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Les Mots · 09-14-2006, 11:29 PM

This is really good I simply love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

purple·myst · 09-25-2006, 06:49 PM

Here's a new post for anyone thats still reading.

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It took a long time to get through the tunnel. It seemed like it had expanded. It also seemed a lot wider than I remembered. Beside me, Matt had his wand out, he wasn’t using it to light the way though, I was doing that. I didn’t think anything of it at the time, but the longer we walked, the more it began to bug me. How were we walking all this distance and not getting anywhere?

*Matt’s P.O.V.*

Sure I was glad that she hadn’t said no, but was the 'just to prove I’m smarter' comment really necessary? Well, she thinks she’s smarter then me, I’ll just have to show her! So, we were just walking along and I set off a few of the spells that I had come up with myself, but she didn’t notice me mutter them. At one point, she looked puzzled and was glancing at my wand. I think she wondered why I had it out but didn’t have it lit.

Awhile ago, I had figured out how to freeze time, well just make it so that it stopped and it was very easy to catch back up with another spell. The only problem was that if you wanted time to stop for you, you weren’t able to go anywhere, and whoever was around you would also be stuck as well. I’d been using it so I could get all my homework done this year.

I’d have to tell her eventually what I’d done, but it wasn’t like she had to get dress robes. I’d snuck out the other day when her dad let me know about it before hand. He had given me money and a port-key to go and get her something really nice. That’s exactly what I did. I think she’ll love it.

*Keely’s P.O.V.*

Okay. I’ve walked through this tunnel many times and it’s never taken this long before, why?

Matt had a really mysterious look on his face, I can’t quite understand what it’s about but my gut says that he has something to do with this. What though, is the question.

I really don’t want to ask him, it just seems a little odd. I can just imagine now how it would sound. ‘I’m sorry, but I was just wondering if you had anything to do with the fact that we haven’t been getting anywhere for the last while?’ Yup, that sure does sound a little odd.

“What’d you say, Keel?” Matt said suddenly.

“I said something?”

“Yeah, you did. You were muttering on about something, I just couldn’t catch it.”

Oops, I guess I hadn’t said that in my head.

“Oh, I was just thinking about why we weren’t seeming to get anywhere, doesn’t it seem a little odd to you?” I asked.

“Ummm…”

“Do YOU know anything about this??” I almost yelled.

“Just thought I’d prove that you weren’t smarter than me,” he muttered so quietly that I had to lean really close to him just to catch it at all.

“What are you talking about, Matt?” I asked quietly.

“Uh, time spell, I made it,” he said.

“WHAT!! How are we supposed to get out of here? You made it!?”

“Yeah, awhile ago, I was behind on my homework, so I froze time so I could finish it all and not get detentions all year,” he said.

“So we are walking but aren’t going anywhere… is that right?” I asked.

“Yeah, everyone else doesn’t know we are and can’t see us.”

“Is there a time limit that we have? Or does it matter how long we stay. And, I’ve got to get dress robes for Saturday night,” I told him.

“Accio dress robes!” Matt shouted.

*Matt’s P.O.V.*

I knew that the dress robes would be able to reach me, because I’d left them sitting in a box all wrapped up. I’d hid them in my dorm after she didn’t answer me when I asked her to the ball.

I took out my wand again and started conjuring up tables, and a few candles, so that it wasn’t so gloomy in the tunnel. I had decided this all back when I was putting on the first spell that I used.
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Let me know what you think.
<3Jenn

Les Mots · 09-25-2006, 09:32 PM

Great post!

Sama · 09-27-2006, 11:37 PM

NEW READER ALERT!!!!! Great story... i loves it... can't wait for more and more and more... PAMS!!!

~Sama~

Ron4ever · 09-29-2006, 04:34 PM

Just to let you know that i love your story. I havnt read much yet but i promise that in a few minutes or so i will read it i need to update stuff! Luv ya xxx

purple·myst · 09-30-2006, 05:20 PM

Ok, I need help, I'm having trouble with the next post. So I'm opening it up. I'm looking for what you think the dress should look like. If you have anyideas, please just post them here, or pm me to let me know!!! thanks soo much!!!
I'll post when I have an idea for a dress in mind, I'm also looking for a poem, so if any of you have anyideas, ill try to find one like it.
THanks!!
<3Jenn

Les Mots · 09-30-2006, 07:03 PM

Hey Jenn, I would like to take on the job, I already sent you a PM with the description of the dress and help with the poem.

