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| | Honeydukes Cellar (Incomplete Fanfiction) The cellar holds unfinished confections of storytelling, giving readers a glimpse into creative ideas that may one day be revived. | 
12-21-2006, 03:52 AM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Edward=Mine<333
Posts: 1,485
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Charlotte Anne Noelle Everard
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yay!! it's awesome. I love the idea of doing it from goyle's perspective- very original!!
great job!
Hannah
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12-21-2006, 07:50 AM
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 Wrackspurt
Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: SHIELD's Helicarrier
Posts: 214,448
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Dhruv Vihaan Khanna
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Slytherin Fifth Year
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Idris Ace Grunt
Gryffindor Third Year
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Dynah Aavni Atreyu-Rehman
Hufflepuff Seventh Year
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Krittika Saanvi Joshi
Ravenclaw Sixth Year
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|  ~ Mrs. Steve Harrington ~ It be like that sometimes.
Goyle did something right! cool! PAMS! Catlin!
~Alicia~
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12-21-2006, 12:12 PM
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| | Jobberknoll
Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: A rainy, rainy place
Posts: 4,425
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Xylina Samuels
Third Year |
OMG, it's in Goyle's POV. Original. This is a really great start! I love it! Thanks for the PM or I wouldn't have found it so easily! PAMS!
x_Nicole_x
__________________ listen and you can hear the distant sounds
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the sounds of raindrops echo across the horizon
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12-21-2006, 09:38 PM
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| | Griffin
Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: eating your bamboo
Posts: 27,315
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Seth Moore
First Year | Ali's Apprentice | | SuperEvilAwesomePanda!
Yahhh!  Great start! Love it so far<3
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12-21-2006, 10:49 PM
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| | Billywig
Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: ♥ waiting for
Posts: 3,641
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Cassie Alexandersson
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Very nice start, I like the introduction paragraph in teh first post  .
PAMS!
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12-22-2006, 12:39 AM
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|  Admires Ginny's Sanity
DA Galleon Keeper
SS Featured AuthorSnidget
Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Limerick =)
Posts: 2,554
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Mione Borthwick
Sixth Year |
This is awesome! I love it being from Goyle's percpective. You don't get that often and I think it is amazing!  PAMS PAMS PAMS | |
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12-22-2006, 12:50 AM
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| Formerly: Asrai   Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 7,835
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Roma Galda
Sixth Year | Bassoons galore!
Posting again really soon - anyone looking forward to it? 
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12-22-2006, 12:53 AM
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| | Ramora
Join Date: May 2006 Location: Avvie by... Well, ac
Posts: 5,366
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Lia Taylor
| Draco's Director Dramione=OTP
*raises her hand and jumps and down with a striking similarity to Hermione*
Me!!!
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12-22-2006, 01:05 AM
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| | Knarl
Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Dharmaville™
Posts: 9,334
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Jack Fletcher
Fourth Year | Dumbledore's Licorice Snaps Chipotle!
__________________ Have at thee!
But who's that ghost who keeps walking by my door?
Tell me, how long could you hang on to a word?
Who do you carry the torch for, my young man? | |
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12-22-2006, 01:08 AM
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| Formerly: Asrai Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 7,835
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Roma Galda
Sixth Year | Bassoons galore!
All right - posting!
__________________ Zoe loves Caitlin the MOST! *glomps* Jess loves and misses Cait more than youuuu!! <33 | |
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12-22-2006, 01:09 AM
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| | Knarl
Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Dharmaville™
Posts: 9,334
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Jack Fletcher
Fourth Year | Dumbledore's Licorice Snaps Chipotle!
Yea!!! *dances*
__________________ Have at thee!
But who's that ghost who keeps walking by my door?
Tell me, how long could you hang on to a word?
Who do you carry the torch for, my young man? | |
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12-22-2006, 01:15 AM
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| Formerly: Asrai Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 7,835
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Roma Galda
Sixth Year | Post Three Bassoons galore!
When all of the classes are finally out, I head to the Great Hall for dinner with Malfoy and Crabbe. We reach the open doors and I suddenly exclaim, “Oh! I left my cauldron cakes in Professor Snape’s dungeon. I’ll be back soon.”
Malfoy rolls his eyes. “Goyle, you big fat prune, we’re fixing to eat.”
I shrug. “But I want them now.”
“Fine, go, but don’t be gone for too long. I need to talk to you about our next ... job.”
I nod, and they walk of. I head over to the dungeons and then duck underneath the stairs. All is dark, and I wait. There is a slight tug at my sleeve and I turn. My eyes are starting to adjust to the overwhelming blackness and I see a small outline. “Janie?”
She wraps her arms around me and I can’t help but to feel right.
“How are you?” she whispers, and before she can say anything else, I kiss her.
I pull back, and shock was etched all through my face. I’m sure it was on hers, too. It was our first kiss, and I didn’t mean to do it.
“I’m sorry,” I say. “I .. it was an accident.”
I hear sarcasm come into her voice. “What, did you trip and accidentally fall on my lips?”
I open my mouth to speak again, but before I even notice, she kisses me. It is short, but I like it, so I hug her again.
I can tell she’s smiling, and she talks again after a couple of moments. “Did you have anything particular you needed to talk to me about, Greg?”
She knows that Draco dislikes her, but I want to tell her about how awful he’s been lately. She will get bothered by it, though, so I keep my mouth closed. I also want to tell her about our potential job we have coming, but she knows nothing about my life outside of Hogwarts. She can’t.
Finally, I shake my head ‘no.’ “I just wanted to see you.”
“Tomorrow we’ll have been together two months,” she points out. “And still no one knows, except Crabbe and Malfoy.”
