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03-09-2006, 09:00 PM
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| Keeper of Dan’s Grace Puffskein
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hello!!?? post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post!!!! PAMS!!
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03-10-2006, 05:05 PM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: listening to HIM on my Haggard earphones and searching for Bam and Malfoy with my night-visions!! :P
Posts: 250
Hogwarts RPG Name: Riley Brandon Second |
hey hey. i'm soo sorry i havent posted in ages!!! i have been busy and this chapter was hard to write!! but o well. i was banned from the computer so i snuk on to post this. lol. here we go...
Chapter 11
draco and ginny are official
The six ran to the stairs that led them up a landing and down a landing. The stood there to quickly catch their breath.
“Soo…*gasp*…fun” said Hermione
“Split…up!” said Draco. They nodded and went their ways with their partners.
Draco was looking at Ginny. Ginny. What is it about Ginny that I can’t get enough of? What are we? A couple? Or just friends who snog? He thought.
“Draco what are you looking at?” he blushed.
“N…nothing. Where are we?” he tried to change the subject
“We are on the…3rd landing.” Draco nodded and it went back to silence.
“Draco…why are you staring at me?” Ginny was becoming annoyed.
“What are we?”
“Uhh…what?”
“I said what are we? Are we a couple or just friends?” he said his tone getting a little strong
“Well…I thought we were a couple. Didn’t you?” she said sounding hurt.
“Yes. But…we never said it so it was official.”
“Oh”
“ So…Ginny Weasley will you be my girl?” Ginny thought about it for a while.
“yeah.sure. Why not” she joked but seeing Draco’s hurt face she turned serious. She kissed him on the cheek. “Of course” he brightened up after the kiss. And hugged Ginny.
“Who’s there!?” asked a voice around a corner. Their eyes widened. Draco took out his wand and copied him and Ginny while Ginny put invisibility charm on the two of them. She put her finger to her mouth to tell him to be quiet. They saw the real Draco and Ginny standing there looking at each other. The footsteps were getting closer. “Do something!” hissed Draco to their copies. The copy Draco and Ginny looked at each other then started to make out. Ginny rolled her eyes while Draco grinned.
“Wow” he said. “I could get a lot of tips from this. Look at me go. I don’t understand how you don’t faint gin. I must be amazing”
“Yeah. You’re a real boy wonder,” she said sarcastically. Draco was about to reply when Ginny put her hand over his mouth to silence him as one of the terminators were about to catch them.
“Got ya!” cried George. He made a face when he saw what the copies were doing.
“Get a room!” he threw a body bind curse at them. “OI. I GOT THEM. I GOT TWO!” cried George. He smirked at the copies. Draco and Ginny waited for the other terminators to arrive.
After a couple of minutes the other three brothers turned up.
“How did you get two of them?” asked Fred. George puffed out his chest
“Because I’m brilliant, smart. Handsome, witty, sly-
“George”
“They were making out and didn’t hear me coming,” he mumbled. The other brothers laughed and grabbed Draco and Ginny.
“What are we going to do with them?” asked Charlie
“I thought we had to put them to mum,” said Fred
“Ohh.no we must get our revenge for having to look for them and you Fred must get your revenge on Ginny for doing that to your hair” Fred frowned.
“Your right!” the twins took out their products and started on Ginny.
They put five chilli sweets in her mouth at once and were amazed that she didn’t cry out for water. She just ate them.
“Hey. Are your products broken?” asked bill Fred and George looked insulted.
“That there is a Weasley twin product! They are not broken. She must, just…like chilli” the others shrugged. Ginny and Draco were stifling their laughs at what really was going on. They stuck feathers on Draco’s face and pulled them off which must be painful to anyone but Draco didn’t even wince. The brothers looked at each other.
“The feathers aren’t broken are they?”
“Of course not!”
“Then why aren’t they working!”
“Uhh…don’t know. Give them time”
Draco and Ginny were trying harder to not laugh but it was to humorous as the twins were testing everything on the copies and when it didn’t seem to have affect on them bill and Charlie would shout at them.
“There’s something fishy going on. Don’t you think?” said Charlie
“How?”
“Well we know how much Ginny loves her hair and looks and she didn’t even wriggle when we put that green paint in her hair.”
“Yeah. And Draco didn’t do anything when we ruffled up his hair and we know how much the boy likes his hair to be perfect”
Draco and Ginny looked at each other. Only one thing would drive them away from finding the real reason. “Batus bogem!” whispered Ginny.
