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06-11-2010, 02:26 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by SarahLestrange Awe...I hate it when Emily and Georgie fight...now he's shocked and Emily's heartbroken...so sad  Yeah, I know  But everything will be okay... Eventually Quote:
PAMS! I must know what happens next! Haha
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06-11-2010, 02:56 PM
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| SS Vaulter Firecrab
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Originally Posted by emilyblack Sucks for you  And what is that supposed to mean???
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06-11-2010, 04:22 PM
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#378 (permalink)
| Snidget
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OMG!!!!!
She just told him that she loved him and then ran away!!!!!! 
Georgie chase her and kiss her on the lips like there is no tomorrow!!!!!!
Sorry about that!!!! I know I can't talk to him.
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06-11-2010, 04:35 PM
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#379 (permalink)
| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by KatielovesHP OMG!!!!!
She just told him that she loved him and then ran away!!!!!! 
Georgie chase her and kiss her on the lips like there is no tomorrow!!!!!!
Sorry about that!!!! I know I can't talk to him.  Bahahaha, it's otay |
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06-11-2010, 04:37 PM
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| Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8)
awh that was sooo cute :O PAMS PAMS PAMS
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06-11-2010, 04:52 PM
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#381 (permalink)
| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L) awh that was sooo cute :O PAMS PAMS PAMS  Hehe, thanks, Kerri  More soon |
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06-12-2010, 04:27 PM
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#382 (permalink)
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New post time!
Emily sat with Ginny at the match. She and George had not quite made up, but she did hear that her animosity toward him brought Angelina closer to George. The sun beat down on Emily’s hair, causing it to shine. She glanced around at everybody decked out in red and gold. They started to chant “LIONS FOR THE CUP!” as their team walked onto the lawn. Emily clapped feebly as she watched George and Angelina walk out together. The sight made her want to puke.
Emily watched the excitement of the game unfold. From Angelina nearly being thrown off her broom from Flint, to Alicia scoring a penalty shot while Wood saved the other team’s penalty shot. Then there was a Slytherin chaser grabbing Katie’s head instead of the Quaffle and both Beaters trying to close in on Harry. Emily clapped and cheered, but her heart really wasn’t in it. She watched with a smile on her face as Harry beat Malfoy to the Snitch. They had won the Cup, and everyone was ecstatic.
June came, and with it were the exams. Fred and George would be taking their O.W.L.s. Emily was studying for Transfiguration and Charms like crazy. As soon as exam week began, Emily was in the zone. If you bothered her when she was studying, she most likely snapped at you to study as well. Hermione and she normally studied together because their study techniques were quite alike. She felt like she did quite well in Charms. Her teapot for Transfiguration turned into quite the cute little tortoise. McGonagall even let her keep it because of how fond she had become of it. Care of Magical Creatures was a breeze. All they had to do was make sure their flobberworm was still alive by the end of the hour.
Emily was pretty sure that her Confusing Concoction for Potions was fairly right, but you never knew with Snape’s expectations. And then there was Astronomy. Emily loved Astronomy—especially since she spent so much time outside at night, under the stars. She scribbled down everything she could on her chart, only getting confused on two different constellations. History of Magic was on Wednesday morning, and she stayed up most of the night studying every note she’d taken. After lunch was Herbology. She wasn’t all that thrilled about that one.
On Thursday morning, she had Defense Against the Dark Arts. Having been doing the private lessons with Remus, she was able to excel in his exam, which had a Boggart in it. It was her last exam, having dropped Divination. Afterwards, she enjoyed her lunch and went and took a well-needed nap.
Emily awoke in time for dinner. She freshened up in the bathroom before making her way to the Great Hall. She noticed Fred, George, and Lee walking a little ahead of herself. Emily jogged to catch up to them. “Hey, guys,” Emily said. “Oh, so you’re talking to people again,” George asked sulkily. “Since my exams are over, I thought it would be safe,” Emily joked. Only Fred and Lee chuckled. George didn’t find it too comical at all. Emily sighed.
Emily and George ate in silence as Fred and Lee tried everything to get them into the conversation, but they were both too stubborn.
