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08-31-2007, 07:17 PM
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| Forever Refreshing Porlock
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Very nicely done Niky! Poor Sirius, though... =(  It's okay, I'm still here! Personally, I think she's just afraid to like him... but she's already fallen for him. Yep, that's it. Anyway... lovely post, darling!
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08-31-2007, 07:39 PM
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OOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHH. OMG. I WASN'T EXPECTING THAT REJECTION. OH. OH. OH GEEZ. HA. AHAHAHA. HAHA. *cough*
Woo! Oh my. I was even thinking to myself when Sirius went to kiss her, "Y'know, it'd be funny if she rejected him." And then BAM!!! Dude. Blew me away there. Good job. XDD
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08-31-2007, 07:51 PM
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| Graphorn
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Teagan Skye Corliss Fifth Year | Chris Cookie Siriusly In Love Quote:
“I’m sorry Sirius, I just—I meant it when I said I wasn’t interested,” she said, slightly awkwardly as her eyes lowered to the floor.
Surely that is a liiiiieeeeeeeeee. Right? Quote:
Sirius had never felt such a painful rejection.
Oh noez. Not the 'R' word. Adolescent Sirius will never be the same, 
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09-01-2007, 04:07 AM
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| Manticore
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Awwwww. Poor Sirius!  *snuggles him*
It all seemed to be going so perfectly for him and then WHAM! You broke his heart *shakes head*
*agrees with Cai*
*giggles*  Awesome post, as usual mah turkey |
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09-01-2007, 06:19 AM
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Poor Sirius!!! 
Well Im glad Emily found out about that slimeball!
That was an Awsome post!!!!!!
I loved it!!!!
PAMSOID!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Your evil twinnie!!!!!
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09-04-2007, 01:52 AM
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OHHHHH SO SAD!
THAT'S HORRIBLE!
Poor Sirikins *shnuggles him*
Loved it!
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09-10-2007, 11:05 PM
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| Blast-Ended Skrewt
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| Chapter Eight Alright guys, My apologies! I knwo I should be posting every Friday, but I just started school and I got stuffed up to the rood with work Then I had plans all weekend long But! There is a post tonight!
Dedicated to no one in particular this time, although Jor shall forever take credit for the awesome ideas she gave me 
Thanks Cai for the beta
Enjoy!
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This is what he had come to. In two weeks, all he had really achieved was getting out of detention. His friends had made their own mayhem to join him during those boring, after-class hours, but Sirius would’ve rather been by himself. He had noticed, however, that it was possible he was getting a few more icy glares from Paula’s friends, but they were Slytherins, so he didn’t mind much.
Emily treated him the same, if it wasn’t for maybe a friendlier smile due to his encouraging words. She seemed to have moved on pretty quickly, though. She wasn’t dating anyone and he doubted she would be, but she looked lively and cheerful again, convinced she was worth much more than what Robbie had made her feel like.
At least she was doing better.
It had only been a few days ago that Sirius had decided enough was enough, that he had to move on and find a new girl to chase. He had never been hurt like this before; neither had he ever had such a hard time moving onto someone new.
His fork now poked at the beans on his plate as his grey eyes looked down on them absentmindedly. He was early for lunch and his friends had yet to join him, so he had entertained himself by making random patterns. It was much unlike him to be depressed over something he had set his mind not to worry about, but he couldn’t help himself.
Out of the blue, a hand patted his back with enough force not only to bring him back to reality, but to almost bury his face in the beans.
“You were doing it again,” James pointed out, as he happily took the seat beside him and began to serve himself some turkey.
“Doing what?”
“You know, dozing off into the world of the depressed Sirius,” replied Peter, as he eyed the food set up before him and took a seat across from James. Remus had yet to join them.
James raised an eyebrow, but with a jerk of his head it was clear the statement was close enough to what James had meant to say.
“I was just waiting for you guys,” Sirius excused himself as he eyed Peter, who was stuffing his plate as high as it could get with mashed potatoes and beans.
“Well, either way, we got news for you,” James smiled, as he too began to pile his plate with potatoes. He didn’t pay attention to the raised eyebrow Sirius sent his way.
