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I need to know what happens!!! PLEASE!!

OMG... SAVE GINNY!

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Great post Angie! Poor Harry just keeps finding more and more to worry about.
I can't wait to read more. I don't know where I to go from this point in trying to figure out what's next. Does Harry keep James wand and have him use Corny's to take her back to be cared for, and warn the Weasleys that the evil people might try to get Lilly, and the baby, and get more help from the Aurers. or does James stay there, and wait for Corny to come around and help Harry find Albus? I don't know. The first I guess. But James wouldn't like it one bit. He might put up a fuss. But, he would be doing his family a great service if he would go back.Great post Angie. I'll be waiting for your next post.
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another cool post...really nice...
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“Do you want me to call her Corny?” James suggested.
now that's like James Potter Sr....his grand dad will be proud of that one liner...

But i hope Cornelia will be fine and but i doubt about Albus...he has lost his wand...just hope he isnt in hands of Apostollo and her people...waiting for more...
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Oh, you just have to love James!!!!!!!!!! He's awesome!!!!!! Okay, okay I know I have said that before....about a thousand times???? Fine, I'll drop it....

What's the deal with Albus???? What's going on? Why do I have the feeling that Artemis has something planned that includes him??? Please don't hurt any of the Potters!!!! Or the Weasleys!!!!!! Or Teddy!!!!! Just kill Artemis and make us all happy, will you??????

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Due to the fact that I have no memory, I re- read your last post and I still can't seem to get my head round what Artemis wants with Albus...

With Albus? You never mentioned anything about ALBUS!

The reason for that is you'll probably try to kill Angie and then you'll get upset because you don't know what'll happen next... Read this...

*Scans page* JAMES! I'll kill him! He's dating his Professor! Even I didn't do that!

No... You were dating me instead...

Keep out of this Jamie! This is between me, Abi and Angie...

Sorry about this, Jamie... She's very protective about James and Albus when it comes to Angie's story...

No problem... I'll just go find Neville

Alicia, CALM DOWN!

CALM DOWN! HOW CAN I CALM DOWN WHEN JAMES IS DATING HIS PROFESSOR, GINNY'S BEING HELD HOSTAGE AND GOING TO DIE WHILE HARRY TRIES TO FIND HER... AND NOW ALBUS IS MISSING! NOT TO MENTION RON AND HERMIONE...

You forgot Teddy

Oh this just gets better and better... ANGIE! ANGIE! YOU LISTEN TO ME! YOU GET THEM ALL BACK TOGETHER AND SORT OUT THE AREMIS MESS OR I'LL KILL HER MYSELF! AND AS FOR THAT SO CALLED PROFESSOR...

I'll talk to you later...

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So sorry for the long wait....and I don't even have a good explanation for it, I just couldn't get around to post...Please forgive me and reply to tell me what you think....

Chapter 33 part 1

“Albus? He’s here?” James asked his father.
“You tell me”.
“I already told you I came with Teddy”, James replied. “As far as I know Albus is back at the Burrow with Lills and Hope; I don’t understand how he came here”.
“Obviously she brought him”, Harry said pointing at the still unconscious woman on the floor.
“She would never…” James started but stopped as Cornelia started coming around on the floor. James hesitated a bit glancing at his father, but then knelt next to her. “Cornelia?”
As the woman opened her eyes and stared at the ceiling above her with a blank face, Harry grabbed James and pulled him up.
“Get away from her!” he yelled.
“Dad, what the hell are you…?” James started saying, as Harry dragged him forcefully away from her, but stopped as the woman sat up and pointed her wand at them. “What are you doing? It’s me”.
“JAMIE, DUCK!” Harry yelled and barely had enough time to push his son on the floor, away from the green flash of light that emerged from Cornelia’s wand.
“What…?”
“She’s Imperiused”, Harry explained raising his wand as James stumbled on his feet.
“No, don’t hurt her!” James said grabbing his father wrist, as she started running towards the opposite direction and he aimed at her back.
“James”, Harry said angrily shrugging his son’s hand of, but it was too late, she had already turned at the corner. Harry turned on his son irritated. “I wasn't going to hurt her; I was going to immobilize her, so we can figure out how to bring her back to her senses!”
James shrugged sheepishly at him and Harry grunted angrily turning around and walking towards the direction they were going before they stumbled across the woman and Albus’ wand. James didn’t move, still looking at the corner she disappeared at. Harry stopped some meters away, closed his eyes, trying to remind himself that he had promised himself not to have a fight with James again. He turned around and glared at him.
“But…what if…I mean, where did she go?” James mumbled.
“I have a feeling we will find her later”, Harry said surprising his own self at how steady his voice sounded in spite the fact the he was…well rather outraged.
James sighed and walked to his father, who held out his wand for him to take back, since he could use Albus’ for now.
“What are we doing now?” James asked looking at the hallway ahead and avoiding looking at his father’s enraged face.
“First your mum, then everyone else”, Harry said grabbing the boy’s arm and dragging him behind him as he broke into a run.