It was the night of the full moon, and Emily had every intention of going down to spend it with Remus—just like every time. Except this time, when she made her way down there and transformed into her animagus, Remus was nowhere to be found. Emily panicked. The full moon was already up and Remus should have been in the classroom, in his werewolf form, waiting on her.
She was on her way to Dumbledore’s office when George bumped into her. He looked grumpy and moody, and Emily didn’t have time to find out what was going on. “George, have you seen...Remus?” she asked hesitantly. “Nope,” he said. And then she heard it. It was a howl from the forest. The hair on the back of Emily’s neck rose and she had Goosebumps crawling up her arms. The howl sounded again, and then it was his howl. Emily wasn’t sure whose howls the first two were, but she knew they weren’t Remus’. Emily stared in horror through the window for a moment longer before she bolted down the hall. Emily ran as fast as her legs could take her to the forest, to Remus. She faintly noticed George running right beside her, yelling at her. “Where are you going?” he yelled. “Go back inside, George!” she yelled back. “What’s going on?” he shouted. “It’s too dangerous for you out here! Go back inside!” she yelled in panic. “If it’s too dangerous, I’m not leaving you!” he shouted.
Emily didn’t have time to argue. She didn’t have time to think about how she was leading him to his death. All she could think about was getting to Remus. “George, you have to trust me!”
“I do trust you!” he yelled. “Then stay here! Don’t go in the forest! Please, for me!” she yelled.
George glanced at her. He couldn’t just let her go into the Forbidden Forest alone. But she seemed sure—she seemed serious. He slowed down to a stop. She yelled back something that he couldn’t hear and he waited. He decided that if she wasn’t back in fifteen minutes, he was going in after her.
Emily ran as fast as her legs could take her. As soon as she was beyond the protection of the trees and shrubs, she changed into her animagi form. Her fur bristled in the wind and she took a deep breath. She took a whiff of the air and ran deep into the forest. Using her senses, she fought her way through the branches and the thorns.
*Tell me watchya think
Last edited by Emileyn; 08-10-2010 at 08:17 PM.
Reason: Decided to give you a bit more :)
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06-12-2010, 06:12 PM
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#383 (permalink)
| Snidget
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OMG FAB POST!!!!!!
So....PoA moment here but with Emily's fantabulous twist??
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06-12-2010, 06:33 PM
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#384 (permalink)
| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by KatielovesHP OMG FAB POST!!!!!! Thanks, Katie Quote:
So....PoA moment here but with Emily's fantabulous twist??
And yep |
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06-13-2010, 12:53 AM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Scotland
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8)
great chapter  PAMS PAMS PAMS !!!!!!
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06-13-2010, 02:52 AM
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| Firecrab
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Ved It I thought it was gonna be like her dream where George was being chased by Remus and Emily was trying to help both of them but it was still a great post! PAMS!
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06-13-2010, 03:03 AM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L) great chapter  PAMS PAMS PAMS !!!!!!  Thanks, Kerri Quote:
Originally Posted by SarahLestrange Ved It I thought it was gonna be like her dream where George was being chased by Remus and Emily was trying to help both of them but it was still a great post! PAMS! Hmmm, I'm going to say no comment  Thanks, Lauren |
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06-13-2010, 05:49 AM
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| Firecrab
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Haha! No problem saw ur PM and checked it out so thanks for the update that has me craving more *cough, hint, cough* lol jk? Remember ur an amazing writer!
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06-13-2010, 11:00 AM
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|  X-treme Horcrux Slayer! Puffskein
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Sorry I've missed three posts. I've been busy at home and stuff. Great posts. PAMS! PAMS! PAMS!
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06-13-2010, 02:29 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by SarahLestrange Haha! No problem saw ur PM and checked it out so thanks for the update that has me craving more *cough, hint, cough* lol jk? Remember ur an amazing writer! Haha, do you need a cough drop? That's a pretty nasty cough you got there  Thanks Quote:
Originally Posted by Morag Sorry I've missed three posts. I've been busy at home and stuff. It's okay  I understan everyone has a personal life Quote:
Great posts. PAMS! PAMS! PAMS!
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06-13-2010, 09:57 PM
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| Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Janet Lynn Gordon Fifth Year | Werecats are people too! Reader of Fan Fictions
Emily!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Fabtastical!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I read both posts and am very happy with both of them. I can't comment but just long enough to say You're great! I'm so scared for Remus! Why didn't he wait for Emily? Is something going on? Does Dumbledore know? Why couldn't he wait for Emily!?!?!?!? Don't let George follow her in fifteen minutes!
