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05-19-2010, 05:18 PM
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Great chapter  PAMS PAMS PAMS TEAM GEORGE !!!!!!
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05-19-2010, 05:39 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sophie Potter First Year | Ruadh gu brath! | | Friendships are better than normal Ships
Great Chappie, Emily. She met Edward  ...
So when do we go back to the wizarding world???
Had to say it but TEAM GEORGE! through and through.
Love the post.
PAMS PAMS PAMS!
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05-19-2010, 06:10 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by KatielovesHP OMG!! Such a good post Emily!!!
I love the Cullens and the werewolves so she is lucky to meet them. It's cool that they know she is a witch now!
haha  Haha, thanks Katie Quote:
Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L) Great chapter  PAMS PAMS PAMS TEAM GEORGE !!!!!! Thanks, Kerri Quote:
Originally Posted by Morag Great Chappie, Emily. She met Edward  ...
So when do we go back to the wizarding world???
Had to say it but TEAM GEORGE! through and through.
Love the post.
PAMS PAMS PAMS!
S x Haha, thanks Sophie. We'll go back quite soon because I'm finding it quite boring right now...
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05-19-2010, 08:21 PM
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| Snidget
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We aren't trying to make you laugh with the TEAM GEORGE we are being completely serious! I love Georgie and Ems but you don't want their love to exist!!!
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05-19-2010, 09:39 PM
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Eerrgggg! I hate it when I get knocked off in the middle of a comment! Quote:
There were quite a few people in the living room, Emily noticed.
Have you ever been envited to a party and you didn't know you were the guest of honor, and it's not even your birthday? Quote:
“Hardly,” Edward murmured.
So, I'm thinking this guy has the ability to see into someones mind? He is starting to annoy me. OK, I know he's ok cause he's Seth's friend and Seth must be a good guy from everyones hype about him. But it irks me when people keep things secret behind my back, or in front of me, and has themselves a laugh at my expence. But, then that's just me. Emily might be different. (I doubt it though.) Quote:
Emily was getting ticked and definitely wasn’t dropping the subject.
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“Alice, don’t be mean. She hasn’t done anything to you, not yet anyway,” Seth said. He took a step forward and placed himself slightly in front of Emily.
Ah... he feels the tension. But, still, even now I can't feel that she is meant to be in any harm. Quote:
Let me know watchya think
I think you ended to soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hope you post soon.
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05-20-2010, 02:04 AM
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Originally Posted by KatielovesHP We aren't trying to make you laugh with the TEAM GEORGE we are being completely serious! I love Georgie and Ems but you don't want their love to exist!!!  Hahahaha, I find it funny, but cute  And who says I don't want their love to exist?? Quote:
Originally Posted by Connie Eerrgggg! I hate it when I get knocked off in the middle of a comment! This seems to be happening to you a lot, Connie.. Sorry, I know it sucks majorly Quote:
Have you ever been envited to a party and you didn't know you were the guest of honor, and it's not even your birthday?
Fortunately I haven't  But I guess this situation does apply Quote:
So, I'm thinking this guy has the ability to see into someones mind?
haha, I guess I'll clue you in since you're the only one that doesn't know.. Yes, he does have the ability to read minds and Alice, Jasper, and Bella have other abilities too, but it's all in my next posts Quote:
I think you ended to soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hope you post soon.
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05-20-2010, 05:44 PM
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Oooohhhh!!!! *is speechless*
*is seriously speechless*
PAMS!!!!
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05-20-2010, 05:45 PM
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Originally Posted by Chocolatier Oooohhhh!!!! *is speechless*
*is seriously speechless*
PAMS!!!! bahaha, thanks  It couldn't have been that good, could it? I thought it was a little boring... I'll post more soon |
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05-20-2010, 07:18 PM
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| Snidget
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Emily PAMS PAMS
What do you mean 'who says I don't want their love?' They aren't together!!!! 
Connie, you should read the books so that you understand everything but don't tell us that they have adult content etc. etc.
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05-20-2010, 07:54 PM
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Originally Posted by KatielovesHP Emily PAMS PAMS
What do you mean 'who says I don't want their love?' They aren't together!!!!  Hahaha, in time young grasshopper. haha. That's the first thing that came to mind.  Well, I have plans for them...... I just won't tell you if you'll like those plans.... 
