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11-07-2010, 05:09 PM
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| Snidget
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OMG!!!!!!
Charlie is just the best  Please tell me something is going to happen between them when they get drunk!! That would be awesome!!
AND.......
Do NOT reply with an evil laugh or a whistle or any of that
K xx
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11-07-2010, 05:18 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by KatielovesHP OMG!!!!!!
Charlie is just the best  Please tell me something is going to happen between them when they get drunk!! That would be awesome!!
AND.......
Do NOT reply with an evil laugh or a whistle or any of that
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11-07-2010, 05:47 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sophie Potter First Year | Ruadh gu brath! | | Friendships are better than normal Ships Quote:
Originally Posted by emilyblack
only to go home to her cheating boyfriend. *shakes head*  Grr... I really really really really really don't like him. Quote:
He went on with his normal routines, kissing her on the cheek when she came home, massaging her neck to relieve her from the tense muscles from her practice.
I tell you, he would do well in Hollywood. But Bobby is really just sick how he can two time poor Christelle like that Quote: “Bobby’s coming too,” she reminded the small witch. Ginny frowned momentarily.
"Oh yeah! Great!" Soph said very enthusiasticly Quote: “I have plans with Bobby,” she said shortly.
Really! I thought he would have made plans with the brunette! Quote: “Holyhead Harpies win!”  biut could you expect anything less from Christelle and Gin- they make a great team! Quote: “Yeah, you were incredible.” Charlie engulfed Christelle into a huge hug and she hugged him hesitantly back. She couldn’t help the thrill that went down her spine at his touch.
 I bet Bobby can't hug like that! Quote: “I, er, actually have some things I need to finish at the office… So I’ll see you at home,” Bobby answered.
Mmmmhmmmm.... What sort of things Bobby? Quote: “Well, then you might want to follow me instead of them,” he whispered with a wink.
How nice would it be if they kissed! And then Charlie would kick Bobby's butt cause she's tell Charlie how bad he is to her. And then they'll get married and live happily ever after....
Hehee...Lovley Chappie Emily! I hope Christelle and Charlie have fun together and see that they are destined for one and other! 
PAMS!
Soph  x
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11-07-2010, 06:00 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by Morag *shakes head*  Grr... I really really really really really don't like him. Quote: "Oh yeah! Great!" Soph said very enthusiasticly
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Really! I thought he would have made plans with the brunette!
Well... Quote:  I bet Bobby can't hug like that!
Hehe, you never know... Quote:
How nice would it be if they kissed! And then Charlie would kick Bobby's butt cause she's tell Charlie how bad he is to her. And then they'll get married and live happily ever after....
 You're getting a little too ahead of yourself there, Soph. Quote:
Hehee...Lovley Chappie Emily! I hope Christelle and Charlie have fun together and see that they are destined for one and other!  Thanks, Sophie! Maybe they're just meant to be friends... |
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11-07-2010, 07:00 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sophie Potter First Year | Ruadh gu brath! | | Friendships are better than normal Ships Quote:
Originally Posted by emilyblack  You're getting a little too ahead of yourself there, Soph.  I knows! I usually do...but it would be nice! A girl can dream Quote:  Thanks, Sophie! Maybe they're just meant to be friends... :whistles:
Maybe...but now that you mention it, there was a little thing between her and the coach!
Soph  x
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11-07-2010, 09:09 PM
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| Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8)
great post
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11-07-2010, 09:20 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by Morag I knows! I usually do...but it would be nice! A girl can dream
Maybe...but now that you mention it, there was a little thing between her and the coach!
Soph  x Quote:
Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L) great post  Thanks, Kerri! |
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11-08-2010, 03:51 AM
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| Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Janet Lynn Gordon Fifth Year | Werecats are people too! Reader of Fan Fictions
Hello Emily. This is what I get for waiting to comment. Sophie has already taken all the same thoughts I had as I read this, and expressed them very well. I especially agree with Bobby would do well in Hollywood. I think there won't be any getting drunk from the two of them. I think they walk into Bobbys office where he's working and see what (who) he's working on.  Of course, it's just a thought. I'll be watching for your next post to see what happens. |
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11-08-2010, 04:47 AM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by Connie Hello Emily. This is what I get for waiting to comment. Sophie has already taken all the same thoughts I had as I read this, and expressed them very well. I especially agree with Bobby would do well in Hollywood. I think there won't be any getting drunk from the two of them. I think they walk into Bobbys office where he's working and see what (who) he's working on.  Of course, it's just a thought. I'll be watching for your next post to see what happens.   You never know...  Thanks, Connie |
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11-08-2010, 01:29 PM
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| Mooncalf
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nice post...would like to read the next soon...
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11-08-2010, 04:27 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by harita nice post...would like to read the next soon... Thanks |
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11-09-2010, 05:36 AM
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| Streeler
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Jesse Thomasin Matthews Fifth Year |
Great chapter Emily....  PAMS!
PS Lauren was wondering if u or anyone might possibly jne
any names for the babies?
!Jesse!