I think she’s hinting at wanting to tell people. To get off the subject, I say, “I have a surprise for you.”
“Really? What?”
“I’ll give it to you tomorrow, all right?” I ask.
“Fine,” she sighs jokingly.
We know we both need to go to dinner, so I leave first. I pull a pack of cauldron cakes out of my robes and go to sit at the Slytherin table.
Fifteen minutes later, Janie walks in. Malfoy watches her as she sits at the Ravenclaw table. He turns to me. “I don’t want to hear about it. Tomorrow, we need to leave after lunch. He needs us.”
I protest. “I can’t! Tomorrow is-”
“Tomorrow is when we’re leaving,” Draco finishes my sentence. “So what ever you have planned, I don’t care. This is more important.”
The bench suddenly feels uncomfortable. I stand up. “I’m going to the common room. I’ll see you guys later.”
I hope that Janie will see me leave and follow. I made it to our house without any tugs on my sleeve, though, so I go to my dorm and open my bag. I scribble down a note for Janie, send it out with Crabbe’s owl, and lay down to think about her some.
__________________ Zoe loves Caitlin the MOST! *glomps* Jess loves and misses Cait more than youuuu!! <33
Last edited by the.time.is.now; 12-22-2006 at 01:22 AM.
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12-22-2006, 01:20 AM
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| | Ramora
Join Date: May 2006 Location: Avvie by... Well, ac
Posts: 5,366
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Lia Taylor
| Draco's Director Dramione=OTP
Poor Goyle 
Can't wait to find out what happens next!
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12-22-2006, 01:28 AM
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| | Knarl
Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Dharmaville™
Posts: 9,334
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Jack Fletcher
Fourth Year | Dumbledore's Licorice Snaps Chipotle!
PAMSOID!!!! Poor Goyle...
__________________ Have at thee!
But who's that ghost who keeps walking by my door?
Tell me, how long could you hang on to a word?
Who do you carry the torch for, my young man? | |
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12-22-2006, 06:54 AM
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| | Gnome
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: I'm not sure... *shifts eyes nervously*
Posts: 275
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Wow! This is great Cat!!!
Goyle... interesting... But I love it!!! Keep it up!
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Last edited by That_one_girl; 12-22-2006 at 07:00 AM.
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12-22-2006, 08:35 AM
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| WWW & Potterdom Mod
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Wrackspurt
Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: SHIELD's Helicarrier
Posts: 214,448
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Dhruv Vihaan Khanna
Graduated
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Aryan Zahid Atreyu-Rehman
Slytherin Fifth Year
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Idris Ace Grunt
Gryffindor Third Year
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Dynah Aavni Atreyu-Rehman
Hufflepuff Seventh Year
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Krittika Saanvi Joshi
Ravenclaw Sixth Year
x12 x12
| ~ Mrs. Steve Harrington ~ It be like that sometimes.
Aww... poor Goyle... i feel sorry for him
PAMS Catlin!
~Alicia~
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12-22-2006, 03:30 PM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Canada
Posts: 2,438
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Aw, poor Goyle
Where're they going tho? 
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12-22-2006, 04:26 PM
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| DA Secret Keeper
RWFC B'day Blast officer
SS100 Triumphant Snidget
Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Thanks so much Mich for the Avvie and the Siggy!! You Rock my Socks!!
Posts: 2,545
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Athena Evans (A twin)
Third |
Malfoy is an evil prat  poor Goyle, what is he going to do, especially when she finds out, as they always do, about his outside of Hogwarts life?
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12-22-2006, 04:30 PM
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| | Jobberknoll
Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: A rainy, rainy place
Posts: 4,425
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Xylina Samuels
Third Year |
Aww, poor Goyle! I love it! PAMS!
__________________ listen and you can hear the distant sounds
of someone humming a familiar song
the sounds of raindrops echo across the horizon
and shoot your wish up to the sky | |
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12-22-2006, 06:22 PM
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|  Bonnie Devotee
Keeper of Ginny's Red HairDoxy
Join Date: Jan 2006
Posts: 6,406
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Amparo Montez
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Hey Cat!
I finally read your FF!
I'm loving it! Goyle's point of view? WOW! I never knew a story about him could be so so cool !
Okay, post soon please! PAMS!
__________________ Bonnie rocks ° have fun in the BWFC* and the GWFC* Bonnie or Wright ? Ginny or Weasley? Just dare. | |
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12-22-2006, 06:59 PM
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| | Hippogriff
Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: In the stars.
Posts: 22,879
First Year | GWFC/BWFC My <3
ah! Girl! I love this, it's the best, i love your writing! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Graphics made by: Thumper
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12-22-2006, 09:49 PM
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| | Lobalug
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Arkansas
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this is great! really interesting too! im excited! | |
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12-22-2006, 10:03 PM
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| Vair Stalkerish
Missing Sirius Mooncalf
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: In a mental ward wit
Posts: 7,987
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Emma McKingley
Graduated |
Goyle's with a Ravenclaw girl? 
Wow... lol
Great post!
PAMS Caitlin! | |
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12-23-2006, 01:31 AM
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| Formerly: Asrai Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 7,835
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Roma Galda
Sixth Year | Bassoons galore!
I will [hopefully] be posting tonight! It all depends on whether or not I finish the stuff I have going on at the MoMFC ... Days of Potter ... Yeah.
__________________ Zoe loves Caitlin the MOST! *glomps* Jess loves and misses Cait more than youuuu!! <33 | |
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12-23-2006, 02:39 AM
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| | Jarvey
Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: at the dance studio
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Wow its just the beginning and already it sounds amazing!!! I love how its from Goyles PoV, that is very original and exciting sounding. PAMS!
Leslie
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