Hermione walked carefully through the door and found herself in the same archway she and Ron were before. The main room was spreading beneath her, though it was significantly different; more Death Eaters were gathered inside and a big round table, with candles all around it, had been placed in the middle. Hermione wondered if they were preparing for the ritual that would bring Voldemort back and all the while take Ginny's life. That must be it.
She was immersed in her own thoughts and so she didn’t hear the hurried footsteps behind her immediately. When she did though she pulled out her wand and hid behind the wall, ready to attack when the Death Eater would emerge from the corner, thanking her lucky stars that it was dark enough for her not to been seen. After a few moments though she couldn’t hear anyone anymore; they must have turned around. Just as she lowered her wand though someone appeared out of nowhere and grabbed her pushing her out of her hiding place. They hadn’t left; they had simply realized she was there as well.
She had pushed her hair out of her face and was ready to attack, when the stranger gasped.
“Hermione?”
Hermione’s eyes widened and her voice trembled as she casted Lumos and Harry’s face came into focus.
“Harry?” she said still unable to believe her own eyes.
“Who else?” he smiled and then turned and looked around the corner. “Jamie, come on, it’s just your Aunt”.
James walked in, giving his aunt a sheepish look; he was after all supposedly at the Burrow. Hermione however barely noticed James, as she was still staring at Harry dumbfounded. She had convinced herself that he was dead, that she had let him die and now she couldn’t trust her own eyes and actually believe that he was just standing there.
“What?” he asked.
“You’re not…I mean…how…I thought…are you alive?” she mumbled and James sneered before his father could talk.
“Don’t you see him?” he asked her. She run and hugged him and Harry patted her back, looking at his son over her shoulder.
“This is getting old”, he commented.
“Dad…” James said looking at the place that spread beneath them. Harry let go of Hermione, who wiped her tears and followed him as he crouched down approaching the end of the small aloft spot, in order to see better.
Artemis had just entered the room. Just the sight of her made Harry’s hands tremble from anger. Concealed as they were, they could see her giving instructions and order at the Death Eaters around, before giving the room one last glance and walk out again. Harry turned to Hermione.
“This must be the room they’re planning to have the ritual in”, she said and he nodded, his eyes finding the big round table in the middle; he wondered what was that for.
“So, where’s mum?” James whispered back.
“Don’t worry they’re going to bring her here”, Harry said. Hermione was staring at James, like she had just realized he was there.
“How is it that you are here my dear nephew, since as I recall I left you at the Burrow with your brother and sister?” she asked him then, placing her hands on her hips.
“He convinced Teddy to bring him”, Harry replied for his son.
“What?” Hermione said with a whispered and still angry voice. “James…”
“Hey, if it wasn’t for me dad would still be locked in some hole”, James said.
“That’s true”, Harry nodded at Hermione, but then turned at his son. “But you shouldn’t have lost Teddy and sure as hell should have made sure that your brother hadn’t followed you!”
“What? Albus is here too?” Hermione said in higher tone.
“Shh, Hermione be quiet”, Harry said, checking to see if anyone had heard them. “Yes, he must because we found his wand”.
“He dropped his wand? Why would he…? Oh, God, Harry you think they caught him?” Hermione asked.
“I hope not, but I don’t really see any other explanation”, Harry said with a grim voice.
“But what would Artemis need Albus for?” James asked his father. “She already has mum for the ritual”.
“I don’t know, but she sure as hell ain’t keeping any of them”, Harry replied, just as the doors of the room beneath them opened and Artemis walked in again, this time a team of Death Eaters following her, Yaxley and Dolohov in them. Harry noticed that Yaxley was holding the infamous book in his chest.
“You reckon they’re about to start?” Hermione asked.
“It looks like it”, Harry nodded as more Death Eaters came through the doors and along with the others formed a circle, Artemis standing in its centre.
A few moments of silence passed as the Death Eaters stood motionless, preserving that perfect circle they had formed, and then…
“Ginny!” Harry almost exclaimed as two tall, masked Death Eaters walked in, dragging Ginny with them. They were actually dragging her, since she was giving a fiery and yet uneven battle with their hold, trying to break free.
Hermione placed a restraining hand on Harry’s shoulder, but she didn’t have to. He knew they would have to wait for the right moment; it would be pointless to just attack now with more than twenty Death Eaters in the room. That however didn’t make watching them tying her up on the round table any easier. James was greeting his teeth beside him.
Artemis walked around the table and stood right above Ginny’s head, not bothering to look down at her, as she struggled against the ropes. As she raised her hands, the long sleeves of her cloak fell back revealing her white arms. There was a big smile of satisfaction carved upon her mouth.
“And so it begins”, she announced.

