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Oh, I want them to finally kick some Death Eater a-s.....I mean enough is enough with that Artemis....I hope Harry gets her!!!!!!
PAMS!!!!!!!
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| Puffskein
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PAMS!!!!!!!!! Poor Baby! I feel so bad for her!!!! I hope that Harry and Ginny are ok!
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Angie... OMG! I hate you...
Shut up... Firstly, YAY! Harry's fine and Al and James are going to save him! Secondly, I can see where this is going and so can Alicia... I swear, if you harm Ginny, James, Albus, Teddy or Harry, I'll stop Abi from reading your stories!
Oi! No- it's time for drastic measures!
FINE! Please don't hurt them! I LOVE your stories!
PAMS PAMS
Abi... xox Alicia... XD
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Angie Palimor First Year |
Chapter 32 part 2
Teddy hastily let go of James’ arm and looked around as the boy brought his hand to his head, which spun with dizziness.
“Are we there yet?” James asked looking around. "I gotta tell you Ted, you are so bad at this..."
Teddy swooshed him and glanced up and down the corner of what appeared to be an empty hallway of some ancient structure.
“Okay, James, I’m still not quite convinced that I should have brought you along so…”
“Well, what is done is done”, James breathed.
“…so you have to listen to me and do as I say”, Teddy finished ignoring what he said. James smirked but when Teddy turned to look at him, he nodded. “Okay, so…um…I guess we can only search for them blindly and hope…”
“Mom… and dad, if they really do have him… will probably be in a cell or something and I don’t think that the temple already had any cells, so the Death Eaters must have added some parts to the actual building, so they’ll probably be…”
“…somewhere close to the exit or somewhere close to the entrance”, Teddy finished his sentence again, impressed by the boy’s clever thinking. “Come on then…” he added and started walking forward taking his wand out just in case. James took his own wand out and followed him quietly.
They turned the corner, only to find themselves standing in another dark hallway, illuminated by candles.
“You know it kinda looks like Hogwarts in miniature”, James quoted. “I mean those candles look like they hide a secret passage or something like some candles and some paintings do at Hogwarts”.
“James, please stay focused and leave the candles be”, Teddy said as he kept on walking.
He knew it was wrong to bring James here, hell it was wrong that he came here, but he couldn’t help it; if by any chance Harry was alive he needed to do anything possible to help save him and he only felt like that because Harry was like a father to him, he could only imagine how James would feel, how badly he would want to help his father. Yet, it didn’t seem likely that they could actually help if they didn’t find Harry or Ginny. And they needed to do that fast.
“What do we say if we bump onto Ron and Hermione?” Teddy asked. “James?” He turned but there was no sign of the boy behind him. “James?” Teddy said again starting to panic. “Hell, no! Tell me I didn’t actually lost him!”
“You can see her?” Hermione whispered as she stayed hidden behind a wall, while Ron, who stood next to her, picked towards a large room, where a bunch of Death Eaters were gathered, which looked like a dining room.
“No, there’s no sign of Harry or Ginny”, Ron replied turning to look at her.
“How are we gonna find her?”
“Them, Hermione, not just her”, Ron corrected her with a whisper.
“Ron, I know you want Harry to be alive but logic says that…”
“Harry has to be alive, Hermione and not just because I want it to. And logic was never a good friend of mine anyway, so do not suggest I should follow it now; I know only what my gut tells me and that’s that my best mate is not dead, not yet”.
“Well, fine, how are we gonna find them?” Hermione asked exasperated.
“I don’t know but I don’t think there’s any reason to keep fooling around here”, Ron said and motioned her towards the door they had entered. She followed him and they slowly stepped out, unnoticed by the Death Eaters. When they stepped out in the hallway, Hermione illuminated it by a small light that she made to erupt from the tip of her wand. She looked up and down and then at her husband. They had no idea where to go next.
“Well, maybe we should just…” she started saying but then they heard hurried footsteps from behind them and they only managed to exchange a look before a thick voice spoke.
“Who’s there?”
Before Hermione could extinguish the light from her wand, three masked Death Eaters turned around the corner and came face to face with them. When the first one realized who they were, he shot a curse at them, but Hermione quickly stopped while Ron shot a curse at him and before his colleagues could do anything, Ron’s curse hit him right on the chest and he fell down unconscious. The other two started fighting against them, but soon became obvious that they weren’t experienced wizards, because their spells didn’t seem able to penetrate Hermione’s protection shield. After a few moments they both joined their friend on the floor.