About three dozen bat bogeys came flying out of her wand. They started attacking the surprised twins. “Is someone there!” cried Charlie
“No there can’t be. We cornered them”
“Then it can only be one thing,” shouted bill. The brothers looked at each other.
“GHOSTS!!!” they ran from the end of the hall and around the corner. Draco and Ginny could still here their cries from being spooked and the bat bogeys.
hope you liked it
dracos comet x
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03-10-2006, 09:34 PM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Listening to SS Radio, on Bebo, or Hogwarts
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Catherine Fourth |
HAHA! real funny, keep it up! *wipes away tears of laughter*
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03-10-2006, 09:45 PM
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| Keeper of Dan’s Grace Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: 43°N, 79°W
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! I loved the part where the copies started making out!!!
PAMS!!! This story is really funny!!!
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03-10-2006, 10:16 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 2,276
Hogwarts RPG Name: Rose |
hahhhahahahaha...Draco...gotta love him! lol Great post! post ssooooon!
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03-12-2006, 03:33 AM
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| Lobalug
Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: california
Posts: 176
Hogwarts RPG Name: alice jenkins Sixth Year |
thumbs up. *draco concieded much*
Last edited by itsasnoggfest; 03-12-2006 at 03:39 AM.
Reason: a dude with bangs
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03-12-2006, 03:36 AM
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| Lobalug
Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: california
Posts: 176
Hogwarts RPG Name: alice jenkins Sixth Year |
new reader
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thumbs up *draco conceided much*
post more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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03-12-2006, 05:30 PM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: in a house with Black doors,white walls + blood red carpets.
Posts: 910
Hogwarts RPG Name: Keira Strachen Fifth |
Wow!!!!!!tht was ace!!!!!!!!!!!!soooo funny!!!!!!!!!PAMS!!
__________________ - They are Legends In Their Spare Time - <3 Jimmy Pop -- Would ya Nae?!?! <3 |
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03-15-2006, 03:04 PM
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| Keeper of Dan’s Grace Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: 43°N, 79°W
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PAMRS!!! Please post soon!!!
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03-19-2006, 11:18 AM
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| Horklump
Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: pakistan
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Write more it is cool amazing plus funny!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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03-19-2006, 04:33 PM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: listening to HIM on my Haggard earphones and searching for Bam and Malfoy with my night-visions!! :P
Posts: 250
Hogwarts RPG Name: Riley Brandon Second |
hey guys i'm really sorry bout not posting soon enough. but here we go. another chapter lol. hope you like it.
chapter 12
no man gets left behind
Harry and Ron had stopped running from where they tied up Fred and were slowly walking along the 2nd floor corridor.
“Harry?”
“Yeah Ron?”
“Can I ask you something?”
“Sure”
“ how long have you been going out with Hermione?” Harry stopped walking and gaped at Ron.
“How…how did you know about that?” he asked, Ron chuckled
“ Come on mate…I’m not that dumb!” Harry just blinked at Ron
“You didn’t make it half obvious when you jumped apart every time I walked into the room when you were alone!” Harry blushed.
“Are you mad?”
“ Heak no! You didn’t think I fancied Hermione did you!? Nah. I’m with…Luna”
Harry just stared at Ron then he burst out laughing.
“You…you and …Luna?!”
“Why? What’s funny about it!?”
“I…imagine if you have kids…they…they’d have…pink hair!” Harry gasped.
“ Your talking rubbish mate. It’s called strawberry blonde!” this made Harry crack up more.
Unfortunately their conversation was cut short by shouts of “GHOSTS!” Harry and Ron looked at each other. Loud footsteps were coming their way.
“ Terminators!” cried Ron. The footsteps were getting louder.
“Run!” shouted Harry. Ron ran away from the sound of the footsteps and Harry followed. “Ron you tell Ginny and Draco and I’ll tell Hermione and Luna.” Shouted Harry. Ron nodded and got out his walkie-talkie.
“ This is lion to red…lion to red do you read me?” Ron waited for a reply.
“What do you want Weasley? Me and red were in the middle of something!”
“I believe I wanted to talk to red not stupid jerk. Now put red on the walkie talkie!”
“That’s dragon. And if you want her I believe an apology is in order” Ron sighed
“ I’m sorry you’re a stupid jerk. Now where’s red!!” Ron herd Draco grunt.
“What do you want Ron?” said Ginny’s voice.
“The enemy is gaining fast. I repeat the enemy is gaining fast”
“ What in merlins name did you just say!?” Ron sighed
“The terminators are right behind us! Were on the 2nd floor. We need back up!”
