like that again,” she whispered as she kissed his neck. He chuckled lightly before bringing her face back to his. “I love you,” George whispered.
Emily leaned forward, her nose nuzzling his. “I love you more than you could imagine.” She kissed him lightly on the lips as he smiled against her mouth. “Do you need anything?” she asked as she pulled away. “Just you,” he replied with a small smile. “Cute, but I’m being serious. Thirsty?” she asked. “I could go for some water, please,” he said. Emily nodded, kissed him on the cheek, and left for the kitchen.
Remus met her in the kitchen. They, too, stared wordlessly at each other before he rushed forward and pulled her into a hug. “Never scare me like that again,” she whispered into his chest. He nodded against her hair and he pulled back to look at her. “Don’t worry, I’m sure she’s fine,” Emily whispered. Remus nodded slightly before kissing her cheek and making his way back outside. Emily grabbed the water bottle from the fridge and made her way back to George. “You were gone too long,” George complained as he held out his arms for her to snuggle up in. She smiled swiftly at him as his arms tightened around her waist. “Sorry,” she said as she kissed his cheek. “It’s them!” they heard Hermione scream from outside. They were all silent as they listened to hear who was back. “Remus!” Tonks cried. Emily breathed a sigh of relief as she heard their voices from outside.
Ginny flung through the doors and into the living room. “Ron and Tonks are back! They’re okay!” she said as she stared at her parents. Mrs. Weasley shrieked before she and her husband ran outside with Ginny right behind them. “I’m glad they’re okay,” Emily whispered. “Me too,” George agreed. “I just wish Bill, Fleur, Mad-Eye, and Dung would hurry up,” Fred said as he sat on the arm of the sofa. Emily and George nodded their agreement.
Emily, George, and Fred were all laughing at something Fred had said as the others walked into the room. “What’s wrong?” Fred asked as they all entered. They stopped laughing. “What’s happened? Who’s—?”
“Mad-Eye,” Mr. Weasley replied. “Dead.” Their grins turned to grimaces of shock. Emily’s tears came as Bill pulled out a bottle of Firewhiskey and some glasses from a sideboard. “Here,” he said. He sent thirteen full glasses flying around the room to each of them with a wave of his wand. “Mad-Eye.”
“Mad-Eye,” they repeated as they took a swig of the drink. **What do you think?** |
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09-13-2010, 04:54 AM
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| Puffskein
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Hello Emily. You asked what we think. I'll tell you that as I read this, I got goosebumbs all over, and the further I got the more I got. I think my goosebumps had goosebumps. And when I got to the end, the hair on the back of my neck stood up. So, I think you did an outstanding job on your post tonight, this morning rather. Quote:
Emily untangled one of her hands from his and put her forefinger under his chin, bringing his face up to look at hers. Their eyes met and they stared at each other wordlessly. George’s fingertips grazed over her cheeks, wiping her tears away. He cupped the side of her face and she choked back a sob.
That ^ was my favorite part of the whole post. Love has no boundries, nor is it limited to the spoken word. The silence and the knowing look says everything.
Beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I always miss reading about Harry, well, you know, because he's my hero. But, I'm really glad you're staying true to your story line. It isn't about Harry, it's about Emily.
You're an excellent writer when you aren't tempted to put other things in, simply because you know it is popular. I think it makes it better this way. Popular doesn't make it great. Staying with the storyline is the best way to go in my opinion.
Great post Emily. I'll be watching for your next. |
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09-13-2010, 06:17 AM
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| Firecrab
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Loved the post! Quote:
“You scared me,” she whispered.
“All I could think about was you—coming home to you, seeing your face, kissing you,” George whispered back.
Maybe one of my fav parts Quote:
Remus met her in the kitchen. They, too, stared wordlessly at each other before he rushed forward and pulled her into a hug.
“Never scare me like that again,” she whispered into his chest.
Another great one. Quote:
“You were gone too long,” George complained as he held out his arms for her to snuggle up in.
Baha, just like George
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09-13-2010, 10:04 AM
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| SS Vaulter Firecrab
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How long is this going on for??
WOW!
I'm only asking because of your other Fic that has not seen the light of day yet...
Great post though, Ems!
I can't believe that they convinced her not to go!!!
Can't wait for the next bit!
LOVE IT!
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