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07-04-2007, 01:43 PM
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| Dugbog
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Hogwarts RPG Name: unsorted First | ...so let mercy come and wash away what I've done. Aww, poor Hermy. This has really got her brain twisted. Though I'm glad she's okay. PAMS!! Kami
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07-04-2007, 03:23 PM
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#102 (permalink)
| Moke
Join Date: Feb 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaitlynn Hopsisk Second Year | Hope is the only thing stronger than fear.
poor Hermione its not fair to her that they keep bothering her but its not fair to them that she won't say whats wrong.Good post.PAMS
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07-04-2007, 10:16 PM
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| Jarvey
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woo Lisa!! i finally finished reading it (SS decided to cooperate, at last!) its a very great FF, i'm glad i'm reading it. guess what you should do now....POST! |
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07-05-2007, 12:52 AM
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#104 (permalink)
| Formerly: DanFan4eva  Billywig
Join Date: May 2006
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| Thank you all for you post lol.I will get to the next chapter.Mind you there is a poll so please make your vote.
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07-05-2007, 02:19 PM
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| DA News Officer Puffskein
Join Date: May 2006 Location: Just being me!
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sylvannas Quickspeed Sixth |
I...SHALL....VOTE!!!
Katie
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07-05-2007, 05:03 PM
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| Formerly: DanFan4eva  Billywig
Join Date: May 2006
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| ~Chapter 14~
The next day Hermione was able to go,so she got out of her bed,took her books and bag and changed into gryffindor clothes.
"God...this is all bloody messed up." She said to herself.
When she finally finished, she walked straight to the door, opening it. As the doors were opening and Hermione had a clear view, she saw Draco in front of her.
She gave an angry expression and walked passed him without saying a word.
"Hermione,wait...!" He yelled.
She turned around really fast and stared at him, "What is it Draco?"
"I-I'm sorry for yesterday." He looked down at the floor.
Hermine gave a, "It's ok hun. I totally forgive you." look as she walked foward to him.
Draco looked up- SLAP!
Right on his right cheek. "Ok...I might of needed that for what happen that day." He said rubbing his cheek.
"Yes!You did Draco Malfoy." Hermione then walked away, but Draco grabbed her arm and twirled her back to him and had their bodies as one. His head came closer and closer.
His lips touched hers and Hermione didn't even bother to fight it. Even after everything she still allowed him to kiss her.
Hermione wrapped her arms around his neck and he cupped his hand on her face. Their kissed seemed like it was hours.
Hermione had finally let go and tried to breathe."Ok ,OK I surrender."
Draco smiled and she did as well. They held hands and walked to their class.
Everyone was surprised when they saw them walking in the halls together with their hands tightly pressed as one.
Everybody kept looking at them. One girl almost cried that it wasn't her. One student smacked their face into a wall. It was all such a shock to them all.
Draco didn't care much, but Hermione did. She was worried that Harry and Ron would see her.
"Draco...are you sure you want to do this? I mean let people see us." She said not too loud.
"Yes..." He replied back.
Hermione then remembered her rule. "You know your breaking one of my rules in a way."
"That was a days ago Hermione." Hermione became worried but still went with it.
Harry and Ron were walking to class and while walking they saw a glimpse of Hermione with...Draco.They walked backwards to see if the two were still there. Hermione and Draco were no longer there.
"Di..did you just see what i saw?" Harry asked.
"I...i think i did Harry." Ron blinked in shock.
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07-05-2007, 08:01 PM
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#107 (permalink)
| Augurey
Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: left SS for good
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Uh-oh. Are they gonna find out??? Hehe...Hermy slapped him.  PAMS PAMS PAMS!!!
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07-05-2007, 10:29 PM
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#108 (permalink)
| DA News Officer Puffskein
Join Date: May 2006 Location: Just being me!
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sylvannas Quickspeed Sixth |
POSTED SISTER! I thought that was so cool! Hermione and Draco came out of the closet! Who Hoo!
Katie
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07-05-2007, 10:33 PM
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#109 (permalink)
| Formerly: DanFan4eva  Billywig
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| Quote:
Uh-oh. Are they gonna find out??? Hehe...Hermy slapped him. PAMS PAMS PAMS!!!