“News?”
“Yeah. You know, mate, we don’t like this depressed side of you. You’ve been too worried about this Emily girl, and you don’t even have a date to the next Hogsmeade trip—”
“I don’t think I’m going to go,” interrupted Sirius.
“Of course you are. We got you a date,” replied James, as casually as if he had commented that the potatoes needed gravy.
Sirius watched his friend wide-eyed, beyond surprised. Now that he thought about it, he should’ve expected it. He knew as well as his friends that he was not like himself lately. He was always thinking of the same thing, no matter what he did, and it had taken quite a toll on him. Maybe he did need a date, just to think of a new girl and get over his ridiculously continuous thoughts on Emily. Maybe, just maybe, this date wasn’t such a bad idea.
Peter was too busy with his lunch to care much about what was going on, but James patiently waited until Sirius came around before he spoke again.
“Date with who?” he asked almost shyly, as if he should be afraid of asking such a question. Actually, he was more afraid of the answer he’d get. He was supposed to trust his best friends, but this subject was probably more personal.
“Tfefnai!” came a muffled cry from Peter’s stuffed mouth. He was apparently very proud of what he had just said, although no one had understood him, and he had spit all over the table.
“Er—… he meant to say Tiffany…” clarified James, looking over at Peter, the slightest bit disgusted.
“Tiffany Macedo? The Gryffindor?” Sirius asked, quite surprised. He remembered that girl. One of the most popular girls in school; she knew everyone. She was quite snobby however; quite perky, too. Sirius could almost find her annoying every once in a while, but he had never dated her.
“Yeah, that one. She seemed happy enough to finally get a date with you so it was pretty easy. Just meet her Saturday morning at ten by the courtyard and you guys can go to Hogsmeade and do whatever you wish.”
“What if I don’t want to go?”
James hesitated slightly, using the excuse that he was chewing to prolong the moment while he thought it out. Eventually, he turned to look at Sirius face to face.
“Look, Emily’s rejected you enough times. You’ve been moping around all week and frankly I don’t think that’s the right way to deal with this whole thing. You’re more than capable of getting yourself more than just that one girl. She’s not interested even if you showed her the nicest side of you. Give it up, have some fun with Tiffany and just… forget about it. If she’s really all that worth it maybe you could even make her jealous. Just do something else than mourn over her,” he declared simply, but firmly.
Sirius blinked, somewhat surprised by his friend’s words. He had definitely not been expecting that. He looked over at Peter, who nodded his head approvingly.
He sighed, pondering over it for the last few moments he had to himself before he finally nodded. “Fine. I’ll try to get over Emily with this girl…”
James smirked, proud and looking quite smug all of a sudden.
“Great,” he replied as he proudly finished his lunch.
__________________ I love you, Niky. I love you, I love you, I love you. I could say it so many times, it wouldn't be enough. I love you.
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09-10-2007, 11:05 PM
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Very cute post, Hunnie! I love how James and Peter are trying to get Sirius with another girl. Merlin only knows what’s going to happen with this. I’m thinking that Emily sees Sirius snogging with another girl or something, and she gets sort of jealous, because she liked the fact that he liked her. Well, I don’t know… it’d make sense. LOL! Anyway… PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS!!!!!
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09-10-2007, 11:48 PM
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| Manticore
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*giggles* James and Peter setting up Sirius Black with a girl? The Sirius Black? Quite amusing idea, that is
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09-12-2007, 02:31 AM
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James and Peter got poor mopy Sirius a date 
And with a snobby perky girl? *Shakes head at them both*
No guy is going to like that kind of a girl 
This will be fun to see how it goes 
Cant wait for more!! PAMS!!
Your evil twinnie,
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09-28-2007, 04:41 AM
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| Music addicted Sirius fanSnitch Guy’s Girl Ramora
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Ah!! I'm so sorry I haven't been here! I haven't been on much lately, but here's my thoughts:
I love it. That's most important. Secondly, when the heck are we going to find out Why Emily isn't interested? Third, does she get jealous?