“What are we gonna do with them?” Ron asked out of breath. “We must hide them somewhere for them not to find them like….what are you doing?” he finished as his wife approached one of them and crouched down in front of him.
“I want to see something”, she replied and she pulled of the mask of one of the Death Eaters. Ron gasped. It was a kid, barely twenty years old.
“Why on earth did she recruit kids?” Ron asked incredulous.
“New blood”, Hermione sighed. “Most of the Death Eaters were too old, like Dolohov is, and she needed new members to rebuilt the old army. At least they’re not experienced enough and are easy to defeat”.
“But…how…how did she ever get to them?”
“Artemis is cunning”, Hermione said standing up. “I’ve learnt that much from when we worked at the Ministry together, only back then I thought that was to our advantage. Who knows what she told them or what they think Voldemort really is about. I mean they weren’t around during the war, they don’t know what this new regime she promised them really is”.
“We’ve got to stop her”, Ron shook his head.
“Yeah, well first we have to save Ginny” Hermione sighed. “And Harry”, she added seeing Ron’s raised eyebrows. She started walking back at him, but one of the Death Eaters groaned on the floor and before they could stop him, stood up and started running away from them. “Ron!” Hermione yelled and they both started chasing after him, shooting curses at his back.
“We can’t let him alert them!” Ron shouted, but as they turned the corner the Death Eater was just standing there waiting for them. They both stopped, their wands raised and ready, and they quickly glanced at each other. Why did he stop?
Ron breathed and raised his wand to form a curse but Hermione grabbed his arm, stopping him. What if he too was just a kid and he wanted to surrender? She started walking towards him, trying to think of what to say, but before any of them could do anything he turned to the wall behind him and drew out one of the candles. Nothing happened for a second and then the ground beneath Hermione’s feet vanished and she fell into the hole that opened beneath her with a scream.
“Hermione!” Ron yelled but the opening closed before he even reached it. The Death Eater made to run, but Ron’s curse threw him all the way to the opposite wall, where he slid down and fell on the floor, not moving again. Ron started walking around the place where Hermione vanished, trying any spells he knew to open the secret passage, he even tried to pull out more candles but nothing happened. They had been separated, which would make them an easier target. Great.
Ginny knelt down beside Harry again and he took one of her hands in his, while she used the other to push his hair out of his face.
“You’re cold”, he commented wriggling her hand in his.
“You can’t even stand and you’re worried about me being cold?” she asked rolling her eyes and then she sighed. “What are we gonna do?”
“I don’t know”, Harry replied. “They’ve taken your wand as well, right?”
“No, I have it and I’m not using it because it’s so nice and comfy in here”, Ginny said sarcastically. Harry rolled his eyes and then shrugged.
“I guess Ron and Hermione will come searching for you and…”
“Oh, I so yelled at them”, Ginny said sheepishly.
“Yeah, I know, Artemis told me! Gin, what were you thinking? You kicked them out?”
“I wasn’t thinking, Harry, I thought you were dead”, she grunted. Harry closed his eyes and leaned back on the wall. “Sorry”, Ginny said with a small voice. He had told her that he had seen the funeral; that she had made him watch it and she could tell that seeing their pain had hurt him just as much. She exhaled, angry with herself; while she thought him dead, she kept thinking that she would do anything and give everything to have him back, and now there he was and all she was doing was yelling at him and making sarcastic comments. “Sorry”, she repeated and hugged him, wrapping her arms tightly around his chest. Harry opened his eyes and looked down at her startled.
“Gin, it’s okay, don’t cry”, he said and wiped away the tears, she didn’t even feel falling from her eyes.
“I just couldn’t live in a house with Ron and Hermione and keep thinking that I had lost you because of them”, she sighed.
“But it wasn’t their fault, Gin”.
“I know and I knew back then too and that’s why I had to send them away. If they were there, it would be even harder for me not to blame it on them”, she explained.
“Anyway, whatever you did, I’m sure they will come”, he sighed. “They both love you very much”.
“They love you too”, she said. “Both of them were devastated; both kept blaming themselves for your ‘death’” she said the last word by making quotations marks with her hands.
“Imagine what a great shock it would be to them, to find me alive”, he said.
“Honey, since I didn’t get a heart attack, don’t worry nobody else will”, she told him matter of factly and they both laughed, but Harry became serious almost right away.
“What about the kids?” he asked her then. “How…how are they?”