Maybe.You are just going to have to find out little missy.I will past soon. Quote:
POSTED SISTER! I thought that was so cool! Hermione and Draco came out of the closet! Who Hoo!
Yup!
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07-05-2007, 11:16 PM
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#110 (permalink)
| Fwooper
Join Date: Jul 2006
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gasp! what will happen!?? ohh the suspense!
PAMS!! PAMSOID!!
XOXO,
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07-06-2007, 12:59 AM
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#111 (permalink)
| Moke
Join Date: Feb 2006
Posts: 8,623
Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaitlynn Hopsisk Second Year | Hope is the only thing stronger than fear.
I love it and if Ron and Harry found out and either of them throws a fit I will wish I could strangle them.good post PAMS.
~Heather
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07-07-2007, 04:01 PM
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| Formerly: DanFan4eva  Billywig
Join Date: May 2006
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| Not a lot of comments.But any who here is another chapter. ~Chapter 15~ Hermione's POV:
I was still holding Draco's hand and I couldn't let go.I didn't know why but i just kept my hand still in his.
While walking in the hall to our class I felt very uncomfortable.Everyone was looking and I was worried if Harry or Ron saw me with Draco.
"Aren't you happy we can finally let our secret out." I gave a small smile and spoke.
"Oh sure..." Draco smiled at me.What more could happen to me!
Once we were in the class Draco brought me to a desk.He sat down on one of the chairs and looked up at me. "Sit with me." He said.
Sit with him, Is he mad.Draco was going to far.I could be seen by Harry and Ron any second.
The door opened again and it was the boys.I quickly sat to the desk that was next to Draco's desk. Draco looked at me in confusion.
"Why are you there!? he said to me.
"Uh... I felt more comfortable here...yea." I gave him a smile and then looked at my books.Now to think of it..did I really like Draco,or was this for nothing.
"Hello Hermione" I Jumped and turned and saw Ron. He sat next to me without any asking.
"Not now Ronald.We are starting class." I told him. I turned to the teacher.All four of us didn't talk once class started.It seemed to me as if Ron and Harry saw me and Draco.... I know its a bit short. I will try to get the other chapter longer.
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07-07-2007, 04:14 PM
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#113 (permalink)
| Fwooper
Join Date: Jul 2006
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great!
PAMS!! PAMSOID!!
XOXO,
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07-07-2007, 07:26 PM
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#114 (permalink)
| DA News Officer Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sylvannas Quickspeed Sixth |
Uh-oh! Did he see them? Watch out 'Mione! PAMS!!
Katie
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07-07-2007, 11:29 PM
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#115 (permalink)
| Dugbog
Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: In my own little world
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Hogwarts RPG Name: unsorted First | Great post! I have a friend Ron and my mother calls him Ronald. Hermione reminds me a bit of my mother. I hope he didn't see them. PAMS!! Kami
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07-07-2007, 11:42 PM
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#116 (permalink)
| Augurey
Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: left SS for good
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Hmm...interesting. PAMS PAMS PAMS!!!
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07-08-2007, 01:55 AM
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#117 (permalink)
| DA News Officer Puffskein
Join Date: May 2006 Location: Just being me!
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sylvannas Quickspeed Sixth |
Must have a post soon sister!
Katie
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07-08-2007, 04:01 PM
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#118 (permalink)
| Formerly: DanFan4eva  Billywig
Join Date: May 2006
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| Thank you for all your comments.I promise you i will get to the next chapter soon,but not now.
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07-08-2007, 04:17 PM
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#119 (permalink)
| Moke
Join Date: Feb 2006
Posts: 8,623
Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaitlynn Hopsisk Second Year | Hope is the only thing stronger than fear.
Hermione just let it out.Good post.PAMS
~Heather
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07-08-2007, 11:40 PM
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| Formerly: DanFan4eva  Billywig
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| Your last Chapter!! ~Chapter 16~
After class Hermione took her bag and books. She rushed out of the room. Draco was about to walk with her but Harry and Ron raced to followed her.
"Yes boys?" She knew they were behind her.
"Tell us. Were you with Malfoy." Hermione was still walking and yet the boys tried to catch up with her.
"His name is Draco."Hermione said angrily.
The boys gasped. Hermione stopped and turned to look at them.
"Yes I said his name.No big deal,its just a name."
"But it's an evil name." Ron told her.She had rolled her eyes.
