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07-09-2010, 10:32 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by Ruby85 Never mind the blooming dresses, PAMS! Hehe, well, you might have to wait a while for the post... Our laptop got another virus, so we have to get rid of it before I can post again... Quote:
Yay, Im in the post! Yay, I'm a decent Slytherin! I want a dress! Green please!
What happened to forgetting the dresses?? Haha, Okie dokie, How about this dress but in this color green?
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07-10-2010, 01:15 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sophie Potter First Year | Ruadh gu brath! | | Friendships are better than normal Ships
Ooo...Can I pick a dress for me?
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07-10-2010, 02:44 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by Morag Ooo...Can I pick a dress for me?
Soph x Haha, yesh, you can  As in you want to pick it or you want me to pick it?
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07-10-2010, 05:47 PM
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New post time! Here's the remainder of the reception “Oh, stop it, you guys,” Emily hushed. The three girls giggled as they made their way back outside.
As Emily walked into the tent, she saw George’s eyes go wide, which caused them to erupt into another fit of giggles. His eyes softened as he started toward her, but the Minister stopped him with his words. “It is now time for the father-daughter dance,” he said into the microphone. Remus came toward her with a huge grin on his face. “May I have this dance?” he asked shyly. “Well, you are my daddy, Rems, at least you’re one of them,” she giggled. Remus chuckled as he took her hands and led her to the middle of the dance floor. She wrapped one hand around his shoulder while her other was held tightly in his hand. The music started playing as they glided around the floor. Emily recognized the song immediately. “Oh, Rems, I’m so glad you picked this one,” she whispered as she laid her head on his chest, tears seeping through her lids. “I know, Ems, me too,” he whispered back, his breath tickling her neck. Look at the two of you dancing that way
Lost in the moment and each other’s face
So much in love you’re alone in this place
Like there’s nobody else in the world
I was enough for her not long ago
I was her number one
She told me so “You still are, Rems. You always will be,” she whispered. Remus smiled against her hair. And she still means the world to me
Just so you know
So be careful when you hold my girl
Time changes everything
Life must go on
And I’m not gonna stand in your way
But I loved her first and I held her first
And a place in my heart will always be hers
From the first breath she breathed
When she first smiled at me
I knew the love of a father runs deep
And I prayed that she’d find you someday
But it’s still hard to give her away
I loved her first “Remus,” Emily said as she leaned back to look at him. “When are you going to ask Tonks to dance?”
“I don’t think that’s a good idea, Ems,” he said quietly. “Why not?”
“Because—”
“Remus John Lupin, she likes you, and I know you like her. So, what is the problem?”
“The problem is that I’m too old and too poor for her. She deserves someone better,” he sighed. “There is no one better I can think of. She wants you, not some young idiot. And you’re not poor. Mum left you quite a bit of money,” Emily accused. “Yes, but I was thinking of giving that money to you and George and the family you were going to start.”
“Well, thank you for the thought, but George and I are good on money. He has a fortune from the shop and I have Mum’s money, not to mention half of Dad’s. For me, your daughter, the bride, will you ask her to dance tonight, at least once? And it has to be a slow dance.” Emily puckered out her lower lip in a pout. Remus chuckled. “Fine, but only once,” he sighed. “Good,” she said happily as she rested her head back on his chest. How could that beautiful woman with you
Be the same freckled face kid that I knew
The one that I read all those fairy tales to
And tucked into bed all those nights
And I knew the first time I saw you with her
It was only a matter of time
But I loved her first and I held her first
And a place in my heart will always be hers
From the first breath she breathed
When she first smiled at me
I knew the love of a father runs deep
And I prayed that she’d find you someday
But it’s still hard to give her away
I loved her first
From the first breath she breathed
When she first smiled at me
I knew the love of a father runs deep
Someday you might know what I’m going through
When a miracle smiles up at you
I loved her first
The music came to an end and Emily let go of Remus. He kissed her cheek and told her he loved her. George started making his way over to her, but Fred beat him there. “Sorry, Georgie, but you just aren’t quick enough,” he sniggered as he took Emily’s hand. “Right, well you better keep your hands where I can see them, Fredrick,” George said seriously before cracking a grin. “So, how is my little sister doing this fine evening?” Fred asked. “Pretty amazing. And how’s my big brother doing?” she asked with a grin. “Pretty good,” he chuckled.