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Awe Angie! Please please please don't leave us like this. Get your next chapter ready, and post right away! WE NEED TO KNOW EVERYTHING'S GONNA BE OK! So let's see. We don't know where Teddy is or Ron, or Albus. And Corny is imperiesed. James shouldn't have stopped his dad from hexing her. Now, she can inform the enemy they are there! I hope you can post soon. I do love your story. I'll be watching for your next post. (which will be soon right?)
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OMG!!!!! Save Ginny, save Ginny, save Ginny, save Ginny, save Ginny!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And where's Albus??? I think James was acting a bit of a annoying with Cornelia and all, but well....I don't really like her, but hey if you want to keep her around and kill off Artemis no arguements....you are going to kill off Artemis right?? Cause I seriously can't stand her anymore!!!!!! PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!
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It didn't take too long this time, did it??? Hope you'll like it and that you won't hate me very much for leaving you with a cliffie like that. :evillaugh Anyway....please Read and Reply...oh! the chanting Artemis does is in my native language Creek, I though it would be more creepy that way...

Chapter 33 part 2

“What are we doing now?” James whispered to his father.
The Death Eaters beneath them had formed a more conserved circle, while Artemis started chanting in some ancient sounding language and they couldn’t make out a word. Yaxley had placed the book in front of her, but she wasn’t really reading from it; she must have learnt the incantations by heart. Ginny was still struggling with the ropes around her hands, but failing to loosen them.
“We save your mum”, Harry replied.
“How?”
“No idea”, Harry shook his head.
“I think that we’re gonna have to attack them and hope for the best”, Hermione said. “I know we’re outnumbered but at least we have the element of surprise, right?”
“Think again!”
All three of them jumped and turned around. There stood none else than Dolohov, accompanied by two large, masked Death Eaters. Ironically Harry had just realized that he wasn’t among the Death Eaters beneath them. All three of the Death Eaters had their wands already pointed to them and they could curse them before any of them even reached for their own.
“You again”, James hissed under his breath, feeling his blood pressure rising just by looking at the man.
Dolohov smirked and motioned them to stand up. It was Harry who placed a restraining arm this time, to no one else but James, as he remembered the last time he had encountered the Death Eater; though Harry wouldn’t quite blame him if he wanted to rip him into pieces.
“Drop your wands”, Dolohov said.
Harry was thinking fast. The Death Eaters had Ginny and they had just lost the element of surprise, which was the only thing on their side. And anyway at this point it seemed like getting into a fight with the Death Eaters wouldn't help. If they allowed them to caught them they would lead them into the main room themselves and then they'd be close enough to save Ginny.
He turned to Hermione and nodded both of them dropping their wands on the ground at the same time.
“You too kiddo”, Dolohov spat at James.
“I don’t…dad had mine”, James replied. Harry chanced a glance at the boy and a quick approving nod, as Dolohov considered this for a moment. Harry knew that if he chose to actually search the boy’s cloak he would find his wand in his pocket, since Harry had returned it to him, but thankfully Dolohov believed it and turned to the other Death Eaters.
With a nod of him one of them grabbed Hermione and the other James, pushing both of them forward. Dolohov turned to Harry, who narrowed his eyes, wanting nothing more than to punch the man on the face.