Let me know if you like the design,
Draco's Darling

ahshlyn · 10-01-2006, 01:57 AM

Eee!! I

that post... And you know, now thatwe've come to a dress.. Me has this odd want to draw one..

Yes, I'm random. But it would be fun!! Ooooh. I can't wait til you post the next bit!!

purple·myst · 10-01-2006, 02:03 PM

Thanks, I'm so glad that you like it

I'm gunna try and get the post up by either tuesday or wednesday, I won't be on much after that until after thanksgiving because my brothers coming home, so if I don't post, I just didnt get time, and I will try to get on sometime during that 6 days, but I've also got like 3 thanksgiving dinners to go to.

One thing, is that It is going to be a LONG post, I can promise that.

Thanks for your help on the dresses!!! And thanks for the wonderful poem Dracos Darling...
<3Jenn
p.s.

Quote:

Originally Posted by harrypottersummer

Not really a quote, just for you...
I have something I want to run by you, it's quite amusing. I'll tell you next time I'm talking to you...knowing though, you might already of thought of it.

Parvati_Patil55 · 10-01-2006, 04:13 PM

Please Post Soon. PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!

purple·myst · 10-01-2006, 08:39 PM

Well, I'd like to welcome the new readers first. I really like it that you like my story.

I said that I would post, and I will. But first, I would like to give credit, A millions times, to Draco's Darling for writing the first poem for me. I love it. And for everyone else, you'll just have to read on to see.

And many thanks to harrypottersummer for helping me out with the dress plan.

I started it with a little bit of the last part, because it made more sense.

So here it is.

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*Matt’s P.O.V.*

I knew that the dress robes would be able to reach me, because I’d left them kidding in a box all rapped up. I’d hidden them there after she didn’t answer me when I asked her to the ball.

I took out my wand again and started conjuring up tables, a few candles, so that it wasn’t so gloomy in the tunnel. I had decided this all back when I was putting on the first spell that I used. So, maybe I lied, I had planned this out a lot before hand. I wanted it to be just right. This isn’t exactly the way I wanted it, because I didn’t think that we would have to be in this predicament , but I’m going to make it work just the way things are now.

Everything was great, I’d even gotten some help from her mom on a really nice poem, I’m hoping that she will love it. The tunnel is almost finished. In the centre of where we are standing there is a table covered in lace and a vase of roses in the middle. Along the walls I conjured up so icicle lights, I know it’s not winter or anything, but they just seem to fit. Off in the corner I lit a small fire for light. Last but not least, I added two really comfortable arm chairs, the ones like the ones in the common room because I know how much she loves those chairs, except this time, I made them a blue-ish colour, her favourite.

Putting my wand in my pocket I walked over to the edge, the dress what just getting here, but there was no way I was letting her see this yet. It was something really special. Walking back over to her chair, I pulled it out and offered her the seat, once she took it, I went over to the other side of the small table and sat down.

I slowly put my hand in my pocket and pulled out two little pixels, knowing that they accomplish what I had in mind I let go of them, sending them up to the ceiling with a shot of light and glitter. I slowly looked at Keely, the look on her face was on of utter amusement , she opened her mouth to say something, but I quickly stopped her by placing my finger over her lips and whispering another spell.

Slowly on the wall came the words that I hoped that she would love.

To some you may not be special, but to me you’re everything,
Your joy, your smile, your laughter, it’s given my wings,
You’re someone who is beautiful, no matter what you do,
And in a crowd of millions, all I see is you.

You’re that little ray of sunshine that brightens up my day,
And when my life is cloudy, you’re always there to stay,
I am amazed at what you’re doing, and I’m amazed by who you are,
You fill my world with happiness like a brightly shining star.

And when you are in danger, when you need a place to hide,
I’ll be your friend and helper, always by your side,
A treasure with high value, an angel like no other,
And if apart, I will return one way or another.

When I look into your eyes, I always see your soul,
It’s always great and beautiful, and it always makes me whole,
You are the one that’s had my back, and saw me through and through,
There’s no easy way to say this,
But I’ll say it… I love you

The pixels that I had enchanted slowly began to sing this in a cannon, it sounded better then I could ever of managed my self, and trust me when I say that I can’t sing.

*Keely’s P.O.V.*

I can’t believe that he has done all this. Everything just looks so romantic, I had no idea that he could even come up with something like this. I stand here in wonder just merely thinking about how lucky I am to have him.