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05-21-2010, 10:54 PM
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In honor of graduating tomorrow, I'm giving you a specially long post (Even though they're all pretty long  ) “Not like that, dog. I mean she’s a real witch,” Alice explained.
Emily was like a deer in headlights for a half second. Seth turned to stare at her in wonder. She pulled out her wand quickly and pointed it in front of her. She started backing up. “How did you know? Who are you people?” Emily asked, her voice shaking slightly. She clutched her wand tighter, trying to keep her arm steady. “We won’t hurt you,” said Edward quietly. Emily glared at him. “Who are you people?” Emily asked again. She wouldn’t admit it out loud, but she was nervous and a little scared. If it turned into a fight, she wouldn’t have a chance. She wasn’t scared of the outcome, just what would come with the outcome. She didn’t get to tell George everything. Remus. She didn’t get to say goodbye to Remus. She and Ginny had just had a fight. And her goodbye to Draco was pretty heart breaking. She wasn’t ready to say goodbye yet. “There’s no need to say goodbye just yet,” Edward said. Emily’s eyebrows knitted in confusion. “We won’t hurt you. We’re not the bad guys.” Emily stared at him in wonder. She looked around at them all. If they had wanted to kill her, they would have tried something by now. She slowly lowered her wand. “Who are you?” she asked again in wonderment. “Vampires,” Edward and Alice said at the exact same time, raising their hands in the process.
Emily stared at them, shocked. “And Seth and I are werewolves,” said Jake slowly. Emily’s jaw literally dropped. “This is a joke, right? You can’t be werewolves. And you can’t be vampires. Why haven’t you tried to drink my blood yet?” Emily gave them an “I don’t believe you look.” “We’re…vegetarians,” said Emmett. “And what’s so unbelievable about being a werewolf?” Seth asked in a hurt voice. “Oh please. Who bit you then? And wouldn’t you have already known about my world?”
“Who bit us? Or did you mean them?” Jake asked with a quizzical look. “No, I meant you. Which werewolf bit you? Was it…Greyback?” Emily asked with a shudder. “Who’s Greyback? We weren’t bitten. We were born this way,” Seth said slowly. “I’m…confused,” Emily muttered. “They’re not exactly werewolves. They’re more like shape shifters. Their ancestors chose a wolf, so now they are werewolves. But they aren’t true werewolves,” Carlisle explained. Emily merely nodded. He smiled politely at her and she returned it. “It doesn’t make complete sense, but whatever,” she sighed.
Carlisle and the others chuckled. “I’ll explain it later,” Seth said. She nodded at him.
And he did. Seth explained, with a little help from Alice, Edward, and Jake, about the vampires and the shape shifters. He told her all about the old stories that the Elders tell them and about their adventures. He told Emily everything. And in return, she explained about her world. They had asked for her to use some magic, but she explained that she could get in trouble if she did magic outside of school before she was seventeen because it is illegal. They talked about their lives for hours and hours. Edward made them lunch and dinner, and then they sat around the fireplace, talking and bonding.
Emily looked around at her new friends. Alice was sitting on one side while Emmett and Seth were on the other. Renesmee had went to sleep a while ago, and Bella and Edward took her home. Carlisle was reading a book on the couch. Jasper and Rosalie were trying to play a game of chess, but Jasper kept controlling her emotions, which in turn made her choose different moves. See, Jasper, and Alice, Edward, and Bella for that matter, have special abilities on top of the whole vampire thing. Jasper can control people’s emotions while Alice can see the future. But Alice can only see what you’ve set your mind to, so if you change your mind, then your future would change. Edward can read other’s thoughts, which explained a lot to Emily upon her arrival. Bella’s ability is like a shield. She can shield off anything having to do with mental attacks, but not physical attacks.
It was nearing midnight and Emily was growing tired. She decided that she should probably call Remus before Molly checks in on her. “Seth, can I use your phone? Mine died this morning,” Emily said. Seth looked up from his fourth helping of scrambled eggs and bacon. She had to admit, Edward was a fantastic cook. “I don’t own one, but I’m sure the Cullen’s wouldn’t mind if you used theirs,” Seth replied. “Mr. Cullen, would it be okay if I borrowed your phone?” Emily asked politely. “Sure, here’s my cell.” Carlisle pulled out his cellular device and handed it to Emily. Emily took the phone from him and smiled. She started toward the back door, deciding privacy was the best choice for this conversation. “Excuse me for a moment,” Emily said to the room at large.