She sighed, knowing he wasn’t referring to their physical health.
“Well, the baby has been crying a lot, since you weren’t there to do whatever it is that you do that makes her stop crying immediately”, she said.
“And what about the other three?”
“Lily has been doing a lot of crying too”, Ginny shrugged. “James…he was hurting, but he tried to be strong and I think he was the strongest of all of us, I don’t know what I’d have done without him, you’d be so proud of him. But yet, the one that worried me more than anyone else was Albus”.
“Why?” Harry asked her and she looked up at him deep in thought.
“Albus knew”, she replied.
“Knew what?”
“That you weren’t dead”, Ginny explained. “From the moment we told them, he kept saying and believing that you were alive. Of course I thought you were dead and Albus in denial, so I was worried about him, but obviously, he was right”, she said smiling at him.
“Maybe he was in denial and only happened to be right”, Harry said. “How could he have known?”
“Oh, no, now I believe he did”, Ginny shook her head. “It wasn’t denial, it was conviction. He was certain, but I didn’t believe him”, she added with a sigh. “Nobody did and we all tried to convince him that you were gone, but he wasn’t listening to anyone”.
“Will you wait up one moment?” she yelled behind him as Albus was running down the corridor, they apparated. “Potter stop!” Cornelia shouted grabbing his arm. He shrugged off.
“Look, you brought me here, now you can go back”, he told her.
“If you think that I’m going to leave you here, you’re crazy”, she said as she was looking around at the dark and aged place they were in. “This was a big mistake”, she added and grabbed his arm again. “Come on, we’re going back!”
“No!” Albus exclaimed shrugging her hand off again. “Look, I don’t care what is that you do with my brother and I’m not gonna tell anybody, so please just go back and leave me here, so I can find my parents!”
“You think that’s what I care about?” she asked him with a calm voice that surprised him. “I don’t care if you tell, I don’t care for my job; I care for James! That’s why I apparated us here, but I can’t…I can’t jeopardize your life…we need to head back!” she finished and grabbed his hand again.
Albus recovered from the shock the next moment and shrugged her hand off again, but this time less aggressively.
“I need to find my parents…my dad is alive somewhere in here and I need to find him”, he said. “I’m not going back; if you want to help me, then stay, if you’re gonna make this difficult go home and bring help”.
The woman exhaled and then shrugged.
“Fine, I’ll stay”, she said. “But, Albus you can’t start running around calling your parents; you need to be careful”.
“Fine”, Albus nodded and turned around and started walking slowly this time down the corridor, as he pulled his wand out. He stopped after a few steps though and turned to look at the woman that hadn’t moved. “It’s okay, professor, we’ll find them and then get the hell out of here, that’s all”.
She took a deep breath and followed him.
-Angie-
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Janet Lynn Gordon Fifth Year | Werecats are people too! Reader of Fan Fictions
Everytime I finish reading a new post of yours, I find I've been holding my breath. Then as I sit here recovering my breath, thinking on what I just read, I start wishing there was more of it to read. Great post Angie. I hope you can post very soon.
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Join Date: May 2009 Location: Missouri
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lily Adams First Year |
PAMS! That so cool! I love it! Please post more soon!
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03-20-2010, 12:21 PM
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| Albus is sooooo cute. He's very like Harry..........doesn't see how dangerous a situation is but i love him!!
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03-22-2010, 04:29 PM
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I loveeeeeeeeeed it!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It was brilliant!!!! Please let them be okay...
I love all of Harry and Ginny stuff....they're simply amazing and I love them!!!!!! Please don't hurt them....and
PAMS!!!!!!!!!!
*Kate*
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Join Date: Mar 2009
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Hogwarts RPG Name: isabella Macmillan Sixth Year |
heya new reader...and i must say i am loving this...it is quite a gripping story all th way...waiting for thr next post...
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03-30-2010, 10:28 AM
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| SS Vaulter Firecrab
Join Date: May 2008 Location: Playing God <3
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If you don't PAMS... I'll kill you off in the new story!!!
It was great! Even Alicia loved it! Shh! She'll think I've gone soft! She can hear you... Damn...
Abi... xox Alicia... XD
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| Imp
Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Greece
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Angie Palimor First Year |
Hey guys, sorry I haven't been able to post sooner....
Welcome to harita, I'm glad I have new readers so close to the end!!!!! Please post and tell what you think...
Chapter 32 part 3
“So?” Artemis asked the moment Yaxley entered the room.
