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04-09-2008, 06:29 PM
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#26 (permalink)
| | Ghost
Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Shiz
Posts: 70,310
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Xavieria Bole
Graduated
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Lissy Longbottom  LMAO!  Update soon, puhlease  haha. Poor Cliffie. Bella's gonna smother him when he comes back Quote:
Originally Posted by Fire Eyes*Tayzer* NEW READER.
Ohhh, I think this is very clever. *nods* Something about it I can't quite place....but it's quite original and interesting. Can't wait to read more!
Taylor  Wish I could help you out... if you have any questions just ask me (or Bella) But I'm glad you like Quote:
Originally Posted by eric_2007al_2006 Oh poor Maddie. I'm sure she'll find a friend, who could not love her? oh and btw PAMS!!! Awww that's sweet.
Bella:  You're nice. Quote:
Originally Posted by Willow_Kovac YES! NEWUPDATE 
xD
I love Maddie almost as much as I love Bella  Enough said  Bella: *clears throat*
Well um, thank you. *runs* Quote:
Originally Posted by Tinkerbell* I think she just needs a Tree Boy. Not a girl.
Can't wait to read more. I love this. ^__^ Bella: 
Me: *sigh* We all know what she needs.
Okay. This update won't be as fun as the others have been.. a lot of drama went down last night... and Bella hardly slept. *pets her*
Tree boy likes to dance. Who would have thought?
He asked her to dance with him. First she told him no, but then she felt bad.
What was wrong with dancing anyway?
They were only friends right?
Of course.
But then, when it was starting to get fun, her boyfriend showed up, and he was not very happy.
But why should he worry? There was no kissing.
Maddie doubted that kissing had even crossed Tree Boy's mind.
He handled himself well, which she was thankful for.
With his past relationships, she didn't want him to think that she was cheating on him.
Feeling rather foolish, she introduced them.
Lame.
It wasn't like they already knew each other!
Still lame.
What was a girl to do?
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04-09-2008, 06:32 PM
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#27 (permalink)
| Formerly: Dracos_Lady  Kappa
Join Date: Jan 2007
Posts: 14,819
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Hugo Jermaine Woods
Seventh Year | avant-garde Mrs. Nick Jonas
YAYAAYAAAA *Luffles*
Awwwsh, I love Bella Maddie  Keep updating daughter 
__________________ Hugo&Georgie FOREVER AND EVER
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04-09-2008, 06:52 PM
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#28 (permalink)
| | Ghost
Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Shiz
Posts: 70,310
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Xavieria Bole
Graduated
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Dracos_Lady YAYAAYAAAA *Luffles*
Awwwsh, I love Bella Maddie Keep updating daughter Thanks Daddy
Desperate times call for desperate measures...
What do you do when you've got both a boyfriend and a potential love interest?
The answer is quite simple...
HIDE!!
Somewhere where not a lot of people would be, somewhere where neither Tree Boy or Boyfriend would find her.
How about the Trophy Room?
Random...
Anyway, Maddie found a girl there, a girl with a cat to be exact.
Maddie is scared of cats, in case I never told you this.
Besides that, she is quite allergic to them.
But after a short sneezing hit, the cat left, and she was good.
The Hufflepuff girl was very nice, and she picked up immediately that something was wrong.
At first, Maddie was hesitant to tell this girl what was wrong.
But if you are going to trust anyone, a Hufflepuff is your best bet right?
Simply talking to this girl made her realize something that her subconscious had been hiding from her.
She liked Tree Boy.
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04-09-2008, 06:57 PM
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#29 (permalink)
| | Kneazle
Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: England.
Posts: 22,372
| I'M A GLEEK! | | Rupert & McAvoy ♥ I'm a Cutie Patootie
*GASP*
She likes Tree Boy?! -dead-
updateupdateupdate.