Let me know next time you post so I can find out hopefully one of those things. |
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09-29-2007, 02:36 AM
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| Blast-Ended Skrewt
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| Alright, I have two more chapters all ready for you guys! Schools been killer lately and my time has been cut down a lot x__x
But anyway! I wanted to post yesterday... and today... but my beta's always busy, and my backup beta is never online anymore, so I'm in a search for a new backup backup beta! To anyone who wants to volunteer, I welcome you XD in the mean time, check in soon, A new chapter will be up soon, I promise!
Thanks for your patience guys <3333
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09-29-2007, 03:38 AM
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| Blast-Ended Skrewt
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| Chapter Nine Dedictaed to Pilar 'cause she inspired me to write last night
The strawberry tarts belong to Rhea So does Sirius
Thanks Sabrina for the beta!
Enjoy dearies 
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Ten fifty one in the morning. Sirius ran his hand through his already incredibly messy hair one last time before he sighed and began a walk down from the common room to the courtyard. It was no use in trying to wait this out any longer.
He wore a dark grey button up shirt, almost black to compliment the color of his eyes under his robe, although he had not purposely picked it so. He could almost blend in with the sky outside. It was a threatening grey, although no drops of rain had fallen yet. Sirius had a bad feeling about it all, choosing to take the bad weather as a sign against him.
As the hallways came to their end and the doors to the grounds were opened to the students leaving for Hogsmeade, a pretty bright pink dress came into view. Tiffany really was too bubbly for his taste, but what else was he going to do today? Study?
“Sirius!” she exclaimed cheerfully, her face lighting up immediately as she skipped his way to hook her arm on his. She had the smallest sense of grace, able to taste her expensive perfume in the air and the bubbly cheerfulness that allowed her to be so annoying charismatic. Some were only with her because they all knew of her family’s riches, others because she was incredibly deceiving. She could lure you into a trap and have you there for as long as she wanted without you even realizing what was going on.
Sirius had once pondered over her, earlier in his years, probably when he was around fifteen. He was sure she’d be a good snog. Right now, he just thought her a little bit too shallow for him. He was seventeen now, he didn’t want just a good kisser. Although that did help.
“Are you ready?” she beamed before her gaze turned to a couple of girls who giggled as they passed them, Tiffany replying with a girly wave and a giggle of her own.
“I guess…” Sirius mumbled under his breath, reluctant to this whole thing. ~*~
The sky was getting darker by the minute, threatening with lighting as much as rain. The streets were dark but not discouraging to young Hogwarts students, however it looked like if it ever began to rain, it would be one incredible storm.
Sirius had almost begun to pray for rain. It would be his only excuse to flee. He was not in the mood to be happy and cheerful as she was, he was not in the mood to go into Honeydukes and buy something of absolutely everything –although they did anyway- and he was not in the mood to have her following him around babbling about who knows what. Didn’t James know better by now? He was probably daydreaming of Lily when he thought of such an odd couple.
He had been stuck at Madam Puddifoot’s many times as gentlemanly manners required him to be polite to his date, but he had never truly liked this place very much for other than their strawberry tarts. They had amazing strawberry tarts.
Tiffany sat across from him babbling about how she had received the bracelet she was wearing, which was apparently a gift from a son of a famous Quidditch player. Sirius might’ve shown some more interest if perhaps it hadn’t been Tiffany who he had been speaking to.
He did not mean to be rude, he did not mean to put her down or ignore or any of those things, but Tiffany was just not the girl he wanted to be with. If Emily was sitting across from him telling the exact same story Sirius would be mesmerized, hypnotized to hear every word she pronounced with perfect precision so he’d remember them always. Her curls would bounce every time she’d glance out the window, her icy blue eyes would sparkle when the light hit them. She didn’t even need light. She needed a smile, a cheerful laugh and she’d have Sirius at her feet. He couldn't stop thinking about her. There was just something about her that made it difficult to stop his racing thoughts.
So, he politely stayed quiet as Tiffany went on, Sirius nodded along as his mind drifted elsewhere, probably wondering where Emily was right now, what she was doing. Her rejection had ironically made him want her all the more, like that one last cookie in the cookie jar he could just not reach. It was frustrating, but a challenge nonetheless.