Emily danced with Fred, Harry, Lee, and Mr. Weasley, before she got back to George. “So, did you cast Avada Kedavra when you walked in?” he whispered as he wrapped his arms around her waist, bringing her closer to him. “No, why?” she asked. “Because you made my heart stop beating,” he chuckled.
Emily giggled while he kissed her neck and cheek. “I’ve missed you,” she confessed. “I missed you too. I’m not going to lie, Ems. I got pretty jealous of everyone,” he sighed. “You shouldn’t. At the end of the night, I’m yours,” she whispered. “Forever and Always,” he added. “Forever and Always,” she agreed.
* I Loved Her First was composed by J. Aldridge and E. Park and performed by Heartland. And the Avada Kedavra bit was a Harry Potter pick up line (it's a group on Facebook, believe it or not) from Facebook. 
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07-10-2010, 05:54 PM
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| Firecrab
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Secret Snape First Year | You can quote, disagree with, glorify or vilify me But about the only thing you can't do is ignore me
Yes Remus, I demand a dance with Tonks! And I hope Fred did keep his hands where George could see them or Sarah will be getting pretty mad!
Love the post PAMS
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07-10-2010, 05:59 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by Ruby85 Yes Remus, I demand a dance with Tonks! And I hope Fred did keep his hands where George could see them or Sarah will be getting pretty mad! Haha, yep. Remus needs to stop being stubborn. Quote:
Love the post PAMS
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07-10-2010, 08:35 PM
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|  X-treme Horcrux Slayer! Puffskein
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Originally Posted by emilyblack “Well, you are my daddy, Rems, at least you’re one of them,” she giggled. Remus chuckled as he took her hands and led her to the middle of the dance floor. Aww thats so nice. Hehas been such a good daddy to her the whole way throught the story Quote:
Originally Posted by emilyblack “Remus,” Emily said as she leaned back to look at him. “When are you going to ask Tonks to dance?” Remus, we all insist. It is raher obvious you are head over heels for each other if your own daughter can see it! Quote:
Originally Posted by emilyblack “So, did you cast Avada Kedavra when you walked in?” he whispered as he wrapped his arms around her waist, bringing her closer to him.
“No, why?” she asked.
“Because you made my heart stop beating,” he chuckled. Aww George! What are you like Quote:
Originally Posted by emilyblack Tell me watchya think  Fantastic Post. I'm sad the Wedding has come to an end though you wright very good party posts  :party4: And to be part of it has made it all the better. So cheers Emily :bubbly:
p.s can this please be the dress I wore. It's also the one I wore to my cousins wedding on Friday http://www.debenhams.com/webapp/wcs/...b=Home%7EWomen |
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07-10-2010, 09:14 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by Morag Aww that's so nice. He has been such a good daddy to her the whole way throughout the story He has, hasn't he?  I  Remus Quote:
Remus, we all insist. It is rather obvious you are head over heels for each other if your own daughter can see it!
Bahaha, you tell him! Quote:
Aww George! What are you like Hehe, I remember seeing it on Facebook and I just had to use it in here Thanks, Soph Quote:
I'm sad the Wedding has come to an end though you write very good party posts  :party4:
Hehe, well thank you, it was fun to write Quote:
And to be part of it has made it all the better. So cheers Emily :bubbly: Cheers Quote:
p.s can this please be the dress I wore. It's also the one I wore to my cousins wedding on Friday Sophie's Dress Of course you can wear this dress  It's very pretty |
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07-11-2010, 01:42 AM
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| Puffskein
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Hehe i loved the pick up line it was soo cheesy  this chapter was soooo good !!!!!!!! you are such a talented writed Emily  Sophie that dress is beautiful !!