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'Your girlfriend is not more important
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04-09-2008, 07:06 PM
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#30 (permalink)
| | Ghost
Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Shiz
Posts: 70,310
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Xavieria Bole
Graduated
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Tinkerbell* *GASP*
She likes Tree Boy?! -dead-
updateupdateupdate. It's true.
Okay!
Wait!
What is going on here?
Maddie's boyfriend thinks that Tree Boy likes her.... actually, he said he knows.
Something you have to understand before you go on to pick your favorite, Boyfriend is a Vampire.
Apparently Vampires can read people's minds.
And Maddie has been on Tree Boy's mind a lot.
The more she thinks about that, the harder her heart beats.
So let's not let her pass out, cause sick people scare me.
Kay? Thanks.
Well, there is only one way for her to find out was was going on for sure.
She's gonna have to ask him.
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04-09-2008, 07:16 PM
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#31 (permalink)
| | Occamy
Join Date: May 2007 Location: London
Posts: 63,509
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Cora Dredworth
Sixth Year
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| connoisseur of comfort ❅ Crayola's Wibby Mrs Alex Turner ❅ Netflix and meow
ILUFFMADDIE!!! And Bella.
This is getting veeeery interesting.
*coughsoyoushouldaddmorenowcough*
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04-09-2008, 07:23 PM
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#32 (permalink)
| | Ghost
Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Shiz
Posts: 70,310
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Xavieria Bole
Graduated
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Red Squirrel ILUFFMADDIE!!! And Bella.
This is getting veeeery interesting.
*coughsoyoushouldaddmorenowcough* Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeell if you insist
Maddie had a dream last night.
An odd dream at that.
She was dancing with Tree Boy, and suddenly, he stopped.
"What's wrong?" she asked him, watching as the expression on his face hardened.
Without a word, he let go of her hands and pushed her off of a cliff that suddenly appeared.
Fear: Falling
She landed in a thick ocean of chocolate.
Fear: Drowning.
A boat suddenly appeared out of nowhere and she immediately saw Boyfriend.
She called out to him, but he wouldn't even look at her.
Fear: Rejection
The waves crashed around her and pulled her underneath.
Fear: Overwhelming Emotions.
Then suddenly, everything changed.
She was standing in a completely empty room, holding Tree Boy's hand.
Boyfriend was standing behind them, looking down at their hands.
No one spoke.
Fear: Hurting Someone.
Then she woke up with her heart beating fast in her chest.
She spent the rest of the night hugging her knees to her chest.
She didn't go back to sleep.
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04-09-2008, 07:34 PM
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#33 (permalink)
|   DMACOccamy
Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Disneyland
Posts: 63,102
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Dezi Willard
Fifth Year x2
| Mrs. Alex Turner *asterisks user* Secret Door
Oh Gosh. 
That is sad. *sniffle*
But I really did like the previous chapter. *cough*
Hmmm...back to this one ... that is alot of fear. And way too much fears in just one dream. *cuddles Bella*
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04-09-2008, 07:47 PM
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#34 (permalink)
| | Kneazle
Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: England.
Posts: 22,372
| I'M A GLEEK! | | Rupert & McAvoy ♥ I'm a Cutie Patootie
:O:O
Poor Bella Maddie.
That's such a horrible dream. -pets her-
-goes to RP so you can write more about Tree Boy-
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04-09-2008, 07:52 PM
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#35 (permalink)
| Neville's Patronus Jobberknoll
Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: At home.... duh
Posts: 4,122
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Sabrina Dumbledore
Fourth Year |
Awwww:hugs: poor Maddie, why doesn't Bella do anything????
Boyfriend is a vampire!!! sheez, I go away and lots of shockers appear! I'm not leaving this fic again.
*pitches a tent, sets up a sleeping bag, and lights a campfire*
Please PAMS!!!!