“Potter’s brother in law with his Mudblood wife, his godson, both of his sons and that Jenks chick”, he said with one breath. Artemis turned to look at him throwing her long, blonde hair back. She had a large smirk of satisfaction upon her face.
“Good”, she nodded. “It would be better if Potter’s daughters could be here as well, but we’ll have to do with what we have”.
“How should we proceed? Should we go and..?”
“No, let them think we are unaware of their presence; it will be more fun that way”, she said. “Oh, and I think we gave enough time together to our loving couple, let’s not overdo it; separate them”.
“Already done”, Yaxley nodded walking to the door. He stopped there though and turned to look back at her. “And what about the boy?”
“Just bring him to me”, she smirked.
“Better?” Ginny asked after she tied a ripped part of her shirt around the big wound on Harry’s left leg.
“Much”, he nodded. “Thank you”.
She smiled at him and then, pushing his hair back, she pressed the back of her hand on his forehead. Her face became concerned almost immediately as she felt the high temperature of his skin.
“You’re burning up”, she said taking her hand off of his forehead and stroking his cheek instead.
“I’m fine”, Harry said dismissing his bad condition with a jerk of his head.
She sighed, trying not to roll her eyes and then moved herself in a more comfortable position and pulled him into her hug. He leaned on her completely, closing his eyes and relishing the warmth she was providing him with. She started stroking and massaging his shoulders and arms, trying to soothe him from the pain, she was so terrified he was in. His exhaustion took over and he had almost drifted off to sleep, when she stopped. He opened his eyes wishing she hadn’t and already missing the second that had just passed.
“What?” he asked her. She had an alarmed look on her face.
“I think I hear something”, she whispered trying to listen. Harry tried to focus on what he could hear and soon realized that Ginny was right; he could clearly hear voices and they were growing clearer and louder as they approached. Dread spread inside him as he sat up; his body screaming in protest as he moved. They couldn’t be ready for the ceremony just yet, could they? He looked at Ginny to find her looking at him with the same scared look that he was certain his face wore too. He clenched his teeth together and leaning on the wall for support he tried to stand.
“Harry, no, don’t get up”, she said standing up before him, but took his arm and helped him on his feet. They could clearly hear them outside their cell now. “There’s nothing we can do, we don’t have wands”, she reminded him.
“I don’t care, I’m not letting them take you away from me”, he replied taking her hand into his. She squeezed it firmly as the door opened and about five Death Eaters burst in.
“I’m sorry to have to cut this reunion sort, but we have work to do”, Yaxley said and with a jerk of his head two of them moved towards Ginny.
“No!” Harry shouted and pushed Ginny behind him, punching the first Death Eater right on the face. The blow forced the Death Eater to take some steps back, but did the same to Harry, who almost lost his balance on his injured legs from its force.
“Look, Potter, we can do this the easy way or the hard way. It’s your choice really, but either way you must say your goodbyes to your lovely wife now”, Yaxley said looking slightly bored from the situation.
“You are not taking her!” Harry said and Yaxley raised his wand. Harry stiffened but he addressed Ginny.
“Do you really want me to use the cruciatus on him, when he’s already that hurt?”
Ginny’s face whitened, as she glanced at Harry’s injuries. In the state he was the cruciatus would be extremely dangerous and she knew she wouldn’t bear it even if Harry was completely healthy.
“No, don’t listen to him”, Harry said looking back at her and reading her thoughts in her eyes. She looked at him imploringly, but he shook his head, holding her hand even more tightly.
“It’s okay”, she whispered in his ear, brushing his cheek with her lips.
“No”, he said again and turned to the Death Eaters. “Tell Artemis that if she wants Ginny to die, then she’s gonna have to kill me now too”.
“No need to rush things, everything to its right time”, Yaxley said. “Stop the threats Potter, you know that there’s nothing you can do”, he added and raised is wand again, opening his mouth to say the curse.
“No!” Ginny shouted pulling her hand out of his and walking in front of Harry. “There’s no need to do anything, I’ll come with you”, she said and walked towards them. Harry tried to grab her hand again but the Death Eaters took her arms, pulling her away.
“Ginny, no!” he yelled after her but he didn’t make more than three steps on his legs that refused to co-operate and the rest of the Death Eaters grabbed him holding him back. “Ginny!” he shouted.
