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06-16-2007, 06:37 AM
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#51 (permalink)
| | Puffskein
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Awesome update 
Yeah, what's with all the bad words?  That and the name mis-spelling (it's Crabbe, not 'Crabb', and 'Goyle', not 'Goyal'. Sorry if I sound rude or anything, but it's just so you know for later on)
Anyways, PAMSOID!
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06-16-2007, 03:54 PM
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#52 (permalink)
| | Fwooper
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great!
PAMS!! PAMSOID!!
XOXO,
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06-16-2007, 08:15 PM
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#53 (permalink)
| | Puffskein
Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: With my lovely vampires ♥
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OMG! they almost got caught! PAMS!
-Bells ♥♥
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06-17-2007, 11:33 AM
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#54 (permalink)
| | Nogtail
Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Hogwarts School of W
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Whew, that was close!
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06-17-2007, 07:58 PM
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#55 (permalink)
| | Moke
Join Date: Feb 2006
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Second Year |  Hope is the only thing stronger than fear.
oh my gosh that was like really close.Good post PAMS
ur bestie
~Heather
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06-18-2007, 08:31 PM
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#56 (permalink)
| Formerly: DanFan4eva  Billywig
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~Chapter 7~
Hermione walked onto the grass and sat near a tall tree that was two inches away from the dock. She sat down and could see the bright sun
brightening her way.
While relaxing and thinking at the same time she thought of the kiss Draco had given her.
"Why does it have to be him though...why?" She asked herself. Hermione sighed and looked at the lake that shimmered.
"Do i really want to make a risk?" She had then got up and walked closer the lake. Sitting side ways facing the black lake she swirled her finger into the lake.
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Ron raced to the Common room to get harry.He was rushing to the halls. "HARRY!" He said once getting into the room.Harry turned his head quickly facing Ron.
"Yes..? Ron tried to get his words.
"Come..... with..... me." Harry was lost but just got up from his seat and followed Ron.
"I need you to come with me to talk to Hermione."
"Why do we need to talk to her?"
"Bloody, Harry. Do you have to keep asking questions?" Ron was getting annoyed.
"I guess" Harry said.
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As Hermione was relaxing near the warm sun and near the nice calm water she closed her eyes and lied down on the grass.
"Hermione..?" A voice called.
"Hermione!" It called again.
She perked up and looked around to see who was calling her.
"What now!" She didn't want anyone now. Not at this very second.
"What do you want now?" She said to the person.
Who could be bothering Hermione? Ron?Harry? Or Draco?
And does Ron really have to go into Her privacy?
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06-18-2007, 10:14 PM
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#57 (permalink)
| | Fwooper
Join Date: Jul 2006
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great!
pams!! pamsoid!!
xoxo,
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06-18-2007, 11:33 PM
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#58 (permalink)
| | Puffskein
Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: With my lovely vampires ♥
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ugh my comp is too slow 
anyways good postie!! eeek to short though! PAMSOID!
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06-20-2007, 05:35 PM
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#59 (permalink)
| | Firecrab
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New reader.Good Post.I like the story its really good.PAMS
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06-21-2007, 01:21 AM
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#60 (permalink)
| | Moke
Join Date: Feb 2006
Posts: 8,623
Hogwarts RPG Name:
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Second Year | Hope is the only thing stronger than fear.
Are you saying Ron caught them...oh no oh no.Good post but a little to much suspence.Still love ya.PAMS
~Heather
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06-22-2007, 10:50 AM
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| Formerly: DanFan4eva Billywig
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~Chapter 8~
While looking at the person,Hermione got up. She couldn't really see them clearly but she knew who it was.
"Hermione,are you there?" Ron asked.Hermione stared at him. "Yes,right here!" Ron had spot her and walked up to her with Harry.
"Ron wants to ask you something!" Harry said looking at Hermione then Ron.
"Yes,Ronald?" Ron took a deep breathe.
Hermione made a waiting pose and gave him an annoyed look. "Come on! I have no time here! I'm a busy women!"
"Well, is anything going on... you seem a bit... off?"
"Off? I'm not off." Hermione began to panic,she had a feeling that Ron might get on to something.
"Listen Ron,don't be going into my life.You know i hate that!"
"True,but I'm you friend and i need to know if you're ok."
"Do i look like I'm hurt?" She put out her arms and showed herself to him.
"no, but-"
"GO RONALD!" Hermione pointed the way for them to go.The two boys left walking really fast.