Jemmz
xxx
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04-09-2008, 07:58 PM
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#36 (permalink)
| | Giant
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Ferrix: GMT-6
Posts: 56,908
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Moritz Schultz (#0f667e)
Ravenclaw Seventh Year
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Nancy Schultz (#ac6f77)
Hufflepuff Fourth Year  x11 x1
| curly haired prefect - "sometimes I get angry!" - 30/90 - *chicken emoji* - probably @ Disney - I speak dog
ZOMG. So many updates 
Update! I need more!
__________________ I'm still standin'________________________________________ better than I ever did
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04-10-2008, 12:31 AM
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#37 (permalink)
| | Knarl
Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Dharmaville™
Posts: 9,334
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Jack Fletcher
Fourth Year | Dumbledore's Licorice Snaps Chipotle!
Well that's a lot of updates.. 
Awwwww....poor boyfriend. =/ PAMSOID!
__________________ Have at thee!
But who's that ghost who keeps walking by my door?
Tell me, how long could you hang on to a word?
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04-10-2008, 06:02 PM
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#38 (permalink)
| | Ghost
Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Shiz
Posts: 70,310
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Xavieria Bole
Graduated
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Fire Eyes*Tayzer* Well that's a lot of updates..
Awwwww....poor boyfriend. =/ PAMSOID! hehe. A lot happened that needed to be documented Quote:
Originally Posted by Lissy Longbottom ZOMG. So many updates
Update! I need more! OMG! *updates faster* Quote:
Originally Posted by Sabrina_Snape Awwww:hugs: poor Maddie, why doesn't Bella do anything????
Boyfriend is a vampire!!! sheez, I go away and lots of shockers appear! I'm not leaving this fic again.
*pitches a tent, sets up a sleeping bag, and lights a campfire*
Please PAMS!!!!
Jemmz
xxx LMAO!
*gives you a plate of cookies*
Such loyal fans Quote:
Originally Posted by Tinkerbell* :O:O
Poor Bella Maddie.
That's such a horrible dream. -pets her-
-goes to RP so you can write more about Tree Boy- Thank you for your help Tree Boy inspired this update Quote:
Originally Posted by Panda Bear Oh Gosh.
That is sad. *sniffle*
But I really did like the previous chapter. *cough*
Hmmm...back to this one ... that is alot of fear. And way too much fears in just one dream. *cuddles Bella*
.......She doesn't bite, does she? Bella doesnt like to show people when she is scared, it's considered a weakness in her family which is why she keeps it all inside. *pets her*
And she only bites when provoked.
Bella:
Boys.
Why did they both have to be so.... wonderful?
Why couldn't they both see her as someone in the way, and cast her aside?
That way the only one to get hurt would be Maddie. Not Tree Boy, and not Boyfriend.
Maddie talked to Tree Boy yesterday, it was a good talk.
A much needed talk.
One that was both nerve wracking and fun.
But the best times in your life are always like that aren't they?
The best part about it, besides being with Tree Boy, was that no one bothered them.
Not chocolate hating girl...
Not Boyfriend...
And not New Girl- whom Maddie had only just learned about.
This New Girl development does not make her happy.
Sure, she might be a nice enough girl, but not when she was trying to steal Tree Boy.
He was Maddie's Tree Boy.
Not her Tree Boy.
Let's move along before she realizes how hypocritical she is acting.
Where was I?
Oh yes, Tree Boy.
It turns out that Boyfriend had been right, Tree Boy did like her.
And she, still trying to protect all three of them, was trying so hard not to let that affect her judgment.
She was focusing too much on protecting him, that she neglected her own feelings.
She liked him too. A lot.
After she left Tree Boy, she went to find Boyfriend.
Now don't think that Maddie is just some little flirt who switches boys whenever she gets bored.
Because that is the total opposite of the truth.
The polar opposite.
She likes them both very much, but in different ways.
I have a feeling I'm going to have to explain that a lot.
Back to boyfriend:
He was being uber sweet to her, even though he knew that she knew that he knew she had been with Tree Boy today.
Did you catch that?