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11-09-2010, 06:05 AM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by Jesse_Longbottom Great chapter Emily....  PAMS! Thanks, Jesse! Quote:
PS Lauren was wondering if u or anyone might possibly jne
any names for the babies?
Oooh, I'll totally come up with my faves and then PM them to you! |
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11-09-2010, 04:25 PM
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| Mooncalf
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Tilly C. Richards First Year | Bluejay | Potatopop! | SRS - Stupid Ravenclaw Syndrome I LOVED that chapter. So sweet...still hitting Bobby over the head.
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11-09-2010, 04:39 PM
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Originally Posted by LilyLunaGinnyPotter I LOVED that chapter. So sweet...still hitting Bobby over the head.  Thank you! |
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11-13-2010, 05:36 AM
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| Blast From the Past, Part One ♥ 2G FC| Narnian!| Fremione|Full Sail Girl ♥| Dramione| Shadowhunter!| Jesse ♥ New post time! “Er, is there a reason why we’re not just Apparating there?” Christelle asked after a few minutes of silent walking. “Because I don’t really want to leave my motorcycle here,” he replied with a chuckle. “Oh,” she said shortly. “You’re okay with that, right?” he asked nervously. “Oh, yeah, I’ve just never ridden one before,” she said quietly as she tried to will the sweat conforming on her hands to go away. He gave a small chuckle as they stopped in front of the sleek black bike. Christelle looked at it nervously as he watched her watching it. He put his hand on her lower back and guided her over to what she thought was a sure death trap. “Come on, I promise you’ll be fine,” he whispered. She stopped short, despite his hand leading her forward. “I don’t know,” she said, biting her lower lip. She looked up into his face and she saw the eagerness in his expression. “Umm, do I sit in the front or back?” she whispered. “The back,” Charlie replied happily. Christelle nodded slightly, gulped, and put her leg over the motorbike. He chuckled soundlessly as he sat down in front of her. He reached back to grab her hands and pull them around his waist and she complied. Her chin automatically went to rest on his shoulder as he revved the bike up.
Christelle screamed as the motorcycle lurched forward before lifting up in the air. “You didn’t tell me it was a flying motorcycle!” she accused in panic. “Oh, did I forget that part?” he laughed as she clutched him more tightly and buried her head in his neck. “You’re a bloody Keeper; this can’t scare you,” he said incredulously. “This is different from a broom and you know it,” she mumbled, her voice muffled from his skin. He laughed lightly as her nails dug into the patch of skin she had managed to find by his navel.
They landed nearly thirty minutes later with a not so soft thud. Christelle knew he had done it on purpose, so when their feet were safely planted on the ground, she smacked his arm. “What was that for?” he asked incredulously, though she could tell he wanted to laugh. “You know what,” she grumbled as she smoothed out her shorts. “Come on; I can tell you need a drink,” Charlie chuckled as he tugged on her hand and they started moving toward the pub. “Where are we?” Christelle asked timidly as she averted her eyes away from the drunken men, barely able to stand, on the corner that were watching her. She moved closer to Charlie, clutching his wrist. “You do realize that if they tried to make a move on you, you could just use your wand?” Charlie asked in bemusement as he took her hand in his and squeezed it gently. “Y-yes, I know,” she said nervously. It wasn’t necessarily that she was scared of them, just what they represented. What she’s tried to get away from for so long. And yet it continually followed her around wherever she went. She would never truly be free of her past. She involuntarily moved closer to him as the men whistled. Charlie’s eyes knitted in confusion but he didn’t object to the closeness. They hurried through the door and made for a back table. Charlie held up a two and the bartender nodded, sending two shots of something their way. Christelle eyed him suspiciously and he laughed. “What? So, I happen to be a regular here. Is that so bad?” Charlie asked innocently. “Hey, Charlie,” purred a skimpy bleach blonde woman with their drinks. She surreptitiously leaned toward Charlie, touching his shoulder as she smiled at him and placed the shots on the table. “Hi, Trixie,” Charlie smiled. “Keep ‘em coming, will you?” he asked sweetly. She nodded with a huge grin before turning to eye Christelle rudely. Charlie cleared his throat and Trixie straightened up and headed back to the bar. “A regular what, exactly?” Christelle muttered, though she couldn’t help the jealousy that bubbled up inside her. “So, are you dating anybody?” she asked conversationally. “Nope,” he grinned, popping his “p”. Christelle blushed slightly and quickly grabbed her shot of who knows what and downed it one, grimacing at the burn it caused in her throat.
They both studied each other for a long time until Christelle couldn’t take the silence anymore. “So… Ginny tells me you work with dragons?” she asked awkwardly. Charlie chuckled quietly. “Yep, it’s fun. I’ve always loved animals,” he added. “Me too, Care of Magical Creatures was always my favorite in school,” Christelle murmured. “So did you go to Hogwarts?” Charlie asked. “Nope, I went to Beauxbatons. I was one of the exchange students, I guess you could say,” she added. Charlie just nodded as she looked over towards the door. The men from outside were stumbling through it, looking for her. One spotted her and grinned stupidly, motioning to his friends. “Do you know them, by chance?” Charlie asked as he followed her gaze.