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07-11-2010, 03:06 AM
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Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L) Hehe i loved the pick up line it was soo cheesy   I love cheesy stuff Quote:
this chapter was soooo good !!!!!!!! you are such a talented writed Emily Thank you, Kerri  That means a lot to me Quote:
Sophie that dress is beautiful !! I concur |
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07-11-2010, 06:00 AM
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| Puffskein
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Hello Emily. Very, very sweet post. The wedding and reception were very well written. I'm glad you took time with it. Quote:
The three girls giggled as they made their way back outside.
We all know, this won't be the end of the giggling. Quote:
As Emily walked into the tent, she saw George’s eyes go wide, which caused them to erupt into another fit of giggles.
Hehehe Even if I hadn't read the post before I commented I knew that was coming. Nicely done. Quote:
“I don’t think that’s a good idea, Ems,” he said quietly.
The solitude in his voice is heartbreaking. Quote:
“So, did you cast Avada Kedavra when you walked in?” he whispered as he wrapped his arms around her waist, bringing her closer to him.
My heart skipped a beat when I read that line. Quote:
“Because you made my heart stop beating,” he chuckled.
Great post Emily! I'll be watching for your next.
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07-11-2010, 03:13 PM
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Originally Posted by Connie Hello Emily. Hiya, Connie! Quote:
Very, very sweet post. The wedding and reception were very well written. I'm glad you took time with it.
Thank you  It's one of my favorite posts from the entire story. Quote:
We all know, this won't be the end of the giggling. Hehehe Even if I hadn't read the post before I commented I knew that was coming. Nicely done.
Haha, thank you  There's more giggling to come Quote:
My heart skipped a beat when I read that line. Bahaha, it's definitely one of my favorite pick up lines Quote:
Great post Emily! I'll be watching for your next.
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07-11-2010, 05:33 PM
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I love that dress!!! I don't need a colour anymore, I'll wear the white one 
Such a good bunch of wedding posts. You should be super proud of yourself Ems. The dress I wore to my cousin's wedding
Look at the three pictures at the left below the big picture, look at the back of it.
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07-11-2010, 05:33 PM
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I love that dress!!! I don't need a colour anymore, I'll wear the white one 
Such a good bunch of wedding posts. You should be super proud of yourself Ems. The dress I wore to my cousin's wedding
Look at the three pictures at the left below the big picture, look at the back of it.
__________________ You're just a daydream away,I wouldn't know what to say if I had you. And I'll keep you a daydream away, Just watch from a safe place, So I never have to lose. |
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07-11-2010, 05:34 PM
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| Snidget
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Can one of them please be deleted ????
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07-11-2010, 06:22 PM
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Originally Posted by KatielovesHP I love that dress!!! I don't need a colour anymore, I'll wear the white one  Haha, okie dokie  I'm glad you like Quote:
Such a good bunch of wedding posts. You should be super proud of yourself Ems.
Awe, well thank you That dress is pretty! The back is precious, so cute |
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07-11-2010, 08:18 PM
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| Firecrab
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OMG! I love all the posts! I'm so so so sorry I haven't replied in a while but I was at camp anyways I love the wedding and everyone's dresses too! XD I just can't wait for the honeymoon haha
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07-11-2010, 08:59 PM
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Originally Posted by SarahLestrange OMG! I love all the posts! Thanks, Lauren Quote:
I'm so so so sorry I haven't replied in a while but I was at camp
Haha, it's okay  I understand we all have lives Quote:
anyways I love the wedding and everyone's dresses too! XD I just can't wait for the honeymoon haha Haha, thanks  The honeymoon... Haha, it's the next post |
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07-12-2010, 06:59 PM
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New post!  It's shorter than usual, but it's the end of the chapter...
Emily and George decided to go to Amelia’s family’s cabin for their honeymoon. It had been passed down from generation to generation. And so, when her mother died, the cabin got passed down to Emily. It was perched on top of a mountain in Greenland. Emily and Remus used to go there every year for Thanksgiving until school started. Their bags were packed and they were getting ready to Apparate. “You two have fun,” Remus said as he hugged Emily. “But not too much fun,” he said as he shook George’s hand.
