Aww. Your so sweet.

Well, she seems interesting, too. And I like not so nice people, anyways. -cough-

Weeeell, I'll be waiting for you when your back. -clings-

Whaaaaaaat! Nooo, Maxie, you're not allowed to go anywhere! =[
Boo! =[
That was a great chapter, though. But where is my Lucius? Can't wait for moreeee. I like this evil charrie.

Awesomeness!!
Luffed it!
Jess

I thought this was awesome!!! I wish the whole thing could be posted. I want to finish this story... Write a whole book...I will buy it.

I posted this in my other thread but, you know, I feel pretty much the same about TSRTD, so I'm posting it here, too.

And updating. ^_________^

WB YOU! =D


Can't wait.

You know I love you, don't you? <3

Her footsteps were brisk but soundless, her almond-shaped silver eyes evident in the black of her cloak and hood. Jenna White stepped into the corridor, coming to a halt in front of the second door. She raised her hand to knock and –

“Come in.”

With a slight smile, Jenna let her hand fall without knocking. The door opened of its own accord, and she walked in, her eyes adjusting to the sudden dimness of the room.

It was a circular little thing, this room, with high walls, no ventilation and little furniture. Almost like him, she could not help thinking. He was ambitious, his power far-reaching, but he was also narrow - narrow of mindset about life, narrow of mindset about its mysteries.

Lord Voldemort stood by a table, leaning against it in a lazy, negligent way, but she knew him too well to think he was not at his most alert. A man she did not know stood besides him, only his face visible underneath the black hood pushed up his head.

All that black always got to her.

“It’s hot,” she said, making a face and pushing back her hood. “Do these cloaks have to be so black? Can’t we wear, like, white stuff in summer?”

The man next to Voldemort looked up, doubt in his eyes as he waited for the Dark Lord’s reaction. The Dark Lord had said she was his special weapon, this Jenna, the best of all his new servants, one of his most accomplished death eaters - and yet, despite his word, she barely looked it. He could see her face clearly, now that she had pushed back the hood; and it was undoubtedly fairer than any he had ever seen before. The eyes were wide - haunting. Almond-shaped; silver.

No, indeed, she did not look a death eater.

Voldemort’s eyes swept Jenna, his gaze expressionlessly severe. “This is the man I wanted you to meet, Jenna. Tom Redwork,” he said quietly. “Tom – Jenna White. The pride of my new recruits.”

He said the last sentence with a strange sort of relish, the kind he showed at a victory long awaited, or when a dangerous enemy fell. Tom's eyes caught Jenna's, and he nodded. The pride of the Dark Lord’s new recruits? But she seemed so young, so very young. So.. innocent.

So hauntingly innocent.

“I’m looking forward to working with you, Miss White,” he said finally.

“I look forward to working with myself, too,” Jenna grinned. “And Tom? The name’s Jenna, not Miss White.”

Tom smiled, a little uncertainly. She spoke freely, much more freely than any other death eater he had seen or worked with. And that, too, in the Dark Lord’s presence. What was it that made her different? Was it the style? Or the lurking, lingering innocence? How could someone with her appearance have killed?

“Is that all, Master?” he asked, tearing himself away from his thoughts.

Lord Voldemort nodded, his handsome face both hidden in, and outlined by, the shadows. Seconds later, Tom Redwork was pulling his hood down his face, and fastening back his cloak. Jenna watched him leave, her mind wandering to Wormtail.

There was still half an hour to go before the time she had given him ran out.

Lucius.

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Whaaaaaaat! Nooo, Maxie, you're not allowed to go anywhere! =[

=[ I missed you LOADS! *doesn't let go*

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But where is my Lucius?

At the top of this post. xDDD

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Awesomeness!!
Luffed it!

Thanks, sweetie. Back from your trip?

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I thought this was awesome!!! I wish the whole thing could be posted. I want to finish this story... Write a whole book...I will buy it.