He’s walking towards me again. He slowly pulls out my chair and I sit down, he soon after does the same thing. Once he’s sitting something flies into the air spinning in slow motion surrounded by light and sparkles. Its absolutely beautiful. I love it. I start to thank him, but he stops me, whispering something that I can’t here. The next thing I know there are words slowly appearing on the wall, and soon after whatever it was that went up in the air begin singing as well.

“Wow, Matt. How did you come up with all this?” I asked quietly.

“Well, there’s something that I have wanted to tell you for awhile now, but I never got the time, I’ve been thinking about this for a long time and I can’t wait any longer, it’s eating me up inside.”

“What is it, Matt?”

He’s silent for a few minutes and just sits there and watches the words flowing around the walls slowly. Suddenly he speaks again.

“Keely, I’ve known you since I came to Hogwarts 6 years ago. From the very beginning we got along better then I ever imagined I could with anyone, out of all the friends I had had before I started you were by far the best. You just know when something’s wrong, you never had to ask. I couldn’t help but falling in love with you. I never thought that I stood a chance because you were always telling me how I was so much like you’re brother, but so much nicer. I tried to get you out of my head by going out with other girls, but it never worked, slowly we grow apart. Finally I realized what was happening because I was going out with different girls all the time. I was losing the one person that I truly love, that means more to me then anyone else. I guess what I am trying to say, and show you, is that I love you, Keely. I have for along time now, and I always will love you.”

This just struck me, I knew that he did, but I didn’t think that he would actually tell me. I love him too, but I’m kind of scared to actually. I love him for everything. I think I have for sometime, but maybe I should actually tell him instead of thinking it.

“Now would be a good time to say something” he says, quietly, he sounds a little let down.
“Matt, I love you too, I have for sometime, but I never knew how to say it.” I slowly told him.

Slowly, the words on the wall began to disappear, only to be replaced with new ones.

In rain or shine; in any case,
I'll be waiting with my heart in hand,
And kill myself at your command
Just to prove what love can do.

If you go, I'll miss your face,
And miss your smile, since we're apart.
Your eyes to me are like a dart:
A piercing gaze of life and blue.

Never leave; you're my happy place.
Without you all things are bland,
But when you're here the world seems grand,
Because you're the sole to my shoe.

If we leave, it'll be in stride for pace.
We'll walk hand in hand until we part,
Keeping hugs and kisses always at heart.
Because I'll be there for you.

I love you, it's as clear as space.
I'll be with you until the end;
Trying to be your everything, from a helper to a friend,
Cause when we part, I want to still be with you.

I have no idea how he does this. But he just makes me feel so warm inside. Getting up again, he goes over and gets the box that he had. Handing it to me he motions for me to open it. Slowly I begin to unwrap it. Gently I take out what’s in side of it, it’s the most beautiful thing that I’ve ever seen, holding up I realize why he said that I didn’t have to worry about getting dress robes. They are a amazing colour of gold silk, and wrapped around the middle and the top is a white ribbon, over top of the gold silk is a shimmering sequin covered material. It’s absolutely beautiful.

“It’s beautiful, I love you so much” I told him quietly.

“No, its not nearly as beautiful as you are, and it ever will be. I love you so much, more then you can ever imagine.”
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This is the Dress, Just please keep in mind the changes in color and fabric.
Keely's Dress>>Check it out<<

<3Jenn

ahshlyn · 10-01-2006, 09:40 PM

Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh!! This post was way better them I had imagined!! I really want that dresss...

Les Mots · 10-01-2006, 10:02 PM

Somebody gave you a five star rating!!!!

purple·myst · 10-07-2006, 01:26 AM

Here's a post, It's not that long because I'm on the phone and all, and it's all I can think of right now. I've edited it myself, so if there are any mistakes, I'm sorry, I just wanted to post it.

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Slowly, I got up from my chair and went over to him and sat in his lap, for the longest time I just sat there and looked into his eyes. We sat there in silence. I slowly moved my hand up behind his neck and pulled him closer to me, once again, I just gazed into his eyes. Suddenly I kissed him, shivers went down my spine, and he kissed me back. Slowly we pulled apart, and he held me close as if he was scared to let me go.

“Don’t ever leave me..” he whispered.

“I wont, I promise. I love you” I said, kissing him again quickly.