“Sirius?”
“Yeah,” he almost jumped, coming back from his drifting thoughts again.
“Were you listening to me?”
“Of course I was. Something about a bracelet—”
“A necklace,” she corrected.
“A necklace…” Sirius corrected himself.
Tiffany eyed him from behind her blond short hair, eyeing him as if analyzing his body language.
“Will you kiss me?”
“What?” Sirius immediately asked. If he had been drinking something, he not only would’ve choked, but spit it all out and probably all over her. Had he just heard right?
“Will you kiss me?” she repeated, this time emphasizing the words. “I mean we are on a date. And you’re known for these kinds of things. It’s been years since I’ve awaited the great Sirius Black to ask me on a date! It was a bit disappointing that you sent your friend to do it but that’s okay. I mean bravery is something us Gryffindors simply must have, but shyness is also acceptable. We can’t always be perfect. Our house should never restrict who we are, I mean I could belong in Ravenclaw! After all I am so incredibly witty and smart, aren’t I? I did so well on my Charms assignment last week, you should’ve seen me! I even beat that Evans girl! Would you believe that? And she’s the favorite too, teacher’s pet I think—”
‘ Shut up’ Sirius thought as he leaned over and made her lips too busy to say another word. She was definitely not the girl he wanted to be on a date with. She felt uncomfortable, and instead of feeling at ease and so much happier, he felt guilty and burdened. Enough. This was not the girl he wanted to spend the day with. This was not the girl he was thinking about. This was as unfair to him as it was to Emily and Tiffany.
He pulled away, leaving Tiffany blinking in surprise even if she had asked for the kiss herself. Well, she was quiet now. He began to think of what to say to leave, something, anything, but as he looked outside the window in the hope maybe one of his friends would come by to rescue him, he came before a paled face across from the window.
Right off the corner of the street, in plain view of himself and Tiffany stood a girl with pitch black raven hair. She had forgotten what she was even doing there as she froze, and tears threatened at the eyes people so often complimented. She was special, huh? She didn’t deserve to have someone play with her, did she?
What a hypocrite. All Sirius had said to her had been lies.
__________________ I love you, Niky. I love you, I love you, I love you. I could say it so many times, it wouldn't be enough. I love you.
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09-29-2007, 03:51 AM
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| Manticore
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Originally Posted by argentinaz_angel Sirius had once pondered over her, earlier in his years, probably when he was around fifteen. He was sure she’d be a good snog. Right now, he just thought her a little bit too shallow for him. He was seventeen now, he didn’t want just a good kisser. Although that did help. LOL. Typical Sirius Quote:
Originally Posted by Awesome Niky He had been stuck at Madam Puddifoot’s many times as gentlemanly manners required him to be polite to his date, but he had never truly liked this place very much for other than their strawberry tarts. They had amazing strawberry tarts. *snickers* Love the mention of tarts. Quote:
Originally Posted by Lovely Niky What a hypocrite. All Sirius had said to her had been lies. Oooooooo  Sirius is in for it now!
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09-29-2007, 04:35 AM
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09-29-2007, 10:57 PM
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| Music addicted Sirius fanSnitch Guy’s Girl Ramora
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Oh my Goodness!!!! Why??? Why are you so evil?
*cries*
He's not a hypocrite!! Niky's just very good at making it all seem so bad. 
Bahhhhhhh!!! Nikyyyyyy... you best post soon 
Very good post by the way =]
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10-05-2007, 07:16 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Arabella Redstone | Well it's Emily's own fault for rejecting him. XD She said she didn't want a relationship with him, so what did she expect him to do, sit around and twiddle his thumbs all day? *Snicker*
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10-06-2007, 02:23 AM
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| Chapter Ten Well dearies, I forgot to post yesterday which would've been an exact week, so, here we are! 