Emily slid the back door open and stepped out into the backyard. She breathed in the fresh smell of grass and pine. She stared at the phone in her hands and sighed. Avoiding the inevitable was basically impossible. Emily dialed her Godfather’s number and held her breath, waiting for him to answer. “Emily? Is everything okay?” Remus croaked. Emily closed her eyes tightly before answering. “Everything is…fine,” Emily said quietly. “Remus, we need to talk.”
“What happened?” Remus asked with a hint of worry in his tone. “Nothing, really. Honest, Remus. Everything will be fine,” Emily said. “I’m not at the Weasley’s anymore, though,” she said. She waited for him to blow up, but he didn’t. She could tell he was growing angry and worried by his silence, so she decided that she should explain quickly. “I came to La Push yesterday night. I met Draco here and we talked. Don’t be mad, Rems. I met some new people and they’re really nice. I’m over at the Cullen’s house right now. Everything’s okay, it looks like they’ve got some secrets too. Anyway, Draco left early this morning. We decided that it’d be best to just be friends. Would you like me to continue, or are you just about ready to jump in?” she asked quietly. “Why didn’t you tell me about all of this?” Remus asked quietly. He was holding back, and she could tell. “Because I thought you’d try to stop me from coming,” Emily responded. “And I would have!” Remus started yelling. He took a deep breath and tried again. “Where are you exactly? I’m coming to get you,” Remus said. “The Cullen residence, it’s near La Push,” Emily answered. “I’ll be right there,” he said. He hung up on her and she took a few minutes to finally click the phone shut. She silently walked back inside after composing herself. “Here’s your phone, Mr. Cullen,” Emily said as she handed him his phone and sat back down. She didn’t say a word to them, and she didn’t need to. They had heard the entire conversation. That was the thing about ‘werewolves’ and vampires—they had incredible hearing. Emily stared at the floor, refusing to meet anyone’s eyes. She jumped suddenly as an owl flew into the window of the living room. She gasped loudly and then went to inspect. “It’s Errol,” she muttered to herself. “Who’s Errol?” Seth asked. “Er, one of my friend’s owls,” Emily explained. “Remember, I told you they deliver our mail,” she continued. Seth nodded vaguely as Emily opened the window. She gently picked up the owl and untied the letter from its leg. She brushed her fingertips against the owl’s feathers and he nudged her hand playfully. “Are you hungry from your flight, Errol?” Emily asked him as if he could answer. He nibbled her finger. “Here you go,” Emily said as she fumbled through her purse and pulled out one of Bluejeans’ treats. She gave him one and he took it gratefully. Emily placed him on the windowsill and turned her attention to the letter. Her name was scrawled across it in an all too familiar handwriting. She unfolded it and began to read. Emily,
I feel awful. I didn’t know that she was coming over. And we were having so much fun too, or at least I was. I’m so sorry. I didn’t want you to leave. And I didn’t want you and Ginny getting in a fight from it all. Have I said I’m sorry? I really am sorry. I miss you, by the way. Not just your presence or your smile, but also your friendship and carefree laughter. I want to go back to the days of sarcasm and racing to our tree, taking naps and playing your guitar, and of course our long talks and homework sessions. I miss you. I guess I’ll see you on the train, Ems, but I just wanted to let you know.
Love, your Georgie
Emily stared at it again. Letting a few tears escape, she wondered if she should reply or if she should just ignore it all. Block it all out or let it sweep through her heart and soul? She couldn’t decide and really needed Remus’ advice. As cliché as it sounds, she was saved by the bell. A knock sounded at the door, and Emily caught her breath. Carlisle closed his book and went to answer the door.
