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01-13-2011, 08:13 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Awe, that was awesome! Lily is a very special Potter, as Katie's already said. I loved the post, and the story and I can't wait to see the Epilogue! You did an awesomely amazing job, Kerri! Congrats on the story!
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01-14-2011, 12:33 AM
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| Gnome
Join Date: May 2010 Location: your closet MWAHAHA
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Septimus "Sep" Galen Fourth Year |
That. Was. Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Omg i cant beleive its over!!
Lily saved the day!! Whoohoo!!
Cant wait for the epilogue!!
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01-14-2011, 06:31 AM
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| Dugbog
Join Date: Jan 2011 Location: Privet drive
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Kieth Beadles First Year |
im really glad neville got his love of his life now. if u didnt put hayley in the story , neville might be a loner.  how sad,
that was amazing.
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01-14-2011, 07:08 PM
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|  X-treme Horcrux Slayer! Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sophie Potter First Year | Ruadh gu brath! | | Friendships are better than normal Ships
Kerri. This was amazing!!!
Its great to actually read the post after hearing so much about it.
Thank You! 
Lilly is so cute 
They can finally be a family. I'm so happy  You've made my day 
Great Post Dear. Can wait for the Epilogue 
Soph xx
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01-14-2011, 08:06 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Scotland
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8)
Thank you every one for the comments! If you like my stories drop by the security vault and read my story Watching in silence 16+ or my joined story with KatielovesHP Giving up 16+ I would be very greatful if you read them and I'm sure Katie would be too  And thank you soo much for putting up with me through out this full story. It's been Awesome! The Epilouge will be up soon
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01-17-2011, 06:58 AM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Florida
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Janet Lynn Gordon Fifth Year | Werecats are people too! Reader of Fan Fictions
Hello Kerri. So sorry I'm late commenting. Loved the way you set us on the edge of our seats right at the beginning, and kept us there through the end. Very nicely done. You have a story to be proud of, and you also can be proud of the skill you told it with. I'm very anxious for the Epilogue, and I'm sure it will be a fitting conclusion of your story. Congratulations and well done. |
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03-21-2011, 10:07 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Scotland
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8)
Well this is it, the end of love at last?! *cries* but it’s not the end of my writing, as I’ve got two other stories in the mature section called Giving up which I co-write with KatielovesHP and Watching in silence. I hope you’ll go give them a chance. Anyway, thank you so much to all of you who read my story I love you for it. So I won’t keep you any longer. Epilogue Ginny’s POV
It had been five years since the defeat on Voldemort and life was better than ever, there were obviously still some scars left over from the people who lost their life. Lilly had attracted the same amount of attention as Harry had over the death seen as they both collectively killed him. I gazed at my little girl as she walked down the aisle that I had just walked down myself. She looked absolutely adorable in her little flower girl outfit. I turned and looked at Harry, who was standing opposite me along with all of my brothers and Neville and he looked in awe as he also watched Lilly skip down towards us. Once she had gotten close to us she ran and jumped into her daddies arms and waved over at me. She knew she couldn’t jump up on me anymore as we were expecting our second child in just two short months. We had found out it was a boy a couple of months ago and decided to call him James, after Harry’s father. The bridal music started and I turned my attention towards the aisle again as my brother took his place in front of thee alter. Hermione looked stunning in her white silk dress. Her hair had been pinned back and there were loose curls which framed her face.
As they said their ‘I Do’s’ I realised that finally everyone was finally at peace. Ron and Hermione were finally together and married, Neville and Hayley had gotten married a year ago and she had just given birth to their daughter Honour a month ago, and then there was Harry and I we were married, had a beautiful daughter and had a son on the way. The world was a peace and finally everyone had their love at last!
Wow, I’m feeling kind of teary.
If you think that there is anything I haven’t mentioned or cleared up please tell me and I will clear it up or write a little post about it.
Thanks sooooooo much guys I love you all!!!!
Kerri xxxxxxxxx
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03-21-2011, 10:21 PM
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| Snidget
Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Glasgow, Scotland :)
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Kerri!! I'm sitting all alone crying! It was beautiful. So simple yet so bloody brilliant!
Do you know what really got me? We discussed in like 3rd year how it should end with love at last and it did and there was just one lone tear on my cheek!
Stunning.
I like the name Honour  *winkwink*
Spellbinding. (ha get it - SPELL?!)
I love you loads  Amazing  Incredible  Is that enough virtual hugs??!!
I'm writing GU right now
K xx
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03-22-2011, 12:15 AM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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| ♥ 2G FC| Narnian!| Fremione|Full Sail Girl ♥| Dramione| Shadowhunter!| Jesse ♥ Quote:
Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L) Once she had gotten close to us she ran and jumped into her daddies arms and waved over at me. This is so precious; Lily is absolutely adorable.
Hermione sounds stunning; I like her hair style Quote:
Neville and Hayley had gotten married a year ago and she had just given birth to their daughter Honour a month ago
I love the name Honour; but I have a feeling I'm missing some inside joke due to Katie's post
Annnndddd, I loved how the last words were "love at last". Brilliant
Fantastic post and story, Kerri! I loved it, dear! And I can't wait to read more stories from you in the future (not to mention the two you have out now  )
Love you! :tackle:
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03-22-2011, 05:19 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Scotland
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8)
Thank you so much Emily and Katie
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03-22-2011, 06:58 PM
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|  X-treme Horcrux Slayer! Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sophie Potter First Year | Ruadh gu brath! | | Friendships are better than normal Ships
Well Done Kerri!
I've loved every bit of your story.
I hope you can post on WIS very soon. You know how much I love it!
Thanks for blessing us with this story!
Soph xx
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03-23-2011, 04:42 AM
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| Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Janet Lynn Gordon Fifth Year | Werecats are people too! Reader of Fan Fictions
Hello Kerri. I think your ending was very nicely written. You didn't leave anything out that I know of, and I loved Hermione's hair. She's a beautiful young woman, so I'm sure the curls encasing her face made her a beauty to see. I bet Ron, for the first time, was not having food on his mind as he gazed at his beautiful bride coming down the isle to be at his side forever more.
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03-23-2011, 04:38 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Scotland
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8)
Thank you Sophie and Connie
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