To the people I've sent it early for reviews, they LOVED it apparently, so i hope you all share the same views! Enjoy loveys, I loved writting this chappie 
Dedicated to the new Fran&Nikolai (aka Lindz&Kingston) and the new Leoula (aka Christian&Mallory)
Thanks Sabsy for editting<3
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She stormed off in the same way she had come from, turning away from what she had seen. She had no idea why she was crying or what had gotten into her. That little git! Kissing another girl while...! They had never truly dated… It didn’t matter! He said she was special! He said such beautiful things to her yet there he sat drinking away at a cup of tea and laughing at her. Maybe he had even told that Gryffindor and they were laughing at her together. She wiped her burning tears of rage away with the sleeve of her coat.
“Emily! Emily, please, wait!” Sirius called behind her. He had not even thought of the consequences of leaving Tiffany in the middle of the café with so many gossiping people would find out, he wasn’t even the least bit worried. He had immediately grabbed his robe and left the shop without another single word to Tiffany, for as soon as his eyes saw Emily’s through the window his heart dropped. How could he?
“Emily, please! I beg of you! Just listen to me!” he called behind her, catching up quickly. He might not play on the Quidditch team, but he was still athletic enough to keep in good shape for his ladies. It came in rather handy at more times than not.
“What?!” she suddenly snapped, turning around with furious eyes to glare at him. Her hands were fists by her side, patience ticking away quickly and rage more than evident in her face. As if on perfect cue, lightening struck behind her once she had finished speaking, followed by loud thunder almost seconds later. The storm was really close now.
Sirius had to stop quickly not to bump into her since he had almost reached her, also by the fact that her eyes were turned a colder than usual blue in a harsh glare directed at him.
“Look, honestly, me and Tiffany weren’t—”
“Being honest with me?” she interrupted. Her gaze never even quivered from his, furious at what her eyes had seen and the lies she had been tricked into believing.
“No! I was honest-”
“When? Was it when you said I didn’t deserve what Robbie did to me even if you just did the exact same thing? Were you being honest when you said I was the prettiest girl you had laid eyes upon? How about when you said you’d never ever hurt me if I gave you a chance?”
“But you never gave me that chance!” Sirius cut in immediately. Thunder rang out again, and this time, it finally began to rain. Perfect timing. Just when Sirius couldn’t go away from where he was, or even ask for shelter, and had no reason to move away from the person he was with.
“What would’ve you done with that chance, huh? That?! I don’t want that! I don’t want a lying, treacherous, deceptive, cheating, deceiving, hypocritical fake by my side!”
“I’m not any of that! If you’d just give me a chance to explain!” Sirius attempted to cut in again. Rain droplets had turned into pouring water quite quickly, the sky dark except for the lightening that sometimes struck. Neither had moved even if they were getting quickly soaked and students ran past them in search for shelter.
“You don’t need to explain,” she hissed, her eyes shining with hate and rage towards him. Still, not once had she looked away. Her hair was sticking to her wet forehead and cheeks, her clothes as soaked as Sirius’ by now as rain continued to pour on the couple.
“Why won’t you listen to me? You never gave me a chance! You never allowed me to introduce myself, to prove myself to you, to become everything you want! You never even gave me more than a smile! Nothing! How was I supposed to know what was going through your wicked mind? I don’t know Emily! I can’t read minds! You can’t read mine either! Don’t judge a book by it’s cover, have you ever heard that? Don’t judge me without even speaking to me first!” he snapped, breathing heavily. It was almost as if her rage was contagious.
“For someone that plays girls until they’re useless and boring you’re pretty good with words! I would never let you do that to me! I am not someone to be used and trashed by the great Sirius Black! You’re a fake! You play girls as you wish for your own sick happiness!”
“ Who told you these things?!” Sirius yelled out, furious. How could anyone spread such lies! How could anyone else believe them? “You’re being so prejudiced! Would it kill you to sit down and talk for a change?!”
She laughed. “You’ve already killed me before you even got that privilege! Actions speak louder than words!”
“Incredible!” Sirius suddenly exclaimed over the pouring rain. His hands went to the back of his head, closing his eyes to calm himself before he’d say something he’d truly regret. He breathed heavily before he reopened his eyes and met her gaze without that same trace of anger he held previously.