The Death Eater on his right let go of his arm and kicked him right on the ribs. Harry gasped, his legs giving way and fell down, doubling over in two. He didn’t give up though. Pushing himself farther than he had even done, he forced all the pain away and stood up again almost the next second. He tried to go for the door again, but they grabbed his arms again holding him back, as Yaxley stepped outside and with a jerk of his head the Death Eater on his right hit Harry on the stomach this time and as he fell down again they rushed out, double-locking the door behind them.
“NO! Ginny! GINNY!” he screamed.
They had already dragged her some meters away, but she could still hear him. She turned and looked back, when she heard him gasp, as the Death Eater hit his ribs, but the hold they had on her was too strong for her to break free. They kept dragging her down the hallway, but no matter how far she was she could still hear him screaming her name.
James walked carefully through the corridors of the unfamiliar place, not having the slightest clue where he was going. He kicked himself mentally again for tugging on that candle. The wall had turned all the way around, dragging him in and separating him from Teddy. And now he was wandering inside what seemed like an endless place, not knowing what to do or where to go. Great. Just great. And like this wasn’t enough, this place was filled with Death Eaters. He almost stumbled on some of them, but thankfully they didn’t see him, as he hid behind a statue, waiting for them to walk by.
As he wondered if he should stop walking so he wouldn’t get more lost, he reached a staircase. There were stairs leading to an upper floor and stairs leading to a lower floor. He held his wand in his hand and started climbing up the stairs. He reached the top after a few minutes and stopped to look around, slightly out of breath. It took James a few moments to realize that he had found the hallway that led to the exit of this place. He felt his chest filling with excitement, though he didn’t instantly understand why, but then it clicked to him, that if this was the exit, then the magically added parts of the temple, like say the cells, should be somewhere around here.
He turned around the next second and started climbing down the stairs, almost jumping from each step to the other. He followed the stairs that led down, wishing that he had really been that lucky. He reached a dark and wet passage after a few minutes. He raised his wand, ready for an attack at any moment and started walking it down. He had to be underground, because there were no windows and the air was rather solid. He turned the corner and his heart lost a beat. There was a long hall with black, iron doors running down it. He approached the closest and tried to open it; it was locked. He glanced up and down the passage and took a deep breath. What to do now?
He knew that what came to his mind was rather dangerous, but it was time for drastic measures. He raised his wand and the door burst open. He glanced inside what appeared to be a small, dark room. Nothing. He sighed and moved to the next door. He barged into almost all of the cells, but he had found nothing and no one and there were only three more doors left to open. He tried to keep his dismay under control, but when he opened yet another door to find himself staring at an empty cell, he couldn’t help but feel stupid he thought he would find someone so easily.
“Damn it!” he cursed loudly.
“Who’s there?” a muffled voice called from somewhere on his right, making James jump.
“Do you have any idea where we’re going?” Albus asked his professor, since she had taken the lead.
“From what I’m getting, this temple was constructed this way that it would resemble a labyrinth”, she said pointing at the walls around her.
“A what?”
“You know a labyrinth, a maze”.
“I know what a labyrinth is!” Albus retorted. “But how are we going to find our way in here or find anyone else for that matter?”
“We have to find the center of this place and then go from there”, Cornelia shrugged.
“Wouldn’t that be where all the Death Eaters will be?” Albus asked her hesitantly.
“Right”, she said stopping on her tracks, so that the boy bumped on her. “Maybe you should stay here”, she said looking at him. Albus rolled his eyes.
“I’ve already told you that you are not leaving me behind!”
“But…”
“So what if there are Death Eaters? Let them come!” Albus grunted.
“Be careful what you wish for, kiddo”, a voice said form somewhere behind them and they both turned, Cornelia pushing the boy behind her.
James felt like his heart had climbed all the way up his throat, her throbbing shaking his entire body. He had opened, or more like curse into oblivion, the door that stood between him and that voice and now he was just standing there, unable to move, just staring at the man in front of him that stumbled to his feet, looking back at him with almost the same incredulity.
A small smile appeared on James’ face. In the movies he had watched with his cousins in his Aunt’s TV, every time something big would happen, like when the good guys would defeat the bad guys or when something happened that could ensure the happy ending, there always was that exciting, happy music playing in the background and James always thought it was such a silly Muggle thing. But now as he looked at the main hero, who was back from the dead, he could clearly hear the drums and all of the happy music, hell he could even see fireworks.
“Dad?” he whispered his voice thick with emotion as tears filled his eyes.
“Hey, Jamie”, Harry whispered with a soft voice.