Christelle looked at the men more closely and realized that she did know them, well at least one of them. “I need to leave, Charlie," she whispered, going rigid. What do you think?
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11-13-2010, 07:38 AM
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| Streeler
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Uh-oh Emily is that one of her ex-boyfriends by any chance? This can't be good, but it will make for a good update *hint hint* as this one is making me curious and kinda anxious as to find out what Charlie will do to protect Christelle 
I know you JUST updated but I still wish for you to PAMS! why do You're stories have to be addicting?
In case you didn't catch on - I LOVED the post XD
!Jesse!
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11-13-2010, 08:00 AM
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| Mooncalf
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Tilly C. Richards First Year | Bluejay | Potatopop! | SRS - Stupid Ravenclaw Syndrome
Oh my gosh! Pams please!!!
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11-13-2010, 04:36 PM
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| Snidget
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Oh no is Bobby there? :O
I actually love Charlie so much  He is awesome!!! Dragons, motor-bike, Weasley -
Christelle and him are perfect (I really had to force my fingers to type this  )
K xx
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11-13-2010, 04:53 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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| ♥ 2G FC| Narnian!| Fremione|Full Sail Girl ♥| Dramione| Shadowhunter!| Jesse ♥ Quote:
Originally Posted by Jesse_Longbottom Uh-oh Emily is that one of her ex-boyfriends by any chance? You'll just hve to wait and see! Quote:
This can't be good, but it will make for a good update *hint hint* as this one is making me curious and kinda anxious as to find out what Charlie will do to protect Christelle  I'll post soon! Quote:
I know you JUST updated but I still wish for you to PAMS! why do You're stories have to be addicting?
 I didn't know they were... Quote:
In case you didn't catch on - I LOVED the post XD
Thanks, Jesse! Quote:
Originally Posted by LilyLunaGinnyPotter Oh my gosh! Pams please!!!  Thanks, Lily! I'll post soon! Quote:
Originally Posted by KatielovesHP Oh no is Bobby there? :O You'll just have to wait and see! Quote:
I actually love Charlie so much  He is awesome!!! Dragons, motor-bike, Weasley -
Christelle and him are perfect (I really had to force my fingers to type this  )
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11-13-2010, 07:38 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sophie Potter First Year | Ruadh gu brath! | | Friendships are better than normal Ships
Hey Emily! 
This was such a cute post! Quote:
Originally Posted by emilyblack “Umm, do I sit in the front or back?” she whispered.  thats so cute! Quote:
One whistled at her and the others laughed as she moved closer to Charlie, clutching his wrist.
She could always hold his hand...just saying. It might make they losers back off too! Quote:
She surreptitiously made sure her cleavage showed more than necessary when she bent over more than necessary to place the shots on the table.
She nodded with a huge grin before turning to eye Christelle rudely. Charlie cleared his throat and Trixie straightened up and headed back to the bar.
Oh I have words to describe people like her...... Quote: “Nope,” he grinned, popping his “p”.
Hehee thats cute! I love it when people do that. Quote: “I need to leave, Charlie," she whispered, going rigid.
Don't worry, Charlie will hex them then whisk her away in his motercycle
Great post Emily. I actually LOVE this story! And Charlie! 
PAMS! I can't wait for the next bit!
Soph  x
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11-13-2010, 08:36 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by Morag Hey Emily! 
This was such a cute post! Hey, Sophie! Thank you! Quote:
She could always hold his hand...just saying. It might make they losers back off too!  I have a feeling you're going to be disappointed later on... Quote:
Oh I have words to describe people like her......
Me too, Sophie, me too. Quote:
Hehee thats cute! I love it when people do that.
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Don't worry, Charlie will hex them then whisk her away in his motercycle  You have a wild imagination, my dear. Quote:
Great post Emily. I actually LOVE this story!
Thanks, Sophie! You say it like you didn't think you would... |
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11-14-2010, 01:13 PM
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|  X-treme Horcrux Slayer! Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sophie Potter First Year | Ruadh gu brath! | | Friendships are better than normal Ships Quote:
Originally Posted by emilyblack  I have a feeling you're going to be disappointed later on...  UH OH.... What do you have planned? Quote:  You have a wild imagination, my dear. Your not the first person to tell me that Quote: You say it like you didn't think you would... Emily I wouldn't expect anything less fro you. I was only trying to get across how much I love your story. Your such a great writter and you never dissapoint your readers. I hope I haven't hurt your feelings! 
Soph x
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11-14-2010, 02:36 PM
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| Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8)
Dun dun dunnnnnnnn !!!!!! PAMS !!!! Great post Emily
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11-14-2010, 04:17 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by Morag UH OH.... What do you have planned? Quote:
Your not the first person to tell me that Quote:
Emily I wouldn't expect anything less fro you. I was only trying to get across how much I love your story. Your such a great writter and you never dissapoint your readers. I hope I haven't hurt your feelings! 
Soph x
Not at all! I was just kidding with you! And thank you! Quote:
Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L) Dun dun dunnnnnnnn !!!!!! PAMS !!!! Great post Emily   Thanks, Kerri! |
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