Okay. Good.
He told her that she was beautiful and kissed her neck.
He was trying harder to show her how he really felt, and she wished that Tree Boy would do the same thing.
But she knew he wouldn't. He wouldn't try to steal her away.
Had she not been so confused about Tree Boy and Boyfriend, she would have been on cloud nine.
Then again, if cloud nine was a place caught between two people she cared about, and maybe even loved, then she didn't want to be there.
No thank you.
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04-10-2008, 06:10 PM
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#39 (permalink)
| | Kneazle
Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: England.
Posts: 22,372
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Awesome update.
What's Maddie gonna dooooo?
-still loves Tree Boy-
He was so nice yesterday.
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than the whole universe!'
'SHE IS TO ME!' | |
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04-10-2008, 06:56 PM
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#40 (permalink)
| Formerly: Dracos_Lady Kappa
Join Date: Jan 2007
Posts: 14,819
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Hugo Jermaine Woods
Seventh Year | avant-garde Mrs. Nick Jonas
New girl? Wonder who thaaat could be
__________________ Hugo&Georgie FOREVER AND EVER
Just two seventh year flirts who happened to fall in love | |
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04-10-2008, 07:59 PM
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#41 (permalink)
| | Giant
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Ferrix: GMT-6
Posts: 56,908
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Moritz Schultz (#0f667e)
Ravenclaw Seventh Year
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Nancy Schultz (#ac6f77)
Hufflepuff Fourth Year x11 x1
| curly haired prefect - "sometimes I get angry!" - 30/90 - *chicken emoji* - probably @ Disney - I speak dog
There's a new girl?
NO. Tree Boy is Maddie's *pokes her away* 
__________________ I'm still standin'________________________________________ better than I ever did
Lookin' like a true survivor_________________________________feelin' like a little kid | |
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04-10-2008, 08:43 PM
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#42 (permalink)
| | Romanian Longhorn
Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Gatsby's.
Posts: 39,219
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Shannon 'Shan' Parker
Fourth Year x2
| JGL ♥ | Wifey + SexyCPR = RAWR. | Co-Inceptor♥ | CHLOCHLO! | Rollie = My Ship
Ok. *Cough*
All I have to say, twinneth, is ... cute.
Yess, your story is cute  . The stroyline is cute, the characters are cute, and the writer is cute.
Pams ... PLLEEEAASSSE
My wuverly twinneth <33333
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04-10-2008, 11:08 PM
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#43 (permalink)
| DoM Veela
Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Themyscira
Posts: 37,610
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Nerissa M. Tate
Sixth Year
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| Wowza!
New girl?
Noooo.... Tree Boy is Maddie's!!
-cough- I mean, like I said yesterday... I'm Switzerland 
Moooreeee Pleeeeeaaaseeee!
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04-11-2008, 01:34 AM
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#44 (permalink)
| | Knarl
Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Dharmaville™
Posts: 9,334
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Jack Fletcher
Fourth Year | Dumbledore's Licorice Snaps Chipotle!
Hmmmm.....who is this new girl? anyway, she's going down. =P
PAMS! I need moooooore!
__________________ Have at thee!
But who's that ghost who keeps walking by my door?
Tell me, how long could you hang on to a word?
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04-11-2008, 02:29 AM
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#45 (permalink)
| Formerly: AutumnSun  Kelpie
Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: paperbin
Posts: 26,363
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Maisie Travers
Fifth Year | No fun tag! | Haha, Zombie! | Nyeaarr!
Hahah, lol. Aww, I love this <33333
I agree with Angie. I'm Switzerland too!!
-bounces up and down-
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04-11-2008, 05:19 AM
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#46 (permalink)
| | Snidget
Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Far away from you...
Posts: 2,634
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Jake Chatich
First Year | FanFic Enthusiast
This is brilliant!
I am so hooked!
I reallly reallly like Maddie and if I like Maddie then I probably like Bella too. 