The next second the boy lowered his wand and crossed the space between them in a heartbeat. He was just inches away from hugging him, when he stopped noticing his injuries. He was even leaning on the wall to keep himself up.
“You’re hurt”, he said after a few moments and Harry smiled at him.
“Don’t worry”, he said shaking his head, and then he stretched out his arm. “Here, lend me your wand for a second”.
James gave it to him with no hesitancy and stepped back to let him use it. Harry freed his hands from the chains around his wrists and then started performing spells to heal his legs and his other wounds and bruises, his son’s wand working for him perfectly, almost with no difference from his own. During the time Harry was trying to patch himself up, James was just staring at him, almost not daring to blink, in fear he might disappear.
“There”, Harry said after a few minutes, letting all of his weight on his legs and grinning satisfied when all he felt was a slight pierce of pain. Teddy could have probably done a better job and he probably had closed infected wounds, but for now it will have to do.
“Can I hug you now?” James questioned and Harry held out his arms. The boy hugged him so tightly that his rib case hurt, but Harry didn't protest as his son was holding on to him for dear life. James felt like the last few days were just a bad dream and even though he knew that they still had a lot to go on with and that his mom was yet to be found, as his dad rubbed his back, he couldn’t help but feel like everything was going to fall into their right place.
“Everything will be okay now”, Harry said as the boy let go. “I’m here”, he smiled wiping the boy's tears away and James nodded.
“Yeah and can you believe it? I don’t even care for the ‘I told you so’ I’m gonna get from Al”, James grinned and then looked up at his father's face, becoming serious again. "I should have known that you'd have survived".
"How could you? I didn't know that I was going to survive", Harry said.
"I could have had faith like Al", James said shaking his head, but then he sighed. "I guess I'll just confine into being the one that got you out of this cell", he smiled and Harry laughed, but he too became serious afterwards.
“We have to go find your mum”, he said. James nodded and offered him his wand again, but Harry didn't take it. “No, you keep it”, he said. There was no way he was leaving the boy unprotected. He didn’t even want to think of James getting hurt, because he’d have his wand.
The boy opened his mouth to disagree, but then changed his mind and nodded. His father knew better; this was after all his area of expertise.
Harry walked through the porch of the blasted door, but stopped to look back, when James didn’t follow him.
“What?”
“Dad…I…” the boy mumbled, trying to find words to tell him how much it meant to have him back again; how much he meant to him.
“Jamie, I know”, Harry smiled stretching his hand back and pulling the boy forward. “Me too”.
-Angie-
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| Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Janet Lynn Gordon Fifth Year | Werecats are people too! Reader of Fan Fictions
Hello Angie, That was superfantabulous! I am so much enjoying your story! And I always hope everytime I check my mail that there is a notice saying you posted. Now you FINALLY  post and I try to read it slow and savor it as I go, but I can't. I find myself reading it at breakneck speed, and then way to soon, it's all done. I can't speak of things I like really well, cause it's all so good. I do have 2 questions though. Was they expecting the rescue party all along. I mean, was the whole thing planned this way? And, can you please not wait so long before you post again?  Great chapter, and I'll be watching for the mail post saying you have written a new chapter.
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| Mooncalf
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04-11-2010, 06:42 PM
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| SS Vaulter Firecrab
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WOW!! GO ANGIE! GO ANGIE! WOOP WOOP!
Great one... James found Harry! If you hurt Ginny or Albus I'll set Alicia loose on you! I'm not that chuffed on Corny... Do what you will there...
PAMS!
Abi... xox
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04-12-2010, 03:48 PM
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| Fire Slug
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awesome chapter..
PAMS!
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04-18-2010, 06:16 PM
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| Murtlap
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NEW READER <3
I am in love with this story, aswell as your other fic.
PAMS! xxx
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04-19-2010, 11:27 PM
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| Imp
Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Greece
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Angie Palimor First Year |
Hey guys thanks so much for posting a review and welcome to my new readers!!!!!!! Actually I'm thrilled to have new readers so far off in the story so  Yay!!!!!!
Anyway, I'm having trouble writing the next chapter because well the end is always the hardest part and I'm afraid that we're kind of approaching it....
But I hope that soon I'll overcome this small writer's block of mine and be back with another chapter.....
So stay tuned because I'll probably post during the week....