Emily saw the wand before she saw the person it belonged to. “Where is she?” Remus yelled. “Remus! Are you insane? Put your wand down, right now!” Emily yelled back at him. She stood up swiftly and made her way to the door. “I’m fine, honestly. Put down the wand, Remus John Lupin. They aren’t dangerous, or at least, their not dangerous to us,” she tried explaining. Remus reluctantly put his wand down and stuffed it back up his sleeve. Emily tried to smile at him, but it turned into more of a grimace. He looked her up and down to make sure she wasn’t hurt or damaged in any way, and then he stepped over the threshold and engulfed her into a hug. “Don’t ever scare me like that again, Emily James Remus Amelia Sirius Black. Is that understood?” he asked. Emily nodded against his chest. He finally let go of her. He took in her appearance, and then he exploded. “WHAT WERE YOU THINKING? HUH? HE’S OUT THERE RIGHT NOW, AND HE COULD HAVE KILLED YOU! WHAT WERE YOU THINKING?” He was breathing heavily. She didn’t dare look away towards the others to see their reactions. She stared at him in fright. She was nervous and afraid, which was ironic because he’s the one that taught her to never be afraid of anything except fear itself. A tear welled up in her eye. “Remus, I—” Emily started. “You’re what, Emily? You’re sorry? Sorry for what, exactly? For defying me? For breaking my trust? For scaring me half to death? For nearly giving me a heart attack when you said that you weren’t at the Weasley’s and that you were with strangers?” Remus took a deep breath, looking down.
Emily was afraid to move, to flinch, to make a peep, to do anything. She didn’t know what kind of punishment he would give her, but she knew she wasn’t looking forward to it. Why did you leave the comfort of the Weasley’s, of George, Fred, and Ginny to get in trouble? Draco, she thought. Draco was the answer and she knew it. Even if she had known the outcome of all of this, she still would have gone to Draco. She wanted to see him, needed to see him. And so, she did, and she wouldn’t take it back for the world. She looked at her Godfather and sighed. “I know that my actions may have been wrong, but—” she started. “May have?” Remus interrupted in outrage.
Emily put up her hand up to silence him and he did. “Hear me out,” she pleaded. He nodded. “My actions may have been wrong, but, for me, they had to be made. I needed answers, Remus. I needed to come and find out the truth about Draco and me. So, I did. And I found out that, though I do love him, I’m not in love with him. I realized that I need space. I need to be away from boy drama and dating in general, or at least dating certain boys. I’m sorry for betraying your trust and running away from the Weasley’s. I’m sorry for scaring you and almost giving you a heart attack. I’m sorry, Remus, but I still wouldn’t take any of it back given the chance.” Emily stared him in the eye. She choked back a sob that threatened to release, but she wouldn’t allow it. She wouldn’t allow herself to break down, to be weak, to be afraid. She wouldn’t allow herself be embarrassed in front of her new friends. She wouldn’t allow herself to look like a fool. She was strong and independent, just like her mother, her father, and even her Godfather. “Emily, I—” Remus started. He saw her tears release, realizing how much pain this trip had actually cost her. “Why don’t we just go home?” Remus suggested. She nodded, whipping off her tears. She turned to the Cullen’s, Seth, and Jake. “Thanks for having me over and for lunch and dinner.” Emily walked up to Seth and gave him a hug. “Thanks for taking care of me and everything. I owe you one, Seth,” Emily whispered in his ear. She gave him a kiss on the cheek and made her way back over to Remus. “Let’s go home, Rems.”
*And end scene  That is the end of chapter four  I hope you enjoyed it. Tell me watchya think
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05-21-2010, 11:43 PM
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| Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Janet Lynn Gordon Fifth Year | Werecats are people too! Reader of Fan Fictions
Emily, that was great! I really enjoyed it. Although obviously I don't own the books or haven't seen the movies, it's because I don't have any interest in them. I will say however, Emily's little accidental crossover into their lives was very refreshing and entertaining. I enjoyed it immensely. Well done Emily.
Congratuations on graduation, and have a wonderful day tomorrow.
I'll be watching for your next post.
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05-21-2010, 11:54 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by Connie Emily, that was great! I really enjoyed it. Thanks, Connie Quote:
Although obviously I don't own the books or haven't seen the movies, it's because I don't have any interest in them. I will say however, Emily's little accidental crossover into their lives was very refreshing and entertaining.
Haha, yeah it's understandable. I actually wouldn't have anything to do with the series at first until my friends MADE me watch the movie, and then I was hooked. Stephanie would have done a better job entertaining you with her world Quote:
I enjoyed it immensely. Well done Emily.
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05-21-2010, 11:55 PM
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| Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8)
that was amazing  yeah lets get her home to George  PAMS PAMS PAMS TEAM GEORGE!!!!!