“What is it about me? Why can’t you just even consider me for a moment? What’s so terrible? What have I done to you to deserve this? I don’t even understand why you’re so angry at me; we’re not dating, we never were, I’m allowed to kiss whoever I wish,” he stated as calmly as he could possibly bring himself to do it.
She blinked, suddenly realizing that they were yelling at each other under the rain like little children. Her arms wrapped around her as a source of comfort and warmth, her eyes staring down at the floor.
“Yes, you are allowed to kiss whoever you want,” she spoke quietly, her demeanor changing dramatically. Her voice was barely audible over the rain at all now.
“You didn’t answer the rest of my questions.”
Silence.
“I’m afraid, okay?” she suddenly spat, as if glaring at him because it was all his fault and he had forced her to admit it.
“Afraid of what?”
“Of you!” she claimed, as if it were the most obvious thing in the world. “I know what you’ve done all of these years, you’ve dated all of my friends at least once! You made a game out of dating several girls at the same time. You made a game out of us and you’d make a joke out of me! I’m worth more than that, even you admitted it. Even if you never meant it.”
“I meant it,” spoke up Sirius almost as soon as those words had left her lips. “Emily I was fourteen, fifteen years old when I did those stupid things. I am seventeen now, I’m about to leave school and begin to work and form my future. I’m smarter than that now, I learn from my mistakes. I’m not going to hurt you. There’s something about you that keeps me from it. And no, it’s not some corny line I’ve told many girls to forgive me, I mean that too. I don’t know what it is about you, but I want to find out.”
The rain was falling so hard now it was like a curtain of water all around them. The sky was dark and thunder shook every building and lighting lit up the skies for those few seconds. The storm was getting worse before getting any better, and the only people left on the street were them.
“Please, just let me prove it to you…” he murmured quietly, only loud enough for her to hear him. It didn’t have to be loud at all. He had moved closer to her now, they were almost millimeters away. His hand had come to frame her jaw line, forcing her chin up so she would face him properly.
He had been denied hundreds of times by her, even in a similar situation when what he was about to do had been rejected too. But what was life without a little risk?
In the middle of the street covered in a curtain of pouring rain, the storm echoing in their ears and soaking their clothes wet, two pairs of lips met, and neither pulled away this time.
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Arabella Redstone | Aww, cute. It finally happened XD But srsly. Emily. Just be quiet and listen to Sirius, ok? He knows what he's talking about
__________________ From the Purple Ladybug to the Green Pepper 
Happy Seventeen! Thanks Marie!! <3
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Danny Logan Edwards Sixth Year x1
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^Thats me. 
I loved it Mah good Twinnie!!
So cute! I love how you wrote this chapter. It was so beautiful.
Sirius and Emily finally got together *Sigh*
About time!! 
Awsome chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PAMSOID!!!!
*Steph*
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| Music addicted Sirius fanSnitch Guy’s Girl Ramora
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lizzie Rose | Quote:
How about when you said you’d never ever hurt me if I gave you a chance?”
“But you never gave me that chance!” Sirius cut in immediately.
*giggles* ahh, the Niky RPing I know all to well 
I am soo good at predicting!!! ahh! I love my brilliance :XD 
So now you must post for us so that we can see how this all turns out =]
Good post
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10-28-2007, 11:19 PM
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| Blast-Ended Skrewt
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| Chapter Eleven I know I know it's been forever, I totally apologize! It's been busy, but I do have a post for you guys today!
Short, but the point Dedicated to Lizzie's Kiki, 'cause he has an awesome jacket XD
Thanks Si for the beta! <333
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A sniffle and a groan. Uncomfortable, the thing under the bed covers turned around even when the only thing that was above the bed covers was a bushy mount of black hair. It was like a small monster, hidden under the blue sheets with only a mass of hair popping out on the top. It sneezed under the covers, and another sniffle was heard.
Who said a kiss under the rain was a good idea? Ridiculously stupid idea, that was surely it. But, in the back of the mind, one simply had to admit, it had been incredibly romantic. It sneezed again. A clumsy hand reached out from underneath the cover and felt around the night table next to the bed for the box of tissues. Found it, pulled on a tissue, blew their nose, sniffled, and tossed it into the pile of used tissues in the waste bin beside the bed.