“Seems like you’re gonna have honorary seats at the show”, he laughed.
Minutes later they entered the main room; the Death Eaters actually dragging them in despite the fact that they didn’t try resisting. James knew that he would have to wait for the right moment to use his wand, but when they entered the room and he got a clear view of his mother tied on the big round table in the centre, all he wanted to do was cast a spell to free her.
“Harry!” Ginny yelled when they walked in, her eyes founding her husband first. Just by the tone of her voice, James understood that she had met his father before and that she already knew that he was alive; though probably thinking she wouldn’t get to see him again before she died. Then her eyes fell on him and then on Hermione. “James…? What…?”
“It’s gonna be okay, Gin”, Harry said and Dolohov sneered pushing him forward.
Just then Artemis lowered her hands and opened her eyes, which immediately found Harry and stayed on him.
“Good”, she said. “You’re right on time”.
“You knew we were here?” Hermione asked confused.
“Of course”, she smirked. “Next time you want to orb somewhere make sure the place does not have surveillance” she pointed out to Hermione, her eyes still not leaving Harry.
“Surveillance?” Hermione repeated. “What you have Muggle cameras?”
“No”, Artemis repeated looking at her for the first time, though only to give her a petty look. “Though we kind of stole the idea from them. We have magic mirrors, concealed in every corner of this castle, all of them transmitting back to one mirror, a mirror I happen to have. I knew you were here all along”.
“Then why did you let us…?”
“It was more fun this way”, Artemis answered Harry’s question. “But fun is over now, hopefully there will be time for it later”.
She made to turn back to the book in front of her, but then looked up.
“Oh, I almost forgot our late arrivals”, she smirked, as more Death Eaters burst in dragging Ron and Teddy with them.
“Ron!” Hermione exclaimed running to him. There was a big gash on his cheek and his arm looked broken. She hugged him and he looked around over her shoulder, his eyes widening when they found Harry, a small sign of relief appearing into them, to be extinguished completely when he spotted Ginny tied up.
“So now we’re all here”, Artemis giggled this time really turning her full attention back to her book.
“Harry!” Teddy exclaimed as he looked around and spotted his godfather. He made to run to him but Dolohov stopped him, by pointing his wand right on his chest.
Harry caught Ron’s eye. He pointed at Dolohov’s wand, then at James and then back at Ron. His friend gave him a small nod of recognition. Meanwhile, Artemis had started chanting again, this time, reading everything from the book.
“AΥΤΗ ΤΗΝ ΩΡΑ ΚΑΙ ΑΥΤΗ ΤΗ ΣΤΙΓΜΗ ΚΑΛΩ ΤΗΝ ΑΡΧΑΙΑ ΔΥΝΑΜΗ, ΕΓΩ ΠΟΥ ΣΤΕΚΟΜΑΙ ΕΔΩ ΖΗΤΩ ΑΠΟ ΤΗΝ ΠΥΛΗ ΝΑ ΑΝΟΙΞΕΙ, ΤΗΝ ΠΥΛΗ ΠΟΥ ΜΕΣΑ ΤΗΣ ΚΑΤΟΙΚΟΥΝ ΤΑ ΠΝΕΥΜΑΤΑ. ΑΚΟΥ ΤΙΣ ΛΕΞΕΙΣ ΜΟΥ, ΑΚΟΥ ΤΗΝ ΚΡΑΥΓΗ ΜΟΥ, ΠΜΕΥΜΑ ΑΠΟ ΤΟΝ ΑΛΛΟ ΚΟΣΜΟ ΕΛΑ ΣΕ ΜΕΝΑ, ΣΕ ΚΑΛΩ, ΠΕΡΝΑ ΤΩΡΑ ΤΟ ΜΕΓΑΛΟ ΤΟΙΧΟ”.
She raised her hands again and closed her eyes, repeating those words over and over. Ron looked over at Harry and at the same time they both grabbed the wrists of the Death Eaters in front of them, trying to take their wands off their hands. Dolohov turned and raised his wand, ready to shoot a curse at them.
“Jamie, now!” Harry yelled, but James didn’t need to tell him twice. He had already taken out his wand and his curse sent Dolohov flying about two meters in the air and then crashing at the opposite wall.
Harry snatched the wand out of the Death Eater he had grabbed and punched him in the face, just as James was stunning two more that rushed towards them. Hermione helped Ron to deal with his Death Eater and took his wand, and then they turned to face all the others.