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05-22-2010, 08:10 PM
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Brilliant as always, Emily. I loved it! And I love the note from George... but seriously, he couldn't have made it any harder for her. Ha ha! Anyway... PAMS!!
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05-22-2010, 10:07 PM
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| Snidget
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Thanks for posting Emily!!!! I love all your posts by the way!
Have a great day tomorrow, Congrats!!!!
I am kind of glad that it didn't turn out too cross-over-ish because I liked the romance but it's your story.(SORRY)
Good luck, don't fall, cry all you want!!!! (I mean for tomorrow!)
TEAM GEORGE!!!!
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05-23-2010, 03:55 AM
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Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L) that was amazing  yeah lets get her home to George  PAMS PAMS PAMS TEAM GEORGE!!!!! Thanks, Kerri  Haha, she might be taking the scenic route Quote:
Originally Posted by Chocolatier Brilliant as always, Emily. I loved it! And I love the note from George... but seriously, he couldn't have made it any harder for her. Ha ha! Anyway... PAMS!! Thanks, Kit  Haha, yeah, but that's just boys in general. They always make everything harder Quote:
Originally Posted by KatielovesHP Thanks for posting Emily!!!! I love all your posts by the way!
Have a great day tomorrow, Congrats!!!!
I am kind of glad that it didn't turn out too cross-over-ish because I liked the romance but it's your story.(SORRY)
Good luck, don't fall, cry all you want!!!! (I mean for tomorrow!)
TEAM GEORGE!!!! Thanks, Katie  And no worries, I told you guys it was just an appearance thing.  Hehe, thankfully I didn't fall, but I did tear up a bit. 
The next post, which will be the first part of Chapter 5, will be up soon. I have to write it first though. You guys have officially caught up with me on MS Word |
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05-23-2010, 07:58 AM
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| Firecrab
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awww....it's good that Draco and emily are just friends and I hope she stays in contact with the cullens and jake and Seth. I love how u incorporated the usually two "enemy" books/movies that are ALWAYS compared, together! I hope georgie broke it off with angie and is going to confess his love to Ems SOON!!! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS!
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Originally Posted by SarahLestrange NEW READER YAY!!!! I love new readers! WELCOME to Meet You Under The Moon! Quote:
I love how u incorporated the usually two "enemy" books/movies that are ALWAYS compared, together!
Haha, me too  I love both series, so I had to put them in here at some point Quote:
I hope georgie broke it off with angie and is going to confess his love to Ems SOON!!!
Haha, I think they've actually started a club in here about THIS subject.  So, I guess, Welcome to the club Quote:
PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS!
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05-24-2010, 01:50 PM
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CHAPTER FIVE: NEW BEGINNINGS
The rest of the holiday vacation seemed to pass by quickly for Emily and Remus. She pondered telling Remus about Sirius several times, but wasn’t sure if he’d take it okay. And then there was the fact that she didn’t want to do it alone. She stayed up at night thinking of writing George back, but decided against it. She wrote Ginny a few letters, but never got any replies. She wished she had more guts—more guts to owl George, more guts to tell Remus the truth about Sirius. Before she knew it, Emily was being dropped off at the train station to go back to school. The Morgan’s had dropped her off so Remus could Apparate into Hogsmeade and then walk there and arrive before the students.
Emily said goodbye to the Morgan’s and their new baby, which they named Allison Renee. She made her way over to Platform 9 ¾ and went through the barrier that was hidden from the muggle eye. She saw a few red heads, but stayed clear of them. She loaded her luggage on the train, keeping Bluejeans with her so she’d have somebody to talk to. “Come on, Bluejeans, this compartment looks empty,” she mumbled more to herself than to her owl. He fluttered a little in his cage and Emily sighed. She heaved her trunk up into the free space and then undid the latch on Bluejeans’ cage. He flew out and perched on the tip of the windowsill. “Hey Emily! Are these seats taken?” asked Oliver Wood as he made his way inside the compartment. “Not at all, Oliver, make yourself at home,” Emily responded. He started to shut the door behind him but somebody’s foot caught it. “Whoop, do you mind if I sit in here with you two?” asked a boy from Hufflepuff. Emily recognized him as Cedric Diggory. He was very cute.
Emily nodded, blushing slightly. “As in you do mind?” he asked with a smirk.
Emily grinned. “As in you can sit here if you’d like,” she said barely above a whisper.
