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04-14-2006, 10:09 PM
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| Imp
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Godrics Hollow is the place to be!!
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That fic was fab...jes u right so well Jk watch out!!!
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04-26-2006, 04:40 PM
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| Chizpurfle
Join Date: May 2005 Location: Cyberspace.
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| Kitty Momma Rachel's Brain Twin Last Update: 03-15-2006
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05-06-2006, 01:22 AM
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| Chizpurfle
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05-06-2006, 04:15 PM
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| Bother bother Puffskein
Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: on a Vacation from Real...
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| New Fic! HEY GUYS! So, I know i've been bad and haven't added to my fics lately, but I had AP's to study for which I kinda had to do well on so that took prescedence, but those are over now and I have some really good news: READY? ....Are you really ready? haha - of course you are: I got an idea in my head for a new H/Dr fic today and I started it before the idea could leave my head so I put it up and it should show up in Grimmauld Place very soon! It's titled: 'All the World's a Stage' and I think you'll all like it! A link will be posted as soon as I get one, but in the mean time, you can check if it's up and vie for the first post spot - c'mon, you know you want to! LOL wow...that was fun to do! lol hope you guys like the fic. I'll add here soon, now that my AP's are over and then I'll continuing working on this new story!
hope you like it!
~Jes xo
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05-06-2006, 04:55 PM
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| Dog Star Owner Billywig
Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: kissing posters of E
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| New fic? Seriously? YAYYYYY!
Oh boy, I'll go look for it right now, even though it might not be up. Is it in the Restricted Section? |
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05-06-2006, 06:34 PM
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| Bother bother Puffskein
Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: on a Vacation from Real...
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05-25-2006, 02:44 PM
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| Lobalug
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Arkansas
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05-27-2006, 07:49 AM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: *thinking where should i go*maybe today go North Pole and South Pole on the next day
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Hope you post soon.
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05-29-2006, 04:33 PM
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| Potterwatch! Momma Chizpurfle
Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Yarn Shop
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| Viva Buymoria! Love you Twin! Quote:
Originally Posted by Ozzy Last Update: 03-15-2006 Quote:
Originally Posted by Ozzy Reactivated by Request: 05-05-2006 Back it goes. Last Update: 03-15-2006.
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06-09-2006, 03:35 PM
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| Potterwatch! Momma Chizpurfle
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| Viva Buymoria! Love you Twin!
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06-09-2006, 11:00 PM
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| Bother bother Puffskein
Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: on a Vacation from Real...
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BAH! i'll add soon - I promise...i kinda have to by the 15th or they'll shut it down...and that can't happen!
soooo, i'll post more soon - new posts on my other 2 to keep you busy until then
~JEs xo
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06-10-2006, 05:36 PM
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| Bother bother Puffskein
Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: on a Vacation from Real...
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| Finallyyyy!
hey kiddies...ok well I realized that I have been possibly the WORST author EVER because I left this for like, legit, 3 months but you know busy life can get!!
This is the last chapter but I don't have time to put the whole thing up like I usually do I'm going to have to do it in parts (grrr) if I want to save the fic from elimination!!
you guys have been awesome - thank you for bearing with me, it's been a lot of fun..I can't believe the fic is almost over!!
chapter seven: tedius trials and hollywood endings (not to give it away or anything...lol) Tension was thick in the air the morning of Draco’s trial. He sat uncomfortably behind the slim table in his heavy suit and dress shoes. They had finally allowed him a proper shower and he knew he looked great, just like his old self, but he had spent so much time locked up in his grimy jail cell that he wasn’t used to these new-but-actually-old clothes. His foot was twitching under the table and he was fidgeting with anything he could find: pens, paper, his own hands – anything to keep his mind off of what was about to happen. Every time he looked over at Hermione for support, she wouldn’t meet his eyes. She must still be upset about that stupid kiss… he thought to himself. God, I am such a jerk! He couldn’t help but look at her, though. Hermione looked more stunning today than he had ever seen her. She had on a pinstriped woman’s suit with a matching skirt that fell only to her knees. Her perfectly sculpted and browned legs jutted out and his eyes roved down to her pumps, black and shiny. He sighed deeply and shook his head – she was gorgeous. The room was silent except for the occasional cough or rustling of papers. As ever second went by, Draco became more and more uncomfortable. He started