Whoa, thanks.
I really hope you enjoy TSRTD, it's awesome to have you here, luff.
=]

Yes I'm back!!!!
I'm soo glad you are back! I missed you lotsss!!!
*hugs you tightly**you faint**i cry**draco comes and throws a bucket of water in your face**he walks away** you are up*
Amazing post!!
I've been missing your writing!!
Jess

Awww, thanks bebeh. I missed you too. <3

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*hugs you tightly**you faint**i cry**draco comes and throws a bucket of water in your face**he walks away** you are up*

Draco. OHMYGOSH DRACO! xDD

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Amazing post!!
I've been missing your writing!!

Thanks, hun. I've been missing yours!

I am finally here!

I KNOW I've bin missin' in action around here an' the truth is, I saw this a while back. SO SORREE! I'mma bad reader, I know.

Have still to read, but the story sounds awesome.

Love,
~~Jay~~

You're late. =/

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I KNOW I've bin missin' in action around here an' the truth is, I saw this a while back. SO SORREE! I'mma bad reader, I know.

Awww, it's okay cuz. *hughug* Offline first, always.

I'm just glad you're finally here.

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Have still to read, but the story sounds awesome.

Thank you. ^^

Are you going to post MaxieluffYAY!??!!
I miss your writing in this story!
More please?!?
Jess

I'd like to start by saying ... wow, there was a lot of deaths and stuff in the first like 20 some posts of your story and that was just from your readers so I'm very excited about reading your story ... I mean, seriously, there's THAT much action in just the comments ... wow. *is awed*

But I've gotten a few free moments and now I can read your story, yay! So ... uhm, did I mention I love all the really strong female characters? Seriously, wow. I also love the whole thing with Andra belonging to this elite group of wizarding world people ... the rich always fascinate me, I wouldn't want to belong to such a sad, repressive class, but dang don't they make for the most interesting story subjects?

And I loved Victoria's dress ... *sighs* So in conclusion ...

Victoria Glade is my hero any woman who punctuates her statements and presses her advantage and just all around dictates merely by standing up, is A-oh-freakin'-kay in my book. Oh, and post 58 is my next post to read. Don't mind that it's just a reminder to me.

But seriously, wow cool. I'm liking your story Maxie, but ... Wormtail is such a coward I don't understand why that lady *hates his short term memory* would risk her life helping his sorry wormtail? Color me puzzled dear, that's a kind of chartreuse ... no?

*fires the cannons for high fashion* I hope you wrote the part where Andra and Victoria go shopping next ... *squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee* I love shopping ...



I shall return.

-hughughug-

Aww, of course I'm going to post, bebeh. Later today or tomorrow, I promise. Is that better? ^^

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I'd like to start by saying ... wow, there was a lot of deaths and stuff in the first like 20 some posts of your story and that was just from your readers so I'm very excited about reading your story ... I mean, seriously, there's THAT much action in just the comments ... wow. *is awed*

My readers rock. =D

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So ... uhm, did I mention I love all the really strong female characters? Seriously, wow.

I love strong women. <3 Well, most women ARE strong, but there are just some BAD people who think the opposite. -pokes them-

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I also love the whole thing with Andra belonging to this elite group of wizarding world people ... the rich always fascinate me, I wouldn't want to belong to such a sad, repressive class, but dang don't they make for the most interesting story subjects?

Indeed, they do. ^^

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Victoria Glade is my hero any woman who punctuates her statements and presses her advantage and just all around dictates merely by standing up, is A-oh-freakin'-kay in my book.

xDDD

Though I'm not sure if I myself like Victoria that much. ={

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Oh, and post 58 is my next post to read. Don't mind that it's just a reminder to me.

Awww, alright hun. <3

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I'm liking your story Maxie, but ... Wormtail is such a coward I don't understand why that lady *hates his short term memory* would risk her life helping his sorry wormtail? Color me puzzled dear, that's a kind of chartreuse ... no?

You mean Jenna, right? That's her..... nature. If she knew Voldemort would just finish off Peter, she wouldn't help Peter. But she knows he's only going to torture Peter, and she hates torture, so she's helping him. She's very.... dual. But not in the sense you would think. -shrug-

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*fires the cannons for high fashion* I hope you wrote the part where Andra and Victoria go shopping next ... *squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee* I love shopping ...