What ever happened to the front doors being locked at night?!
Great posts Emily! Can't wait to read the next!
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06-13-2010, 10:10 PM
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#392 (permalink)
| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by Connie Emily!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Fabtastical!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Haha, somebody's hyper  Thanks Quote:
I read both posts and am very happy with both of them. I can't comment but just long enough to say You're great!
I'm glad you like  Thanks, Connie Quote:
I'm so scared for Remus! Why didn't he wait for Emily? Is something going on? Does Dumbledore know? Why couldn't he wait for Emily!?!?!?!?
Well... Quote:
Don't let George follow her in fifteen minutes!
Er Quote:
What ever happened to the front doors being locked at night?!
Hmmm, good question. Quote:
Great posts Emily! Can't wait to read the next!
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06-13-2010, 10:28 PM
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#393 (permalink)
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I guess I'll let you know what's happening  New post!
Five minutes into the forest, Emily smelled people. She slowed down in time to see Hermione and Harry run fast through the trees to get to the safety of the grounds. Buckbeak was behind them. Emily tilted her head to the side as she watched the three run, not even noticing her. And then she heard other movement. It had to be Remus and her nose backed her up on that conclusion.
Emily stretched her furry legs as far as they could go, but she still felt like it wasn’t fast enough. He was running around, possibly going after something. She howled, making him turn round. He bared his teeth at her and she growled in return. Sniffing the air, she smelt blood. Whose blood—she wasn’t sure. Emily was growing angry. What exactly could have made him leave his office tonight? What exactly could have brought him out here where he’s already hurt something or someone? Remus started coming toward her, so she started running. She ran around the forest, allowing him to chase her. She thought about turning and attacking him, but thought better of it because he could easily take her out. She ran in deep circles, making sure to never get close to the outskirts of the forest. Remus hesitated behind her, so she looked back at him. He was standing tall—he got a whiff of something. Panicking, Emily barked to get back his attention. Remus paid no attention to her. He started jogging the opposite way, sniffing a few of the trees. And then, the wind rushed by and Emily smelled it too—George. He had come after her.
Emily flat out ran in the direction that she thought he would be. She was well ahead of Remus. Within minutes, she found him, shivering madly, whispering her name over and over. He looked frightened, but not for himself, for her. George looked straight at her and froze. Emily glanced over her shoulder. They had a few minutes before her Godfather would show up. Emily transformed back into her human form. “Whoa! What the—how did you—what’s going on?” George finally got out. “George, you have to get out of here! It’s not safe!” she said, flustered. “Emily, I came in here to find you and I’m not leaving without you! Let’s just get out of here,” George pleaded. “It’s more complicated than that, George. Look I can’t explain right now, but I will tomorrow. You need to get out of the forest and go straight inside. Find Dumbledore and tell him that I’m out here. He’ll understand. Please, George,” Emily said, moving over to him. George took hold of her hands. “Let’s go together,” he begged. “George, we don’t have—CRAP!” Emily yelled loudly. “What?” George asked in alarm. He moved his body closer to hers as she glanced behind her. “We have to move! NOW!” she screeched as she held tightly to his hand and started running. “What is going on, Emily? What’s after us?” George shouted as he tried to not trip over roots and rocks. “It’s Remus!” she shouted back.
George tried to slow down but Emily wouldn’t allow it. “If this is about your grounding, I think he’ll understand,” George said. “George, there’s something I’ve never told you, but in this circumstance, I think it’s best to tell you. He’s a werewolf,” Emily said.
George picked up the pace and started running faster. “Why didn’t you ever tell me?” he asked. “It wasn’t my secret to tell,” she explained. “And the animagus part?”
“It kind of went with the werewolf part. I’m sorry, but is now really the time for this?” she asked. “I guess not,” he said shortly. “George, we’re not going to be able to outrun him for long. You’re going to have to go on without me!” she yelled. “I’m not leaving you in here. If you stay, I stay. You go, I go,” George said stubbornly. “George, please! I can stop Remus in my animagus form but not if you’re around. Besides, we can’t lead him back to the school grounds. He has to stay in the forest. Please, for me, do this,” she begged.