worrying about the evidence they had, and whether the witnesses would actually pull through. He began sweating as he stressed that he might not win this and then what would he do? Rot in hell on earth for the rest of his life. Draco didn’t know if he could take another day in that cell, let alone the rest of his life. Finally Hermione looked over at him. She saw him fidgeting and sweating in his seat and lightly touched his shoulder. “Draco?” she said, softly. He twitched at her touch because he had not expected it. Draco looked over at her, taking in her large brown eyes and glowing skin. He nodded that he was listening and tried to reply, but all that came out was a deep guttural noise that resembled someone seriously in need of the Heimlich maneuver. “You need to calm down; we cannot win this if you act like you have something to hide, I know that you’re innocent, but if you’re twitching throughout the trial, the jury might see it differently and both of our ***** are on the line, ok?” she told him in a crisp, serious voice. He stared at her for a moment and then blinked. He took in deep breaths of air and sighed. “Yeah, ok…” “You’re going to get through this and you’re going to be great!” Hermione whispered to him, just as the door in the corner opened. And just like that, all of Draco’s worry disappeared; her words had that effect on him. He took a breath, looked around the room and smiled. “Everyone rise for the honorable Judge Jameson!” an armed police officer announced. Hermione looked over at Draco and gave his hand a quick squeeze. “Are you ready?” she asked, as they got to their feet. He looked over at her before replying,”Let’s do this!” After a long string of witnesses and testimonies from both sides, Draco was finally called up to the stand. He raised his right hand and placed his left on the Bible, just as he had always seen done in the movies and on t.v. It was slightly surreal for him to be standing there in front of a whole crowd of people, a judge, a jury and Hermione copying their moves, but he was clam and confident. The witnesses had done their jobs perfectly and Hermione told him that it was definitely going well. She had worked with this judge before and she knew what every head tilt and scribble on her notepad really meant. The judge gave the prosecution the signal to go ahead and they began their cross-examination. Draco remained cool-headed and answered well, giving just the facts and all the facts. He knew that he was innocent, and it must have shown on his face and in his voice, because when the lawyer was done questioning him and it became Hermione’s turn to ask her client some things, she made sure to give him a big smile to let him know he was doing well. Draco swelled inside, but secretly under his little podium, he was crossing his fingers and praying that the judge would finally set him free. ok, I'll try and add more later...bear in mind that I know nothing about courtrooms or anything like that besides like, Judge Judy and Legally Blonde...lol
sorry it took so long..hope it was worth it!!!
~Jes xoxo
p.s. REMEMBER: this is not the end..I still have to finish the chapter!
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06-10-2006, 06:21 PM
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| Bother bother Puffskein
Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: on a Vacation from Real...
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| the endddd and the last piece The judge stood up and everyone in the room followed suit. She looked down at both sides before speaking, “Thank you, defense and thank you prosecution for your help today. The jury will now go into the deliberation room and decided on a verdict. This is a long process, so please feel free to stretch your legs. We will reconvene in one hour to see if the jury is ready with a decision. Thank you.” She stepped down from her seat and walked out through the corner door she had come in from. Draco let out a big sigh and slumped back in his seat. This was it; it was all over now…all he could do was wait. A large clock ticked up on the wall. Draco watched it, hearing the seconds tick by, lulling him into a daydream-like-state. “Draco?” Hermione’s voice and touch awoke him from his stupor and he looked up at her. “Yeah?” he replied quickly. “I just wanted to say well done and congratulations; you survived one of man’s most grueling tests and you did very well,” she was smiling at him confidently, as though she already knew the outcome. How can she be so sure that we won? Draco wondered to himself. But he just smiled back, “Yeah…yes! Thank-you…and Thanks for all of your help – you’re the best lawyer I could have asked for!” he told her, grinning. “Yeah, well, you know…it’s kinda my job,” she whispered back, and she hit him lightly on the shoulder. “Well, you’re very good at what you do. Excuse me, now, I’m going to get a drink of water – you heard the judge, it’s a long wait!” he told her. Hermione smiled and moved to let him inch out from behind the table. They may have let him clean up, but he was still cuffed at the hands and feet, which made it very hard to move around. Despite this, they had still felt the need to equip him with a police officer, just in case Draco decided to make a hobble for it. Hermione turned and watched him move slowly towards the big, oak doors and out into the hallway. “Jesus,” she whispered to herself. “We better win this.” After Draco got his sip of water, he decided to take a trip to the bathroom. His guard followed him to the door of the stall, where he waited for Draco to do his business. What a life…Draco thought to himself as he zipped his pants and flushed the toilet. He washed his hand and slashed come water on his face to wake himself up. Draco looked himself squarely in the mirror and gave one last silent prayer. “Hey, do you mind if I just stand over on this wall for a few minutes? I’ve been sitting in there a while…” Draco asked his officer. The man grunted and nodded his head as a yes. Draco shuffled to the wall and leaned up against it. It felt good to stretch his legs, at least as much as was humanly possible in those cuffs. Almost as soon as Draco closed his eyes, he was asleep, dreaming of life before this awful mess. He saw Camilla’s beautiful face smiling