-Angie-
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04-21-2010, 09:52 PM
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| Dugbog
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I'm really happy that James found Harry, oh but I hope they'll get to Ginny on time...and what boy does Artemis needs, James or Albus??? Anyway, please post really soon, think of all of your readers that are waiting really anxiously for your next post......PAMS!!!!!!! -aND don't kill anyone...-
*Kate*
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04-23-2010, 01:05 AM
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| Fire Slug
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Elizabeth Burnes Fourth Year |
that was awesome
beautiful
i loved it when james and harry reunited.
awesome chapter
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04-25-2010, 09:58 AM
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| Firecrab
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| oh the awsomeness ! i'm soooooo sorry i haven't been posted - i've been neglecting my Harry Potter fan fic duties with my lack of internet! great posts, can't wait for your next post x
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05-13-2010, 06:43 PM
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| Imp
Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Greece
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Angie Palimor First Year |
Sorry for the wait and sorry that this post is so short and without something actually happening, but I have the next chapter ready so I'll update really really soon.........
Chapter 32 part 3 continue...
Teddy was running as fast as he could but they were catching up to him. He turned around and shot a curse at the closest Death Eater and as he turned at the corner he heard him gasp and fall. He found himself in a big corridor with several doors here and there. He opened one randomly and got in. He closed the door and turned around, but as he did so he fell on someone who was running on the other direction.
“Ouch!”
“Wha…Ron?” Teddy asked incredulously.
“Ted? What are you doing here?”
“Forget that”, Teddy said dismissively. “We have to run, there’s a bunch of Death Eaters following me!” he added and made to run for the door, where Ron had come in.
“No, wait!” Ron said grabbing him. “There’s a bunch of Death Eaters following me too!”
“What? So where are we going?”
“There”, Ron said pointing at a third door. Teddy followed him and they walked inside together to yet another hallway. “Oh, God, we’re never gonna find our way in this place!” Ron exclaimed, sealing the door behind them.
“Are you here by your own?” Teddy asked him.
“No, I was with Hermione, but I lost her due to a secret passage”, Ron sighed leaning on the wall to catch his breath.
“Huh, kinda like I lost James”.
“You lost…JAMES! You brought James here?” Ron shouted.
“Well, yeah…”
“Ted, how could you? He’s sixteen for crying out loud! A kid! Hell, you’re a kid!”
“Oh, come on, Ron, you know how persuasive that little troublemaker can be!” Teddy protested. “And I’m twenty two! My godfather had defeated Voldemort long before that age!”
“Oh, please, Harry’s life is for science fiction”, Ron shook his head.
“You think he really is alive?” Teddy asked him.
“Yeah”, Ron nodded. “And I’m gonna find him. Come on”.
“Give me your wand”, Harry whispered and James did as he told him. Harry placed the wand on his palm and performed Hermione’s famous compass spell. “Okay…so…south is this way”, he said pointing down the passage. “So we should probably turn right to the next corner, because I remember that the main room is west”.
“How do you know?” James asked.
“How else would I see the sunset?” Harry said giving him his wand back.
“Right”, James nodded and followed his dad.
“How did you find me?” Harry asked him after a while.
“Well, I figured that a temple wouldn’t have cells, but they had to keep you somewhere, so I thought they would have added parts to the exit or the entrance of the building”, James said and his father grinned.
“You could make a great Auror someday, Jamie”, he said.
“Thanks, but it was mostly luck”, James said modestly. “And anyway have you forgotten that I will be the world’s greatest rock star?” he added and Harry laughed as they turned right on the corner.
“Yeah, of course”, Harry nodded. “How could I forget since you even left Quidditch for the band, right?”
“What?”
“This is why you left Quidditch, for the band, right?” Harry asked him.
“Yeah, of course, why else?” James shrugged. “Are we there yet?”
“No, I think we might have a bit more”, Harry said trying not to laugh with how eager James was to change the subject. “Dad?” James said stopping before they turned.
“What?”
“I think you should take my wand”.
“I told you no”, Harry sighed, but James stopped him again.
“If they see us, they’re going to attack you, not me”, James pointed out. “Plus you can protect both of us far better than I can”.
Harry considered it for a moment and then held out his hand and James placed his wand in it.
“I guess you’re right, but if anything happens, you take your wand from me and run, okay?”
“Yeah, fine”, James shrugged and made to move, but Harry was the one to stop him this time.
“I’m serious, James”, he said; the boy mentally noted that he called him with his actual name. “Whatever happens, you make sure to save yourself first”.
“Okay, dad, can we go now? Mum’s in danger”, James said trying hard not to roll his eyes.