"Listen you want to know why I've been odd for the past months." Ron and Harry nodded.
Hermione looked around to see if any one was around.There really was no reason for her to look around but she did anyway.
"I've been going out with Draco this whole time but I wanted it to be a secret." Harry and Ron's jaws dropped in much shock.
"See, this is why I never should have told you two.You both would be shocked. Then your going to say crazy stupid things about him and tell me not to be with and stuff!!"
The two were still in shocked, but one of them had to speak, so Harry started to speak.
"I'm sorry 'Mione.It fine,if you love him then it's fine with the both of us."
"The both of us?!" Ron blurted out.Harry punched him the ribs.
"Ow..." Ron yelled.
"Yes the both of us." Harry repeated.
Hermione gave a smile and walked off. She was glad they understood, but Hermione never had the same feelings as Draco did for her those past months. Hermione need to make this right and do something.
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Harry and Ron were in the great hall eating their food.Hermione told them she'd meet them as soon as she finished up and few things.
Draco was also in the great hall sitting at the slytherin table talking to Blaise.They were talking about his relationship with Hermione.He was pretty happy about it and really didn't care what people thought.
Hermione had came in the room changed into comfortable fit gryffindor clothes.She walked up the the table where Draco was.
Blaise looked up and had seen Hermione walking up to the table. "Draco,you girlfriend." He told him.Draco turned around and smiled at at her.
Placing her hands on the end of the table and looking right at Draco she spoke. "We need to talk,babe." Draco smirk and thought the talking was a good thing. Hermione went straight to the door and Draco got up and followed her.
As soon as they got out Draco took right on the wall and started to kiss her on the lips. "Draco stop!" she told him but he didn't.
"Get off of me Draco!" She had pushed him off of her.
"This wasn't for this. I..." She started
Malfoy looked at her body figure.Up and down his eyes strolled.He had then looked at her face so she wouldn't get mad.
"...I want to break up Draco." Hermione had finally told him with a soft tone.
"YOU WHAT!" Draco yelled.
"Please Draco..."
"Don't please Draco me, Hermione."
Everyone in the great hall could hear Draco from the hall.They all looked at each other being confused.
"Had Hermione done something?" One Ravenclaw girl said to her friend.
"That Granger girl must of dumped the guy." a Hufflepuff boy said.
In the hall Hermione wanted to cry but she didn't. She stood tall and looked at Draco straight in the eyes.
"Don't yell at me! I broke up with you for a reason Draco."
Her voice became softer "I think your a great guy but... I never really loved you." She told him. "I never wanted to hurt you my slytherin prince. Never at all."
Draco looked at her in a deep stare. He came closer to her and cupped his hand on her face.
He had gave a deep passionate kiss and then let go. "I will always love you my Gryffindor princess." He said softly.
Hermione smiled and hugged him. Letting go she wiped the tears that fell form her eyes.
With that, she left him going back to the great hall living her life as once a single mudblood girl....
I know its all sudden but I had so many thoughts that it was to much.So there I finished it just like that.Hope you like it and thank you for all your support and comments.
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07-09-2007, 01:35 AM
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#121 (permalink)
| Augurey
Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: left SS for good
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OMG! They broke up! That was good. I'm sad it's over. =(
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07-09-2007, 01:37 AM
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#122 (permalink)
| Moke
Join Date: Feb 2006
Posts: 8,623
Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaitlynn Hopsisk Second Year | Hope is the only thing stronger than fear.
NOOO hermione why.He loved her and and *cryz*.Great ending.
~Heather
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07-09-2007, 01:53 AM
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#123 (permalink)
| Dugbog
Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: In my own little world
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Hogwarts RPG Name: unsorted First | Hermione Jane Granger how could you?! What do you mean by that? Was this all a joke? am I going crazy? Am I really hitting myself in the head with a huge text book because I find this so hard to believe?! OMG! I think I really am going crazy!! PAMS!! Kami
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07-09-2007, 02:33 PM
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#124 (permalink)
| Fwooper
Join Date: Jul 2006
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omg I cant believe that!
XOXO,
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07-10-2007, 09:38 PM
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| Lobalug
Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: california
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omg!!!!! how could you end it just like that?!?! there better be a sequal...now im sad*sniff sniff* no drama, no nothing!...i still think there should be a sequal!!! *believe it*
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