well i guess this is my only poem that will be accepted so here it is. if any1 reads it and has a good name, then tell me, because i have no ideas. ty




As you walk away i see your hair fall.
Just like the leaves off a tree in this beautiful fall,
But the seasons will change from winter to spring,
Where a new chapter of my life is about to begin
With the blooming flowers of new,
Also blooms my new love for you,
Like the rose of my eyes you can keep me occupied for hours at a time,
Just getting lost in your dark brown eyes
Yet all roses have thorns,
And i wish i could get rid of your thorns,
So i could just get close to you
Alas there are two trusts,
Skin deep which you and i share,
And emotion deep which is the hardest thing to earn,
But some day i wish to gain your emotional trust,
Because for you i urn
I love you,
You love me,
We were just meant to be
But for now we are best friends
And i wish for that to change
For it is you that i need
And only you that i want

Great Kev! I loved it.

Hopefully your others will follow soon, you write very well.
It's very sweet. :flowersmile:
Please continue I enjoy reading your poems.

awww Kitty your poems always get to me! :wub:
Ok ive got a name how about My love for you blossums?

yeah just decided to write another poem so yeah.


When you look at me eye to eye
It makes me fell like I want to die
Because when you look like this you are about to cry
And it just makes me ask why o why
For I can’t be this special guy
You say that you wish it to be true
But it just can’t be me and you
For in good time u will see
That you aren’t suppose to be with me
What you think is love right now
Will later make you just think wow
How could you love this guy
Could the heart be telling a lie
But I must follow the heart
And we must never part
Even if you wish it to be you and me
I will just have to wait and see
For now my heart tells me to go
But my mind just can’t let me do so
I am me and you are you
We are parts of a different two
So for now do not look so blue
Because in time my heat will be true
And I will be able to love you
I just can’t wait till this time
When I will be able to call you mine

Luverly Kitty.
Your poems put a nice warm feeling in this cold evil heart of mine.

The boy sits in his bed wishing for more
But also wishing that he wasn’t so poor
He once had a chance to become very rich
Yet threw it away right to the ditch
Now he wishes he had never done so
Because his heart then took a near fatal blow
The girl that he once hugged and kissed
Is now the person he knew he would miss
He left her for someone new
Someone who only made him blue
Then his heart turned very cold
And soon it started to grow mold
Till the faithful day when he saw that girl
Who was prettier than the most beautiful pearl
Yet alas she was not alone
She was with a mad who looked like a cone
I couldn’t approach her now
Not when I look like a sow
Yet I didn’t need to say hi
She looked at me eye to eye
Then she smiled and stated to cry
At this cue I walk away
Hoping to never she her again this way

Poor moldy sow.
*gives him a :turnip: *

Nice one Kitty.

In the days before
Before her heart was sore
She had always wished for more
But now that’s past
She knew it couldn’t last
Because she found some1 who wish to have yet she couldn’t
Because she new he wouldn’t
Even want a girl like her
But that special person is to love her once again,
Just he did way back then.
And her love for him steadily grew,
As it became more pure and became more true,
But yet she knew he was no longer around,
Now was her true love ever to again be found?
But deep in her heart her love was still true,
The love one over, and she died too.
Now they meet now again
Life in heaven that is about to begin
The love was reborn,
And her broken heart is no longer torn.
Happiness now filled her life, and she became a wife.
The angels sang,
The bells rang,
The love she had kept inside her,
She has now let out.
For now she had no reason to pout
She had her love in her arms
And he would never cause her harm
This love was never-ending,
It was so perfect, never ever bending.
For she felt so right
When she held him tight
She would never let them get in a fight
She could never let go,
She wouldn't let go,
This love was beyond what she could ever know.
And she said to him,” there’s nothing I could ever do,
To stop myself from thinking of you."
He replied with a kiss of love,
As they listened to the love song of a nearby dove.

thanx to dawn on the assist...we may tweak it a bit later but o well

Thats bootyful kitty.
I don't think I felt like that with any of my 5 hudbands.

You dyed your hair
Yet I didn’t care
I don’t care how you look
It was your heart and mind that I took
Even though your look is new
I still love you
This is true
You are just as beautiful as before
And this is what I truly adore
Beauty does not come from the hair
About the hair I do not care
I see that beauty that is within
Yet I do not know where to begin
You can give so much care
To all those who are there
Even if it is hard to bare
You help all
Making sure they do not fall
These are just a few
Of why I truly love you


Far away Is where you stay
Yet I have something I wish to say
When we met we talked like old friends
Just trying to tie up all loose ends
Yet as the days go by
A little part of me starts to die
This is so
Because I was scared you’d say no
A friend soon asked
Yet I had no answer, so I had to ask
You said you didn’t know
And at this my heart sank low
You asked what I wanted
And I said I didn’t know
And at this I thought I’d lose you so
When I thought it was to late
You said we should date
So here we are going out
And I have no reason to ever pout
For when I talk to you I wish to shout
So now you no what happened to me
And how I became a we

more new poems...2 dif ones

pppp

Good Kitty *pets*

You talk words good.

Aww Kitty your poems are as sweet as you!
I wub you so MUCH :wub:

HI my name is mercy black at my friend Jdragon's house an i must say ur poems r awesome an bootiful guapo(handsome) ly bootiful

Hey JDragon here, the poems r gr8, mercy also says 2 post more!

in my dreams is where we meet
and these dreams are o so sweet
now if we could truely meet
i would give you a special treat
my treat is love from me to you
promising to be forever true
for in the years of late
i have looked for perfection in my date
yet perfection is you
but alas who are you
are you real or just a wish
someone i wish to hold and kiss
and who i would wish to never miss
so untill i find the perfection that is you
i will wait and do something new
for time has no meaning to me
waiting for you and me become we
but when we finally comes along
everyone will hear my joyish song
i will sing it to the heavens up and beyond
untill all have heard my beutiful song
yet for now i am all alne
cold inside right down to my bones

Purrty. :flowersmile:

ok lets see you have a magnificant talent your writting is pristine. I really think you should enter your poems into a poetry contest. but make sure it is legent first um www.poeticpower.com is a good one I was able to get published and I got a book so that one checks out ok. Um I just am so amazed I wish we had guys at my school that could write poetry. Great Job. Keep it up!!! you get flowers :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile:

geez all u people tellin me how great my poems are and what not. i write them to write and get stuff off my mind. if someone elser wants to send them in under your name knock yourself out. but as for me i shall just write.

i finally realized something today...i am trying to write to escape my feelings. so for now i am done writing my poetry might return and it might not but for now i am done. thank you all for all of ur support, just keep looking for me and i might return.

aw!!! ashley!! i love your poems. i hope you decide to keep writing them!!!

ok right now i dont feel like typein out all my new poems and stuff into the site, so if you want to read my poems give me your e-mali, ill send all my poems i typed out, and when i do decide to send out the other poems you'll be the first to see them.

How wonderfully sweet tonks. Your poems make me feel all warm inside.

You have a message , and its hard to let it out without going over the top , but you do a good job of going about doing it!!!! Great Going!

your poems are fabolus!!!
i love them so much!
i like the way u write them...u fallow ur own rulles for it!
i do the same...but i have yet to post ne of my poems yet...just my fanfic...(in the end)

lol
i hope that u'll keep writing!!!