down at him, and he felt truly happy for the first time in a long time. Draco felt a tapping on his shoulder and opened his eyes. It was his guard. “Excuse me, Mr. Malfoy,” he said in his low, rough voice. “It’s time to go back in now.” Draco nodded and stood up straight. He had no idea he had been out long. He straightened his suit and followed the officer back into the courtroom. Everyone remained standing as the Judge and jury filed back into the room from opposite sides of the room. Draco stood behind his table, anxiously awaiting his fate. “Now that we have heard all of the evidence, jury, have you had time to deliberate and come to a decision?” the judge asked the panel of men and women. One man on the end stood up and replied, “Yes, ma’am.” She nodded, “Very well then. What do you rule?” “In the case of Draco Malfoy vs. Cambridge County, this jury has ruled,” he paused, as if to create an air of drama seen only on daytime television. Draco cursed him for this wait. “Guilty.” The word dropped on Draco like a bomb. He looked around at Hermione, helplessly. She touched his shoulder, and trying to calm him explained that the judge still needed to- “In this case of Malfoy vs. Cambridge, I agree with the jury’s decision of guilty on all charges,” the judge showed no emotion as she passed the sentence. “Hermione!” Draco just about screamed. Officers were swarming around them, trying to take Draco back into custody. Hermione just stood there, watching him with tears in her eyes. “I’m sorry Draco...there’s nothing…” she whispered, and he fought against the guards holding him back to try and get to her. Draco had been dragged to the front of room by the time the scream went out. “NO!” everyone stopped and looked around to see a brown-eyed man in a crisp suit pushing his sunglasses onto his head as he stands to face the mass of people. “No,” he repeats. “Sir, what are you-“ he cut the judge off with a look as he placed his sunglasses into the breast pocket of his jacket and moved slowly towards the front of the courtroom. As he passed Draco, he gave him a look straight in the eyes, whispered, “I’m so sorry,” and kept walking. The man turned to face the room; everyone’s eyes were on him. “I can’t see this man taken away for a crime that he didn’t commit. I can’t see this, wonderful, caring man fall for the sins of others. For my sins,” he said loudly for everyone to hear. “Jared? What-“ Draco asked, but Jared just gave him a look. “I gotta do this, man.” He sighed and continued. “I did it: I killed Camilla Malfoy, because I was jealous of this man. I hereby confess to the crime, and accept the consequences of my actions,” he told the judge, turning to face her. She was silent for a moment, her lips pursed as she surveyed him. Then she turned to the guards. “Officers, take this man into custody for the rape and murder of Mrs. Camilla Malfoy.” The men let go of Draco and moved towards Jared. The judge turned to look at Draco. “Mr. Malfoy, it seems you are free to go.” She even gave him a smile, as if to say she was sorry for the huge mistake they almost made. Despite all the sadness and anger he was feeling, Draco was also elated at his innocence. He turned to Hemrione, who ran over to him. “Oh my God!” she screamed. “I know!” he replied. They stared at each other for a few seconds before Draco finally broke the silence. “So…can I kiss you now?” he asked, coking an eyebrow. “You better!” she almost squeal. And Draco, still in his handcuffs, cupped Hermione’s face in his hands and pulled her to him. He kissed her passionately, not caring who might be watching. When they broke apart, Hermione was breathing heavily. Draco looked at her and grinned. “What?” she asked. “Well, if I didn’t know any better, Miss Granger, I’d say you were a woman in love!” he said. She smiled back at him slyly and kissed him again. “Guilty as charged,” she whispered in his ear and he smiled. Then she threw her arms around him and he lifted her off the ground. As he let her down, Draco looked right into her eyes as he told her, “I love you, Hermione.” She looked right back at him as she said, “I love you, too.” THE END!! hope y'all liked it and it was too corny! lol
keep reading my other fics, and you guys were awesome readers! thank you sooo much!
love love love
~Jes xoxo
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06-12-2006, 01:41 AM
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| Dog Star Owner Billywig
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| THAT WAS SO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Like, omg. I almost died when the judge said he was guilty. Lucky Jared finally came to his senses, that stupid murderer. The ending wasn't corny. SOOOOO awesome, Jessikins. Love ya,
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06-12-2006, 12:46 PM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: *thinking where should i go*maybe today go North Pole and South Pole on the next day
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It's the end...
how could he be guilty?!!?
Luckily Jared turn himself in...
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06-12-2006, 08:20 PM
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| Jarvey
Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Canada
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oh my gosh! i have to agree with Amie that i was like...choking when the judge said guilty! im like WHAT!?!?! and of course they would kiss! it was just meant to be...*sighs* lol
Laurennxox
wow, i was gunna say pams...awww
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06-16-2006, 05:09 PM
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| Jarvey
Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: In A Book....;)
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this is one of the shortess FF I've read but one of the best to that was awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and totally not corny!! it was romantic lol
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06-24-2006, 01:42 AM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: wishing i was somewhere else..
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*round of applause* very good!!!!
*Danielle*
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