Hermione then walked back to the lake, but then Something in the bushes came rattling. She turned facing the bush. "who's there!" She called out.
Taking her wand out she pointed it to the bush.
Draco had come out smiling. "Ello,babe!"
Hermione was in relief and put her wand back in her pocket. "Don't you ever scare me like that,Draco."
She sat down on a stone and looked up at him. "Sorry, my shoe was caught into a branch and when i pulled it out i rolled out and I'm here... smiling at your pretty face." He told her.
Hermione thought to herself. was he here long? Did he hear what she was talking about? "Draco,how long where you in that bush?"
Draco wiped the dirt of his pants then looked at her. "Not long, just when Ron and Harry came talking to you..." Hermione was suprised that He said their actual names.
"Did you just say Ron and Harry..?" She asked him looking amazed.
"Well your my girlfriend i should at least respect your friends even though I despise them a lot."
Hermione laughed a little. "Well that interesting,but thank you."
Draco sat a rock and told her to come sit with him. Hermione sat on his lap and wrapped her arms around him. She then lied her head on his chest.
Being close to him made her feel very protected. She did love Draco but the thing is he was "Draco". Everyone hated him,even for Harry and Ron. She could never tell them,but see couldn't keep this relationship a secret forever.It wouldn't be right.
Hermione sighed and just rested in Draco's arms.He kissed her head and watched the sunset blaze through everything and watch the different colors.
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06-22-2007, 01:07 PM
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#62 (permalink)
| | Fwooper
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great!
PAMS!! PAMSOID!!
XOXO,
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06-24-2007, 02:12 AM
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#63 (permalink)
| | Moke
Join Date: Feb 2006
Posts: 8,623
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Second Year | Hope is the only thing stronger than fear.
I loved it.Gooder post PAMS.
~Heather
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06-26-2007, 03:50 PM
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#64 (permalink)
| Formerly: DanFan4eva Billywig
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I'm surprised not a lot posted, but to those who did thank you. Any who here is another chapter.
~Chapter 9~
The next day Hermione was sitting at a table in the great hall. She was eating her food all calm and relaxed. Hermione actually seemed happy,but what with? Her being with Draco and the secret?
Harry and Ron came walking in the great hall with their books. "Hey Hermione!" Said Harry waving.
Hermione turned and smiled. "Ello, you two, whats have you boys been up to?" She asked once they got up to her.
Both boys looked at her and saw she was smiling. Before, they saw her all frustrated,mad, and confused.
" 'Mione...?" Ron sat down on the other side while saying those words.
"Yes Ronald?" Hermione said in a sweet happy voice.
Harry was worried, what was going on with Hermione. He looked at Ron and Ron looked at him then they both looked at Hermione.
"Hermione, is anything going on that we don't know. Please tell us. We are your friends." Harry said looking at her.Deep at her face.
Hermione let her smiled go. "There is nothing going on,I promise." She lied then smiled.
She had then took her wand and made her plate disappear. She took her books and got off her seat. "There is nothing going on." She told them again, then left.
Once almost walking out of the door Draco came in. He saw Hermione just passing him.
He thought Ron and Harry did something to her, and took a quick glimps. They both were talking and looked like they did nothing,but Draco couldn't let his eyes be lied to. He had then walked out of the Great hall.
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06-26-2007, 03:56 PM
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#65 (permalink)
| | Moke
Join Date: Feb 2006
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Second Year | Hope is the only thing stronger than fear.
I hope they don't know.Draco cares alot about Hermione and thats realoy sweet.Don't worry im always here fo you.PAMS
~Heather
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06-26-2007, 08:01 PM
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#66 (permalink)
| | Fwooper
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great!
PAMS!! PAMSOID!!
XOXO,
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06-27-2007, 01:10 AM
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#67 (permalink)
| DA News Officer Puffskein
Join Date: May 2006 Location: Just being me!
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Lisa! We need more Dramione scenes! Let Draco make everything be ok!
Katie
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06-27-2007, 07:50 AM
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#68 (permalink)
| | Nogtail
Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Hogwarts School of W
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Oh! I did miss a lot. Sorry...Hermione's right, she can't keep it a secret forever. PAMS
__________________ †Luna Lovegood,Evanna Lynch,J.K. Rowling, Sirius Black,Gred & Forge,Dumbledore's Army,Harry Potter,Draco Malfoy,Sibyll Trelawney†
†{Mindy Song, First Year Ravenclaw} {Emma's Twinnie Forever!} Luna and Nargles {Thanks to Tink for the siggy!} {Believe in yourself.}†
A true friend | You're here 'til the end
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06-28-2007, 11:10 PM
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#69 (permalink)
| | Firecrab
Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: thats not for you to
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Does he know something or is he just playing around.Soory i hadnt posted in a while grandparents came.Good post.PAMS.