Surprisingly, neither Artemis nor the Death Eaters that formed the circle around her had moved an inch. All of the Death Eaters that had been sent to capture them were out but those that were already there didn’t seem to care about attacking them or breaking their circle. Ron turned to Harry, who shrugged and pointed his wand at the table Ginny was tied up to and was watching them fight terrified.
“Relashio” he said but while his spell flew towards Ginny, it didn’t touch her; instead it changed its direction and hit the opposite wall. Harry turned to Hermione.
“Stupefy!” she yelled pointing her wand at one of the Death Eaters. Same thing happened or rather didn’t happen.
“You can’t untie me?” Ginny asked, trying to properly see them between the Death Eaters around her.
“We’re trying, Gin, but nothing happens”, Harry replied and then pointed his wand to her again, trying to free her, but again nothing. “What the hell?”
“It must be some kind of spell from that damned book!” Ron said frustrated.
“We can’t break into their circle?” James asked. “Then how are we going to save mum?”
Harry grunted and handed Albus' wand over to Ron.
“Hold this for me for a minute”, he said and then he run towards the circle of the Death Eaters. It was like he hit a wall; or more specifically an electrocuted wall, because it threw him forcefully back and he crashed on the floor.
“Harry!” Ginny yelled as the others run to him. Harry sat up, greeting his teeth and rubbing his chest.
“Well, it worth a shot”, he said as James helped him stand up.
“What do we do?” Hermione asked as Artemis’ chanting got faster and louder.
Harry stared helplessly around for something that could help them, break through the circle the Death Eaters had formed, yet he couldn’t find anything. He was starting to panic, knowing that Artemis’ chanting couldn’t last forever. He was right. Suddenly she stopped, she opened her eyes and turned around, not facing them, but the wall opposite from them. She didn’t really seem to notice Dolohov as he lay on the floor beneath the wall, but focused on it. Then she started talking in the unknown language again.
“ΙΔΟΥ ΤΟ ΣΩΜΑ ΣΤΟ ΟΠΟΙΟ ΜΠΟΡΕΙΣ ΝΑ ΚΑΤΟΙΚΗΣΕΙΣ Ω ΕΣΥ ΜΕΓΑΛΕ ΑΡΧΟΝΤΑ ΤΟΥ ΣΚΟΤΟΥΣ! ΠΝΕΥΜΑ ΠΕΡΑΣΕ ΣΕ ΑΥΤΟΝ ΤΟΝ ΚΟΣΜΟ, ΣΕ ΠΕΡΙΜΕΝΟΥΜΕ! ΕΔΩ ΕΙΝΑΙ ΤΟ ΣΩΜΑ!”
This time she only said it once and then she raised her wand and a part of the wall seemed to turn around and revealing the other side of it, upon which tied up was…
“Albus!” Harry exclaimed, his eyes widening with fear.
Ginny, tied up as she was, couldn’t see the boy, but her breath got caught up in her throat when she heard Harry, who was staring at his son’s unconscious form. The boy appeared to be fine physically, though without his consciousness. His hands, neck and legs were tied up on the wall and his head was hanging in front of him. Artemis started chanting again. Harry turned to the others, who all seemed as scared and confused as he were. He couldn’t understand. Since Artemis already had Ginny to sacrifice what did she want with Albus? Hermione gasped.
“Oh, my God!” she exclaimed walking forward to stand next to Harry, her hand covering her open mouth.
“What?” Harry asked.
“She…Albus…she’s gonna…oh, God!” she mumbled.
“What?” Harry asked again more forcefully.
“Voldemort is dead for about 22 to 23 years now Harry”, she said. She glanced to Artemis and her circle of Death Eaters, but none of them seemed affected by the use of his name from her. Actually she doubted that anyone from the circle was actually giving them any attention; well, apart from Ginny of course who was listening closely to what Hermione was saying, wanting to know what Artemis wanted from her son.
“So?” Ron asked.
“So his body doesn’t exist anymore”, Hermione said impatient for them to understand. “If she’s gonna bring his soul and spirit back, she has to have a body for him to live in and…”
“NO!” Ginny screamed fighting with her ropes more than ever, as Harry’s eyes widened even more and then flew to his son’s figure on the wall.