Post more soon, please!
-*~ Shirel ~*-
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04-11-2008, 10:15 AM
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#47 (permalink)
| Formerly: Dracos_Lady Kappa
Join Date: Jan 2007
Posts: 14,819
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Hugo Jermaine Woods
Seventh Year | avant-garde Mrs. Nick Jonas
*Grumbles* Collyflower, you have turned everyone against Cora new girl!!!
__________________ Hugo&Georgie FOREVER AND EVER
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04-11-2008, 10:25 AM
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#48 (permalink)
| | Romanian Longhorn
Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Gatsby's.
Posts: 39,219
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Shannon 'Shan' Parker
Fourth Year x2
| JGL ♥ | Wifey + SexyCPR = RAWR. | Co-Inceptor♥ | CHLOCHLO! | Rollie = My Ship
^ Awww Sishtta, I love Cora New girl
Everyone in this story is fun
Oh Yeah, PAMS AGAIN X
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04-11-2008, 03:22 PM
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#49 (permalink)
| | Fwooper
Join Date: Jul 2006
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CUZZO! *tackle punch* I LOVE YOUR STORY! IT'S GREAT!
PAMS OR I'LL TACKLE PUNCH YOU AGAIN! | |
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04-12-2008, 07:39 AM
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#50 (permalink)
| | Ghost
Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Shiz
Posts: 70,310
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Xavieria Bole
Graduated
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Tinkerbell* Awesome update.
What's Maddie gonna dooooo?
-still loves Tree Boy-
He was so nice yesterday. Maddie knows what she is going to do.
She hopes Tree Boy will understand. Quote:
Originally Posted by Dracos_Lady New girl? Wonder who thaaat could be Quote:
Originally Posted by Lissy Longbottom There's a new girl?
NO. Tree Boy is Maddie's *pokes her away* We all know this Quote:
Originally Posted by Hollister Ok. *Cough*
All I have to say, twinneth, is ... cute.
Yess, your story is cute . The stroyline is cute, the characters are cute, and the writer is cute.
Pams ... PLLEEEAASSSE
My wuverly twinneth <33333 Thank you twinneth!! Quote:
Originally Posted by Willow_Kovac New girl?
Noooo.... Tree Boy is Maddie's!!
-cough- I mean, like I said yesterday... I'm Switzerland
Moooreeee Pleeeeeaaaseeee! Quote:
Originally Posted by Fire Eyes*Tayzer* Hmmmm.....who is this new girl? anyway, she's going down. =P
PAMS! I need moooooore! Quote:
Originally Posted by AutumnSun Hahah, lol. Aww, I love this <33333
I agree with Angie. I'm Switzerland too!!
-bounces up and down- Quote:
Originally Posted by shirelbb This is brilliant!
I am so hooked!
I reallly reallly like Maddie and if I like Maddie then I probably like Bella too.
Post more soon, please!
-*~ Shirel ~*- Quote:
Originally Posted by Dracos_Lady *Grumbles* Collyflower, you have turned everyone against Cora new girl!!! Quote:
Originally Posted by Hollister ^ Awww Sishtta, I love Cora New girl
Everyone in this story is fun
Oh Yeah, PAMS AGAIN X Quote:
Originally Posted by G00DGIRLG0N3BAD CUZZO! *tackle punch* I LOVE YOUR STORY! IT'S GREAT!
PAMS OR I'LL TACKLE PUNCH YOU AGAIN!
Okay, it is currently 3:30 am so please forgive me for not replying to everyone's comment. I really love them, so keep them coming!
Right now just a short little fun update. Then probably tomorrow more about Bella versus Cora and Bella's plan for her relationship with Tree Boy. And of course some loverly Bella/Zeroness
There has been some speculation amongst my readers that I, Bella Coulter, am Maddie.
Let me assure you, I am not Maddie.
That is just silly.
I AM NOT MADDIE!
*runs*
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