Jake
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06-28-2007, 11:27 PM
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#70 (permalink)
| | Augurey
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This is good! I don't typically read D/H fics, but this is awesome! Harry and Ron are going to figure it out eventually.....PAMS PAMS PAMS!
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06-29-2007, 12:55 AM
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#71 (permalink)
| | Puffskein
Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: With my lovely vampires ♥
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Good job Lisa! Keep it goin! PAMS!
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06-29-2007, 05:40 PM
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#72 (permalink)
| Formerly: DanFan4eva Billywig
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Eek! so many comment. I must reply back! *goes to reply*
Sorry everyone for making you wait. I will post another chappie soon. Quote:
I hope they don't know.Draco cares a lot about Hermione and thats really sweet.Don't worry im always here fo you.PAMS
lets hope they dont.
Draco does care for her.  Quote:
Lisa! We need more Dramione scenes! Let Draco make everything be ok!
yes i know.I will put more dramione and i'll make sure Draco know everything ok. Quote:
Oh! I did miss a lot. Sorry...Hermione's right, she can't keep it a secret forever. PAMS
True...but she knows she can't tell Harry and Ron about Draco.I probably would't to it either. Quote:
Does he know something or is he just playing around.Soory i hadnt posted in a while grandparents came.Good post.PAMS.
No, he just worried about Hermione and thought that maybe Harry and Ron did somthing. Quote:
This is good! I don't typically read D/H fics, but this is awesome! Harry and Ron are going to figure it out eventually.....PAMS PAMS PAMS!
Lol, thank you anyway.Glad you liked it.Hehe i get alot. 
Harry and Ron possibly might know,will just have to see. Quote:
Good job Lisa! Keep it goin! PAMS!
Aww thank you Bellzie. i ♥ you!
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06-30-2007, 12:50 AM
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| Formerly: DanFan4eva Billywig
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~Chapter 10~Draco's POV:
I had walked in halls thinking about Hermione. She wasn't herself at all.
Our relationship was getting to her, and with the secret it's beginning to be complicated. It's ruining her to pieces.I don't want her like this!
I became very angry and banged my hands onto the walls.Hurting myself was all for Hermione.
Letting my hands stay there and my head hang while looking at the ground. I just stood there in the middle of the hall.I
Had then heard footsteps walking my way.Right there was my girlfriend in a daze. "Hermione, are you..?" I spoke, still looking at her.
She then came out of her daze and looked at me.Tears came falling down her cheeks.
Her eyes became watery and a bit red. "T..This is breaking me apart Draco....I don't know what do now..." She felt more confused than ever. My poor Hermione was lost and hurt.
I walked up to her and put my arms around her letting her cry her heart out. I held her tight into my arms making her feel more calmer and warm.
"I think it would be best to tell now, Hermione. You and I should tell our secret."
She was silent. I heard nothing...no peep out of her. Hermione just stood there in my arms.
''Mione!?!" I panicked.
I took her off me and looked at her.Hermione's eyes we closed.I put her down on the floor and then put my ear against her chest.
Nothing...her heart had stopped. "HERMIONE!" I yelled. I thought to myself, was she dead...but what kind of boyfriend would think that.She couldn't. Had she fainted?Then i thought that must be it,but was it really?
EEK! No more.Done for today.Post whats you think had happed and so on with your comments.
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06-30-2007, 12:50 AM
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#74 (permalink)
| | Dugbog
Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: In my own little world
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OMG! I missed so many great post! I'm so sorry. Your story is awesome. Draco really cares about Hermione, that's so sweet. I'm on the verg of tears right now. I don't want Hermione to die. Please let Hermione be ok. It can't just end like that!
PAMS!!
Kami
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Reason: Don't let Hermione die... Don't let Hermione die... Don't let Hermione die... Don't let hermione die... Don't die Hermione!
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06-30-2007, 01:00 AM
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#75 (permalink)
| | Fwooper
Join Date: Jul 2006
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omg the suspense!!
PAMS!! PAMSOID!!
XOXO,
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