“Yes, you walk right behind me”, Harry told him.
“Dad?”
“What now?”
“I missed you”.
Hermione stirred with a jolt. She sat up, gasping at the amount of pain that shot through her body. She looked around. She was all alone in a huge dark room and Ron was nowhere to be found. She got up, holding her ribs; she rather thought she must have broken some of them.
“Harry, you’d better be alive”, she grunted under her breath. “Because I really want to kill you!”
-Angie-
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05-13-2010, 06:50 PM
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| Mooncalf
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Hogwarts RPG Name: isabella Macmillan Sixth Year | Quote:
“Oh, please, Harry’s life is for science fiction”, Ron shook his head.
 ...that's like our Ron! can give those lines even in the thick of a situation...  ... Quote:
“Harry, you’d better be alive”, she grunted under her breath. “Because I really want to kill you!”
aw...Hermione...you have every right to  ...
real good post after such a long time...really liked it waiting for more...
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05-13-2010, 11:32 PM
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| Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Janet Lynn Gordon Fifth Year | Werecats are people too! Reader of Fan Fictions
Hello Angie, I'm so glad you posted! This was great. I loved Ron's line of, "Harry's life is for Science Fiction." I miss Ron's one liners. So funny, and this is just like him to say that.
But then again sometimes he just doesn't use his head. Quote:
“You lost…JAMES! You brought James here?” Ron shouted.
Ron forgot that there are seriously evil people chasing them, and he needs to be quiet. Quote:
“Thanks, but it was mostly luck”, James said modestly.
James is so like his Dad.
Great post Angie. Hope you can post really soon. I'll be watching for your next post.
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05-13-2010, 11:52 PM
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| Fire Slug
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Los Angeles
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Elizabeth Burnes Fourth Year |
awesome post
i hope everyone is ok
i love rons line about "harry's life is for science fiction"
so true
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05-14-2010, 09:54 AM
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| Imp
Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Greece
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Angie Palimor First Year |
Well, here's the rest of the chapter.........
Chapter 32 part 3 cont.
James was walking only a few steps behind his father and as a result when his father suddenly stopped, he bumped on him.
“What?” James asked him.
“There’s a body there”, Harry said and James turned his head to the hallway they’ve been walking on to see. After a few seconds he realized he was looking at the form of a person lying on the floor, but it was too dark and he couldn’t even make out if it was a woman or a man.
“Lumos!” Harry said and a small light appeared at the tip of James’ wand. He pointed it towards the body on the floor, wanting to see who it was.
“Cornelia!” James exclaimed and run to her. Harry walked next to them too and knelt down beside her to take her pulse. “She’s alive”, he sighed.
“What’s wrong with her?” James asked.
“Well, judging from the wound on her head”, Harry said pointing at the bloodied side of her head, “she must have banged it somewhere”.
“Is she gonna be okay?”
“Probably”, Harry said. “James, why did you bring her with you?”
“What?” James asked confused. “I didn’t bring her”.
Harry grunted.
“James, I know!”
“Know what?” James asked back, while he was thinking fast. Why was Cornelia there? And how could his dad know? Who told him?
“Oh, I don’t know”, Harry grunted. “That you’ve been dating your own professor, maybe?”
“I…not…how…?” James mumbled while his face turned red.
“How do I know? Artemis has been watching our house! I’ve learnt about my son’s love life from freaking Apostollo!”
“Oh, come on dad, it’s not such a big a deal!” James said.
“Not such a big a deal?” Harry repeated. “You’re lucky I don’t have time for this because I need to find your mother, but you wait until I do and we’ll see what she thinks!”
“Oh, dad, come on!” James pleaded. “You can’t tell mum!”
Harry grunted again, getting up.
“Where are you going?” James asked him. “What about Cornelia?”
“Can you stop calling her Cornelia?”
“Do you want me to call her Corny?” James suggested.
Harry closed his eyes taking a deep breath.
“Okay, so we’re gonna…” he started but stopped.
“What?”
“She still has her wand, right?” Harry asked him.
“Yes, it’s in her hand”, James nodded looking down at her.
“Then whose is this?” Harry asked walking a few meters away and picking up a wand from the floor. He took it in his hands and examined it.
“Maybe it fell from one of the Death Eaters that attacked her”, James shrugged, but his father turned to him shaking his head negatively, his eyes filled with concern.
“Pine, 11.8 cm, Hippogriff hair as a core”, Harry said. “This is Albus’ wand”.
-Angie-
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