“ Ok ok…we’re on our way.”
“Lion over and out” cried Ron.
Ron turned around to see Harry still running behind him.
“Hermione says they’ll be here soon. There only on the 3rd landing” Ron nodded.
“Lovebirds say the same thing” Ron saw Harry turn around and shout a stunning spell to where the noises were coming from. They stopped and herd a thud. Harry must have gotten one of the terminators.
“Hey! They’re in front of us. The babies are in front of us! Come on!” they herd voices say. Then the footsteps sounded once again.
“Keep running Harry!!” shouted Ron. He heard a thump. Ron turned around to see Harry lying on the ground.
“NOOO…HARRY!” Ron ran to Harry’s body. He kneeled down.
“ I’ve been hut…stunner spell…go on without me…tell Hermione…to feed hedwig”
“No! We never leave a man behind!” Ron picked up Harry and began to run again.
“Merlins beard Harry. How much do you way!? After this your going on a diet!”
its not that long but o well.
hope you liked it
dracos comet x
Last edited by evlpez; 03-30-2006 at 06:41 PM.
Reason: **** = profanity. Please don't do it again, or you'll be warned.
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03-19-2006, 07:50 PM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: in a house with Black doors,white walls + blood red carpets.
Posts: 910
Hogwarts RPG Name: Keira Strachen Fifth |
HAHHAAHHAA !!!!!! soooo funny!!classic!
__________________ - They are Legends In Their Spare Time - <3 Jimmy Pop -- Would ya Nae?!?! <3 |
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03-19-2006, 11:02 PM
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| Keeper of Dan’s Grace Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: 43°N, 79°W
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Omg you finally posted after forever!!! It was hilarious!!! Keep 'em coming!!
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03-20-2006, 09:06 PM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: listening to HIM on my Haggard earphones and searching for Bam and Malfoy with my night-visions!! :P
Posts: 250
Hogwarts RPG Name: Riley Brandon Second |
lol, thx everyone 
i'll post as soon as i can
xx
Last edited by dracos_comet2.60; 03-20-2006 at 09:08 PM.
Reason: spellind mistake
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03-20-2006, 11:15 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Showing How Appealing The Dark Side Can Be
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WOW i really liked this post it was HILARIOUS!!!! this story is getting funnier by the post, PAMS PAMS PAMS!!!
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03-23-2006, 01:45 AM
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| Keeper of Dan’s Grace Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: 43°N, 79°W
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I know I posted recently but please PAMRRS!!!
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03-25-2006, 07:02 AM
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|  Alex && Jay = Obsessed!Luff Gnome
Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: *Permanently Glomping Nabs & thanking her for the Wonderful Avvy she's made me*
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| PAMS!!!! This story is excellent.
Love,
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03-26-2006, 04:16 PM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: listening to HIM on my Haggard earphones and searching for Bam and Malfoy with my night-visions!! :P
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Riley Brandon Second |
hey *new readers (i think) lol. i am really really sorry for not posting. but i am erally busy this week i hav loads o homwork for tomorrow. (3rd yr exams r a real drag) but i will end up writing umm..2 new chapters since i havent posted in ages tomorrow.
sorry again
dracos comet x
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03-29-2006, 03:32 PM
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| Keeper of Dan’s Grace Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: 43°N, 79°W
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Please please please PAMRRRS!!!!
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03-31-2006, 06:19 PM
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| Lobalug
Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: california
Posts: 176
Hogwarts RPG Name: alice jenkins Sixth Year |
omg! yu would think that harry would be super skinny after always being attacked and running away from scary people. other than that great post:bnawtf:
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03-31-2006, 06:52 PM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: listening to HIM on my Haggard earphones and searching for Bam and Malfoy with my night-visions!! :P
Posts: 250
Hogwarts RPG Name: Riley Brandon Second |
lol. hey guys. iiiii'''mmmm BACK. woooo. this is the second last chapter of hide and seek. and i will definatley post the last chapter today. *sniff* so i hope you enjoy the second last chapter of Hide and Seek.
Chapter 13
jelly walls and human animals
Ron didn’t know how long he had been running but he knew it was more than ten minutes. Harry was still out cold and was somehow getting heavier by the minute. Every so often a curse would fly past Ron’s head and he would have to duck or swerve to avoid it. Wont they ever give up! He thought. He swore as another purple hex almost hut him. The terminators were hot on his trail and Ron was running out of spaces to run. They were almost at the end of the 3rd landing where he could go up to the fourth but if he did then he’d be cornered. Ron moved Harry’s body over his shoulder and grabbed his walkie-talkie. “HELP! I need back up. I repeat back up!” he shouted into his walkie-talkie. Ron waited for a reply.