“Al?” James asked with a hoarse voice. “She’s gonna use Al’s body?”
"She doesn't have a body for Voldemort to live in, so she's gonna evict Al from his?" Ron exclaimed freaked out.
“No”, Harry said shaking his head. “No!”
And he started shooting curse after curse at the circle of Death Eaters or tried to free the boy, but nothing seemed to get passed the circle. Harry groaned audibly as he felt himself sunk into panic. This couldn’t happen. Voldemort in his son’s body? The thought was so absurd, so disgusting, so vulgar, so rude that he couldn’t even imagine it. His son being the body Voldemort’s soul would live in, while Al's soul would be imprisoned in his own body? He turned to the others begging them with his eyes to do something, but none of them seemed to know what would work against the circle the Death Eaters had formed.
“You can’t do this!” Ginny screamed at Artemis as she was still fighting with her ropes so forcefully that she had made her wrists bleed. “You can’t do this to my son!”
“We can’t break through that stupid circle!” Hermione said in the verse of panic herself, just as Artemis threw her head back and let out a cry.
The wall behind her seemed to vanish or rather like a huge hole opened on it. A huge, purple, sucking hole that looked very much like a Portkey.
“Oh, my God!” Hermione exclaimed again.
“It’s happening!” Ron said as the wind that blew through the hope ruffled his hair. "I can't believe it's actually happening! She opened a damned portkey to the other world!"
A dagger appeared on Artemis’ hand and she held it above Ginny’s chest still chanting.
“NO!” Harry screamed, tears running from his eyes.
“We need to break that circle!” Hermione yelled.
“Wait, that’s it!” Teddy, who had remained silent, observing the terrifying spectacle in front of him, said.
“What?” James asked.
“You said that some of those Death Eaters are just kids Artemis has tricked or dragged into this”, Teddy told Ron. “That most of the old ones are dead, that most of them don’t even know what Death Eaters really are about!”
“So?” Ron asked confused.
“So if we convince one of them, just one of them, to break the circle…”
“We’ll be able to shoot spells at them”, Harry finished his logic. “But can they hear us?”
“I can hear you, right?” Ginny yelled back at him, doing her best to ignore the dagger that the other woman held above her.
“Worth’s a shot”, Hermione sighed. “This is wrong!” she yelled walking forward.
“You can’t do this!” Ron said too.
“She’s not trying to help; she’s trying to destroy everything we built all of those years!” Hermione said again.
“If she promised you that she will also bring back someone you lost she won’t”, Harry said. “Voldemort only kills people, he doesn’t bring them back to life, he was afraid of the dead”.
“If she told you that she’s doing this for her mother, then perhaps you should know that her mother murdered mine!” Teddy yelled.
“Yeah, because that’s what all the Death Eaters are about! Murders and Torturing and destroying lives!” James said.
“My son is only fifteen!” Ginny called. “Are you gonna let her make him a carrier of that monster?”
“And my wife just had a baby”, Harry said. “Our baby is barely two weeks old. Are you gonna leave her without her mother?”
“Just take a step back and break the ritual”, Hermione begged. “It’s not too late!”
“Just take it all back and we’ll help you to get past this!” Ron said.
“Just take a step back and break the circle!” Harry shouted. “Don’t let her kill my wife and do that thing to my son, please!”
“We’re begging you!” Hermione yelled.
“If there’s anything good in you, you have to do it!” Teddy yelled.
Just at that moment Artemis stopped her chanting. A large smirk appeared on her face as she raised the dagger above her head, holding it with both of her hands, muttering a few last words under her breath and then she opened her eyes again, looking tauntingly down at Ginny.
“Say goodnight, honey”, she smirked.