Picking me up, we moved over to the couch that was there, courtesy of Matt. The chair was a little crowded. Placing me down, he sat down next to me and put his arm around me, leaning up beside him I closed my eyes. Everything about this just felt right.

“Keely…”

“Yes Matt?”

“Marry me?” he said, reaching into his pocket.

“Yes!” I said without thinking, then it hit me as he was placing the most beautiful ring on my finger that I’d ever seen.

“Matt, we are only in sixth year….I’m too young to get married, dad wouldn’t like it.” I said slowly.

“Okay” He said, looking kind of hurt.

“Can I re-phrase it then?” he added

“I love you, will you promise to marry me when we are done school?”

“Yes!!” I said, kissing him with so much passion , this couldn’t of been more right…I just wonder what everyone else will think…but wow, this ring is beautiful.
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Let me know what you think, and I'll post again when I get the chance, I'm debating whether or not I should let my boyfriend read it or not, because I know that he likes reading, but I'm not to sure if he's read the Harry Potter books. Let me know what you think about that too, and what you think I should do.
<3Jenn

Moxie · 10-07-2006, 01:24 PM

AWESOME POSTS!!!!!! He asked her to marry him!!! That's sooooo good!

Love,
Adrienne

padfoot_rox93 · 10-07-2006, 04:07 PM

New reader :choc:

Hey! I'm the one you talked to on MSN. Your fic is awesome. Haha, at first when Matt asked her to marry him and she said yes, I was like WTF??? PAMS!
Amie

Ron4ever · 10-08-2006, 02:44 PM

Love it!

Parvati_Patil55 · 10-10-2006, 12:12 AM

Wow great posts.

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purple·myst · 10-10-2006, 12:25 AM

Hey,

Thanks.

And, it might be awhile before I post, I'm thinking about really shaking it up, and I am also working on an idea for another FF at the same time too. If you think that I should post another one, let me know.
<3Jenn

Les Mots · 10-10-2006, 12:31 AM

yes! most definitely!

danismine · 10-19-2006, 01:58 AM

this is wonderful
how romantic
PAMS

Roshni

purple·myst · 10-23-2006, 11:21 PM

Well, I promise that I will post soon. I'm writing the next post, but I want it to be longer then what it is before I put it on here.

Nothings been good lately, so I'm gunna post when I can, hopefully in the next few days.

Sorry for the wait.
<3Jenn

purple·myst · 10-30-2006, 06:57 PM

Well, Here's my post. Thanks to emma_rlz for checking it through. Hope you like it.

A few hours later we were heading back to the castle, we had really lost track of time. That’s not normally anything that happens to me very often but when I’m with Matt I’m different. I don’t really have a care in the world about anything. Now, even more because nothing else is happening, everyone else is still doing the same thing they were doing a few hours ago.

Back at school Matt left, saying that he had something that he had to take care of. So now, I’m on my own…I wonder if dad is around, maybe I should tell him about Matt asking me to marry him and more importantly what I said. Turning around and heading in the other direction I headed to the headmasters office. I hope this goes okay, the whole idea of telling him something this big when I’m only in my sixth year is a little scary. Maybe I’ll luck out and it wont be that bad.

I finally reached the entrance but realized that I didn’t know the password.

“What are you doing here, Keely? I heard my dad say behind me.

“I came to talk to you actually, I’ve got something to tell you,” I said.

“I know,” he says heading up the stairs to his office.

“So,” he says motioning for me to sit down, “What is it that you need to tell me?” he finished with a look on his face I couldn’t quite understand.

It might be easier if I just tell him straight out, I thought.

“I know that I’m only in my sixth year, but Matt asked me to marry him, and I said yes! But not till after I was finished school. He bought be a dress for the Halloween dance too, its so pretty,” I said, extremely fast.

“I know,” dad said slowly, again with that look on his face.
“What do you mean you know?”

“I got Matt to buy you a dress, I figured I’m allowed to do something for you every once in awhile,” he said.

“Where’d you send him to? Because he wouldn’t of been able to get something that pretty in the village,” I said.

“New York”

“Wow, really? And you knew about him asking me to marry him too?” I asked.

“Yes and yes, Keely. Now if you don’t mind I’ve got work that I’ve got to get done. You should tell your mother the news. She’s with Hermione right now, she’ll be until after the dance, so if you aren’t ready to tell her that will be ok as well,” he said dismissing me.

Leaving his office, I walked off in deep thought.