He smiled, stepping into the compartment. He picked up his trunk easily and placed it in the free space. Oliver did the same. Cedric sat beside Emily while Oliver, looking quite frustrated, sat across from them. Emily fished in her purse for an owl treat for Bluejeans. While extracting it, she noticed Cedric staring at her with a smirk on his face. She gave Bluejeans the treat, which he took gratefully from her and started nibbling. “What?” Emily asked, smiling embarrassedly. “When I look at you and you smile and ask, ‘What?’ all I want to do is kiss you,” Cedric said with a twinkle in his eyes. Emily blushed immensely. She had just met this guy, and he barely knew her. How come he’s so forward? Emily asked herself. “Well, er, huh,” Emily got out. Her blush intensified tenfold. She looked down, not knowing what to say.
Cedric snickered. “Did that work on you? Because I was hoping it would,” he said.
Oliver looked between the two of them. He was frustrated that Cedric, the guy girls drool over, followed him in here and ruined his chances. He was upset that Cedric was beating him to the punch. And he was desperately waiting for Emily’s response, which determined everything. “Well, er, not really,” Emily sighed. “I mean it’s a pretty good line, I’m not going to lie, but we barely know each other. Maybe you should have saved that one for some other time,” she chuckled. “So, there’s going to be another time?” Cedric whispered, scooting closer to her. Emily’s blush, which had been slowly creeping away, made its way back to her cheeks and ears. “I didn’t mean, I just meant that—” Emily was tongue tied. “What exactly do you mean?” Cedric asked quietly in a seductive whisper. “WILL YOU GO OUT WITH ME?” Oliver yelled harshly, staring at Emily.
*Hehe, I'll leave it off here. Let me know whatchya think 
Oh and by the way, the line Cedric says about smiling and saying 'what' and wanting to kiss her--that was from a bumper sticker on Facebook
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Reason: Giving credit where credit is due :)
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| SS Vaulter Firecrab
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Woah! I just caught up with you entire story so far... I feel sorry for Emily in a strange way... Draco, Cody, Cedric and Oliver all after her but she only likes George... If it was me, I'd attack Angelina and kiss George in front of EVERYONE!
PAMS EMILY, PAMS!
Abi... xox
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by 3uzz3ee NEW READER ALERT! YAY!! New reader! WELCOME to Meet You Under The Moon! Quote:
Woah! I just caught up with you entire story so far...
Wow, I know it's pretty long, so thank you for sticking with it Quote:
I feel sorry for Emily in a strange way... Draco, Cody, Cedric and Oliver all after her but she only likes George... If it was me, I'd attack Angelina and kiss George in front of EVERYONE!
hahaha, yeah maybe that's what I'll do and then end the story. They kiss and the end  That would be comical
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Originally Posted by emilyblack YAY!! New reader! Welcome to Meet You Under The Moon! Well... You've stuck with mine so I thought I'd check yours out! Quote:
Originally Posted by emilyblack Wow, I know it's pretty long, so thank you for sticking wwith it  I read the first post and got totally hooked! That's why you need to post NOW! Quote:
Originally Posted by emilyblack hahaha, yeah maybe that's what I'll do and then end the story. They kiss and the end  That would be comical  You can't do that! We need the happy ending after they kiss!
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by 3uzz3ee Well... You've stuck with mine so I thought I'd check yours out! Haha, well thanks, Abi Quote:
I read the first post and got totally hooked! That's why you need to post NOW!
Haha, I'll post more soon Quote:
You can't do that! We need the happy ending after they kiss!
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Hello Emily. This is starting to be such a fun day. Your chapter is so funny. I laughed my head off. Starting off though, I do wish she would tell Remus about Sirius. That of course is only a part of me that wishes it. For the story, I understand why you're waiting. I commend her reasoning for holding off writing George. He does need to know her intentions, but she is right to give herself time so she can talk to him without giving in to her wants. I do still want to see them get back together though. Oliver is adorable, and Cedric is a big flirt. My oh my! What a big flirt he is! HEhehehe! Girls just can't help but fall all over themselves when he just looks at them. Even Hermione blushed when she met him in the 4th book. Would they still think he's so hot with his new haircut? hehehe? I like it. I think it's a huge improvement. Great post Emily! I'll be watching for your next post.
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