Emily listened as the leaves behind them started rustling and crunching. They heard an ear splintering howl from her Godfather, causing the two of them to speed up. It was her dream all over again, except this time it wasn’t a dream. George glanced at her once, squeezed her hand, and then let go. George sped up, pulling out his wand. He shouted something that Emily didn’t hear as she turned back into her white wolf. She turned on her paw and bared her teeth at the werewolf, at her Godfather. He ran at her, trying to get beyond her to the boy that was getting on his summoned broom, flying off.
The white wolf and the werewolf wrestled for a little while before Emily could convince him to follow her again. They ran through the trees, crunching leaves, breaking branches, and creating paths upon the forest floor.
*Okie dokie, tell me watchya think
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06-13-2010, 11:10 PM
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| Puffskein
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Hello Emily! Long time no see! NOT! I'll tell you what I thought. I'm glad the chapter wasn't longer than I can hold my breath, cause I held it the whole time! That was a very clever and masterfully written chapter. I'm so glad George got out of there. To bad she had to stay in there and not let Remus get Harry and Hermione. She could have rode off on Georges broom with him. But, she wouldn't want Remus to come around without her. Poor Emily is going to be one tired puppy when this night is over. Quote:
George picked up the pace and started running faster.
At least we know there isn't any problem with his hearing. He just didn't listen, when she told him to trust her and not to follow.
Great post Emily. I'll be waiting for your next.
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06-13-2010, 11:26 PM
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#395 (permalink)
| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by Connie Hello Emily! Long time no see! NOT! Hahaha, too true and funny Quote:
I'll tell you what I thought. I'm glad the chapter wasn't longer than I can hold my breath, cause I held it the whole time! That was a very clever and masterfully written chapter.
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Great post Emily. I'll be waiting for your next.
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06-14-2010, 05:17 AM
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| Firecrab
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Great post Emily! I knew that it was gonna be like her dream...oh and sure but I doubt the cough medicine will help only one thing can...no
matter how often you post you gotta know that it's addicting and I will always say this to you...PAMS!
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06-14-2010, 01:00 PM
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| SS Vaulter Firecrab
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| All right Emily!
Great two posts!
I was pretty worried when George decided to go in after her...
Hopefully, this'll make everything better between them!
PAMS ILY 
Abi... xox
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06-14-2010, 03:10 PM
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| Gnome
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Excellent post as usual, Emily. I think it was cute that George ran after her, because he was so worried about her and all. =] I can't wait to find out what happens next... so you need to PAMS!! By the way, the story isn't almost over, is it? Are you going to continue on into different years? I think I saw you say that, but I wasn't sure. But PAMS please!!!
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06-14-2010, 04:08 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by SarahLestrange Great post Emily! Thanks, Lauren Quote:
I knew that it was gonna be like her dream...
Haha, yeah, but I didn't want to tell you if you were right until it was posted  You were right Quote:
oh and sure but I doubt the cough medicine will help only one thing can...no matter how often you post you gotta know that it's addicting and I will always say this to you...PAMS! Hehe, just thought I'd ask  Thanks, Lauren Quote:
Originally Posted by 3uzz3ee All right Emily!
Great two posts! Thanks, Abi Quote:
Hopefully, this'll make everything better between them!
Hmmm.... Quote:
Originally Posted by Chocolatier Excellent post as usual, Emily. Thanks, Kit Quote:
I can't wait to find out what happens next... so you need to PAMS!!
Haha, more soon Quote:
By the way, the story isn't almost over, is it? Are you going to continue on into different years? I think I saw you say that, but I wasn't sure. But PAMS please!!!
Er, no, it's not over. I'm doing all years, but 4 and 5 are more like snippets. I'm only doing a few things for both of those. And 6 and 7 will be a little bit longer, but nowhere near as long as year 3  So, y'all aren't quite near being finished yet. I'm in the midst of writing 6 and 7 |
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06-14-2010, 09:52 PM
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| Snidget
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Jeewiz Emily!!!!! What a post??
He really loves her!!! I can especially tell with this part: Quote:
“I’m not leaving you in here. If you stay, I stay. You go, I go,” George said stubbornly
Katie
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