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Yay, you posted!!!!!! Oh, but no Albus.....this is horrible!!!! You can't do this to him and you can't kill Ginny!!!!!!!!!!!! Please please let them be okay!!! I really liked the idea of that circle that cannot break unless one of them steps away.....I really think that it's ingenious, hopefully though someone will step away, right???? He he I'm the only one who knows what the chanting meant!!!!!! Not that it was important...I just understood sooner what Artemis wanted with Albus.... Please you can't leave us hanging like that....I really hope that you'll post soon so we can see what happens next, but I also know that we're getting closer and closer to the end and I really don't want this story to end because it's one of my favourites, so please prolong the end for as long as you can, yea????!!!!! Uh well...PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Ohhhhhhhh I have goose bumps for real!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This was so unbelievably amazing!!!!! I agree with Kate great idea with the circle and all.....poor poor Albus, hopefully they'll save him, because I can't really imagine how it would be for Harry if something like this actually came through.....
He he Katie I understand the chanting too girl!!!!! Though yeah it's not really important, only creepier if you can't understand what it says I guess.....
This thing with the portkey to the other world kind of reminds me of Hell Boy you know where he opens the portkey to the world of evil, but then thankfully it gets closed again......I really wish you won't get through with the whole ritual because seriously you can't actually think of bringing Voldemort back, right???? RIGHT???? Right. And where's Cornelia? Is she okay? I'm not all the interest in her, but James seems to be and I don't want to see him getting hurt all over again, when he's been through so much... Probably why you put Albus in this situation and not James, for variation, huh?? Okay, done talking, it's just that I haven't commented in here for about six million years and I'm over excited that I am doing it now Please be kind and caring and a good writer and PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!! (<-----before I go crazy)
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Ohhhhhhhh I have goose bumps for real!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This was so unbelievably amazing!!!!! I agree with Kate great idea with the circle and all.....poor poor Albus, hopefully they'll save him, because I can't really imagine how it would be for Harry if something like this actually came through.....
He he Katie I understand the chanting too girl!!!!! Though yeah it's not really important, only creepier if you can't understand what it says I guess.....
This thing with the portkey to the other world kind of reminds me of Hell Boy you know where he opens the portkey to the world of evil, but then thankfully it gets closed again......I really wish you won't get through with the whole ritual because seriously you can't actually think of bringing Voldemort back, right???? RIGHT???? Right. And where's Cornelia? Is she okay? I'm not all the interest in her, but James seems to be and I don't want to see him getting hurt all over again, when he's been through so much... Probably why you put Albus in this situation and not James, for variation, huh?? Okay, done talking, it's just that I haven't commented in here for about six million years and I'm over excited that I am doing it now Please be kind and caring and a good writer and PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!! (<-----before I go crazy)
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Oh, Maria you know you are already crazy honey, so there's no chance I might worsen your situation....
Yeah it kind of felt unfair to make James go through that too, so I chose Albus, thinking that Artemis would have chosen him too, since he's the one that looks more to Harry, so it would probably be worse for him, you know look at his green eyes and know that's Voldemort behind them.....
About Cornelia....well, don't forget about her just yet because we've got another thing coming from her and unfortunately James is going to get hurt again....aw well, that's life....


To all of you who have stuck with this story I just wanted to tell you that I'm more than grateful that you did and thank everyone that took the time to post here and made my day (literally)...Also in a more personal note I would like to thank Lilly and Kate for being my most devoted readers, Tori for being my very first reader, Abi for giving me moments of hysterical laughter and horror because of Alicia and for being an amazing Ss sister, Connie for helping me sort out some edits I made and Pottergirl714 because even if she arrived late in this story she always gave me the feeling that she enjoys it, also everyone who have returned after a lot of time to post again in here for not forgetting about my fic and my newest readers for taking the time to read through of of this...so yeah basically every one ..... I believe that there're only two or maybe three chapters left until this ends and I'm kind of sad because this was my first fanfiction, but over excited too because of all the replies I got and the good words I got to read from you on my first attempt... Please have a little more patience and I promise that you're gonna love the end


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