“What’s wrong!” came Draco’s voice.
“ Harry. He’s been hut with a curse and out cold. The terminators have been chasing me. I have Harry. They keep shooting hexes. I’ve got know where to run. Where are you?”
“ Were on the half landing above the fourth. Run up to the fourth some of us will come down and help you. The rest of us will finish off up here. Just keep running. Even when we come run up to the half landing. Its time we finish this with a bang”
“ Alright this is lion over and out” with this information and the thought that he was to get reinforcement made Ron run faster. He felt Harry move on his shoulder.
“ Yes I like owls. I have one. She’s very pretty. I’m very pretty too” Ron saw Harry smile. Then Harry began shouting. “ I can’t believe it! You did it! Why…I loved him! Why did you pop my balloon!” Harry shouted again and again. Ron rolled his eyes.
A curse narrowly missed Ron and only got the ends of his hair, which made it sizzle a bit.
“ Move Ron!” shouted Hermione as she threw a curse behind him. Ron swerved to the left and ran behind Luna who was beside Hermione. They heard some shouts and cries of the terminators. Luna nodded in improvement. “ The amimalgas charm. Not bad Hermione” Hermione blushed and Ron looked puzzled. “The ani-what?”
“ It’s a spell I read where it will give your victim a part of an animal for a couple of minutes. So Fred has an elephant’s trunk, George has cows udders, bill has rabbit ears and Charlie has antlers.” The three of them laughed but it soon stopped as they saw the terminators coming towards them. “ Jellio!” screamed Luna. Red Goo burst out of her wand and made a wall across the corridor. The terminators ran straight into the wall and immediately got stuck. Hermione and Ron stood there in disbelief.
“ What was that?” asked Hermione. Luna blushed.
“ I learned it when me and dad went to France. The French love their jelly.” The teenagers stood there laughing. Hermione conjured up a camera. She walked up to the wall. The terminators just stuck against the wall still half animals. “Say cheese!” she cried as she clicked the button. The terminators got angry and started to thrash around. They backed away, “ quick we still need to finish it off” cried Luna. The three ran up the stairs. Once they got to the fourth landing Ron stopped them.
“ Can someone please wake Harry? That boy is heavier than hagrid!”
“ Hagrid is not heavy Ron…he’s must big boned!”
“ Just wake him up” Hermione flicked her wrist and Harry woke up.
“ WATCH THE BALLOON!” he screamed. The other three just stared at him. Harry coughed and stood up. “ So…what did I miss?” the other three rolled their eyes and carried on walking to the last set of stairs, which lead to the half landing.
The time it took the three teens to fill Harry in on what happened while he was out, they were at the half landing. Ginny and Draco were waiting for them with impatience. “ What in Godrics name took you so long?” Ginny cried. They ignored her and carried on waking. “ Have you two finished?” asked Hermione. The two teens nodded. “ Even had some time to…spare” said Draco as he winked at Ginny. Ron made a face. “ Dude…that’s my sister”
“ What exactly have you been doing while we were luring the terminators?” asked Harry. Ron gave him a look.
“ We? I was the one who was carrying your ten-ton body! I was the one who was dodging curses!” Harry rolled his eyes. Hermione dived straight in on what their plan was. Harry and Ron grinned.
“ Nice. So once we do that we just say the charm then it will be time for dinner?” asked Harry. Hermione nodded
“ Excellent. I’m Hungry”
“ you’re always hungry Ron!”
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04-01-2006, 01:02 AM
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| Keeper of Dan’s Grace Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: 43°N, 79°W
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That was great!! You finnaly posted! yay, now pams!!
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04-01-2006, 01:09 AM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Showing How Appealing The Dark Side Can Be
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LMFAOOOO THAT WAS A GREAT POST!!!!! This really does make up for the while that you haven't potsed. PAMS PAMS PAMS
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04-02-2006, 04:59 PM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: in a house with Black doors,white walls + blood red carpets.
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Keira Strachen Fifth |
wow!!!!!!!LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!lol post more!!!!!!!plz
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04-04-2006, 04:58 PM
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| Lobalug
Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: california
Posts: 176
Hogwarts RPG Name: alice jenkins Sixth Year |
omg!!! i'm so sad*sob* that was so funny. i didn't understand the part with harry and the ballon though*?* what exactly did ginny and draco do in their*spare time?*:bnawtf:
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