I did write that part, but I didn't go into too many details. =p Not a big fan of shopping here, I even design my own clothes so I don't have to go shop for them. =p

Will be waiting for my Ottsy.<3

Maxo!

Honestly babe, you need to post. *supa poke*

I'mma waitin'!!!

Love,
~~Jay~~

GUYS!

I'm SO sorry for the long, long wait. I've been.... busy. [Yeah, I know that's not really a valid excuse for not updating this.] But updating now, so please be good to me.

Iloveyouall. <3
Like, a WHOLE lot.

A diamond ring upon his finger, and a diamond pin in the topmost button-hole of his expensive coat, Lucius Malfoy was certainly a sight to see as, wending his way between tables, he finally took a seat in front of the dark-skinned beauty who was carelessly ignoring the many people stealing looks at her.

“Bella,” he said, raising her hand to his lips.

“Lucius,” she returned, half haughtily.

The unknowing onlooker would think they were meeting for the first time, perhaps for some high-and-mighty business. Nothing could be more wrong a thought: They were friends of old, friends of old who had grown to love and cherish each other, and yet maintain a strange sort of distance.

– A distance that disappeared the moment their trio, their dream team, was completed by the addition of Jenna White.

“I miss Jenna’s presence tonight,” Bellatrix said, as a waiter swooped down upon them to ask what they would like to have, and Lucius filled him in – he did not need to ask Bellatrix, because he knew her too well, because he knew her moods, knew her choices and knew her likes and dislikes.

“She is one of a kind, no doubt,” he said silkily, as the waiter scurried away. “It seems as if I have known her forever.”

“I, for one, have known her for long,” Bellatrix said. She had known Jenna for four years, now – known Jenna since the girl had only been twelve years of age, and stumbled into Bellatrix on a holiday. Their bond had been immediate – their friendship was too strong for breakage, now. “I think she was to meet the Dark Lord, tonight.”

“It is a pity the two of us can not talk to her,” Lucius remarked. “I still do not understand why the Dark Lord has told us to stay away from her. But I guess he will have had his reasons. He always does, does he not?”

“Indeed.”

His hand was on the table now, and the diamond ring shone in the light. A passing girl looked at him, seemingly unable to wrench her eyes away once she had done so, and Bellatrix rolled her eyes. “The fangirling is beginning, Lucius,” she said, with a slight smile.

Lucius inclined his head in response. “I thank you for informing me, Bella.”

Updated, love.

Hope you enjoy it. <3

The fangirling is begining!

of course it iss.
MAXSHIEEE, i apologise now, that i missed your posts.
*sniffle*
but im back. tuhstayy.
hopefully.

i wub you.
buttt. i have one little nitpick.
-->im not in it <--

Hahahaha that part was funnayy!!
Thank you for posting MaxieluffYAY, I had missed this fantastic story of yours! =DD
This chapter was a very good chapter to wait for!
Can we have a longer one next time though??? *begs* xDD
I luffed it!!
PAMS!!!
Jess

I know, bebeh, I SO know.

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MAXSHIEEE, i apologise now, that i missed your posts.
*sniffle*
but im back. tuhstayy.
hopefully.

-pokes the hopefully-

And it's okay, luff, it doesn't matter now that you're here again.
But of course, I missed youu. <3

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i wub you.
buttt. i have one little nitpick.
-->im not in it <--

I wub you too. <3
--> Wait for a bit. xDD <--

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Hahahaha that part was funnayy!!

Glad to know you liked it, luff. ^^

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Thank you for posting MaxieluffYAY, I had missed this fantastic story of yours! =DD
This chapter was a very good chapter to wait for!

Thanks, hun. Hopefully, I'll post more frequently in the recent future.

=DD

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an we have a longer one next time though??? *begs* xDD

Awww. *cling* The updates are actually going to get a bit shorter as we go along. But if I post more frequently, I think that would balance things. What say my Jessserz?

Ohh noo!!
Ohhhhhh okay!
Well that's fine with me, if it's more frequently that would totally balance things out!
You Rock MaxieluffYAY!!
Jess

I really hope it does, luff.

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You Rock MaxieluffYAY!!

Awww, thank you. But my Jesserz rocks more'er. <3

-gives you a plate of cookies-