George laughed nervously as Emily slapped Remus’ arm. “Oh, shut it,” Emily told him. “Yeah, have fun,” Fred sniggered. George hit him upside the head playfully. “Have a good time,” Mrs. Weasley said after she scolded Fred. “Yes, yes, have a great time,” Mr. Weasley said with a smile. “Thank you,” Emily said quietly. George kissed her hair and she giggled. “We, er, better be off,” George said as he chuckled. “Bye, guys!” Emily said as she hugged Ginny.
Emily and George, with their luggage, Apparated to Greenland. They arrived on the front porch of the small cottage. It was just as Emily remembered it. The rocking chairs and porch swing were in the exact same spot and the Welcome Home mat was still sitting by the front door. Emily took the key out of her pocket and placed it in the door. She twisted the doorknob and pushed it open. She started to walk through it, but George caught her hand. “Wait here,” George whispered as he went through the door with the luggage. “And exactly why can’t I come in?” Emily asked. “Just wait a sec, Miss Impatient,” George chuckled. He came back with his hands empty. “What was the point of that?” she asked with a giggle. “So I could do this,” he said as he swooped down and picked her up, literally knocking her off her feet. Emily giggled as he walked her over the threshold. “Mr. Weasley, why I do believe you just swept me off my feet,” she giggled. “Well, Mrs. Weasley, you flatter me. So, now that we’re alone—” he said, letting the sentence hang there as he took her through the cottage and into the master suite. “Now that we’re alone—?” Emily asked. “I have a few ideas,” he whispered as he gently placed her on the bed. “Hmm, I’d like to hear these ideas,” she whispered. “I can show you better than I can tell you,” he whispered as he knelt down to her.
Emily pulled him on top of her by his tie. She giggled as he started kissing her neck and jaw line. “Make love to me,” she whispered. George leaned back slightly to look at her, and without another word, he started kissing her passionately, causing those famous butterflies to erupt within her.
*Let me know whatchya think
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07-12-2010, 07:24 PM
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| Puffskein
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Hello Emily. Don't pass out cause I'm here so soon after you posted. I just happened to be in the neighborhood and seen you'd posted. Quote:
It's shorter than usual, but it's the end of the chapter...
It's ok, this is their Honeymoon, they need their privacy. Quote:
It was perched on top of a mountain in Greenland.
Oh, I bet it's beautiful! I've always wanted to see Greenland. Actually, all the lands, Scotland, Netherlands, Iceland, Newfoundland, Hobbitland, oops how did my fantasy land get in there?
Great post Emily! I'll be watching for your next!
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07-12-2010, 08:27 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by Connie Hello Emily. Don't pass out cause I'm here so soon after you posted. I just happened to be in the neighborhood and seen you'd posted.  Haha, I know! I was actually surprised to see that you posted! Quote:
It's ok, this is their Honeymoon, they need their privacy.
Verrryyyy truueee Quote:
Oh, I bet it's beautiful! I've always wanted to see Greenland. Actually, all the lands, Scotland, Netherlands, Iceland, Newfoundland, Hobbitland, oops how did my fantasy land get in there?
Bahaha, I've never been, but I want to, too! Quote:
Great post Emily! I'll be watching for your next!
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07-12-2010, 11:19 PM
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| Gnome
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Oooooohhhhhh... it gets juicy!!!!! Ha ha! You're not going to get in trouble for that, are you? I don't personally know how far one can go in a mature fan fic... Either way, it was an awesome post! They're so in love, I love it!!! =D Please, please, please PAMS PAMS PAMS!!!!!!
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07-12-2010, 11:36 PM
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Originally Posted by Chocolatier Oooooohhhhhh... it gets juicy!!!!! Ha ha! Haha, if that's what you want to call it Quote:
You're not going to get in trouble for that, are you? I don't personally know how far one can go in a mature fan fic...
I shouldn't, because I didn't go into detail... But I'll go double check. Quote:
Either way, it was an awesome post! They're so in love, I love it!!! =D Please, please, please PAMS PAMS PAMS!!!!!!
Hehe, thanks, Kit  More soon
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07-13-2010, 01:39 AM
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| Puffskein
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That was cute  the cabin sounds beautiful
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07-13-2010, 01:48 AM
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Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L) That was cute  Thanks, Kerri Quote:
the cabin sounds beautiful If only it were real, so I could go there. Sigh.
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