There was nothing to hate more than colds. Everyone knew, however, it had been absolutely worth it.
Despite friends discouraging them, despite unlikely instances and the most unlikely of kisses from another girl, they had somehow pulled through. Their kiss had lasted long enough to catch a cold, so it had been quite a while. They had each smiled, forgetting why they had each ignored each other in such a way. They hadn’t meant to hurt each other. They had meant for things to end and start like this, with a kiss, close and comforted.
They had talked it over, they had told the truth, and by the end of the night they were finally, officially dating. Neither of them wanted to put it off any longer. They seemed to belong together.
Sneeze.
The mass under the covers moaned in discomfort, reaching for another tissue. There was class going on right now and there it was, under the covers, sneezing the life out it’s soul.
Sneeze.
Frustrated, the covers were pulled back and another sniffle was heard. The so called monster with bright and irritated red eyes and a stuffy nose, managed to smile as sit noticed it had a visitor.
“Feeling better?” asked Sirius as he surprised her with a small bouquet of flowers behind him. So Transfiguration did come in handy every once in a while.
Emily, sick out of her mind in one of the Hospital Wing’s bed, smiled happily at her present, in both ways.
“Yeah, I thu kinda feel bether now,” she managed to say as she examined the flowers affectionately. She could not smell their scent, but the gesture was good enough for her. “Arend you suppozed to be in claz?” she added just before she sneezed.
Sirius laughed. Her voice sounded weird, and her stuffy nose surely took the blame for that. He took the flowers from her to replace them with the box of tissues and gathered the tissues that had missed the waste basket around her bed before setting the flowers on her night table.
“Not right now. Besides, what kind of gentleman would I be if I got my girl sick and didn’t come to visit her?”
“Nod a bery good one,” she replied before she blew her nose again.
“Exactly,” he smirked as he began to take off his jacket and wrap it around her shoulders. She might’ve been stuffed with various covers but a little more warmth couldn’t hurt. He sat on the edge of her bed, wrapping an arm around her waist to pull her in.
She leaned her head on his shoulder, the box of tissues still on her lap as she closed her eyes. This had been the most comfortable position she had been in all day.
“How come you thin’th get sick?” she whispered as she nuzzled herself closer under the jacket.
“I don’t know. Maybe so you could have all day to think of me,” he joked.
“You’re sho full of youthself,” she giggled lazily.
“You just figured that out?”
She smiled, turning her head slightly up to meet his gaze. Grey eyes with light green ones, staring deep into each other and finding nothing more but comfort and reassurance.
“So if you geth sick, then you can think all day oth me?” she whispered with a soft smile.
“I already think all day of you.” A blush crept across Emily’s cheeks.
“Then I guesh you won’th mind if we kiss,” she added slyly, leaning in to just that.
For a couple of kids who had been fighting each other for almost a month, they really seemed to fit each other. She realized there was nothing to fight, that he truly meant it when he claimed he had changed. He did not chase any other women, he visited her every day every chance he got. He was honest to her, he knew what she wanted and helped her achieve it. The week itself wasn’t over, but Sirius was sure he had found Emily like James had found Lily. ~*~.:.~*~ Happy Halloween Everyone!
__________________ I love you, Niky. I love you, I love you, I love you. I could say it so many times, it wouldn't be enough. I love you.
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10-28-2007, 11:56 PM
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| Manticore
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Brett Carlen Flourish and Blotts Shopkeeper | Potter Nurse || Hockey obsession <3 | Go Wings! || Geaux Tigers!  Excellent post Niky!
I absolutely loved it. Such a cute scene! Quote:
The week itself wasn’t over, but Sirius was sure he had found Emily like James had found Lily.
Absolute <33333
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11-02-2007, 11:03 PM
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| Music addicted Sirius fanSnitch Guy’s Girl Ramora
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11-02-2007, 11:40 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Danny Logan Edwards Sixth Year x1
| Shipper Queen Hippie Quad So cute Good Twinne!! 
I knew they would get together soon. 
Especially after that kiss 
I loved the post!!!
Cant wait for more!!
PAMS!
*Steph*
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