Okay, I usually only write poems after bad or good things happen to me. I don't remember any right now, so I'll write about a topic that has happened to me this year. I bet you'll understand what it means real fast.

Connection's Gone

Whenever I used to hold you
You would hug me
Whenever I would hold your hand
You would kiss tenderly

I would look straight into your eyes
And you would be looking at me too
So I would feel your presence in your soul
There would be that connection with you

But now darkness overcomes us
And now the connection is broken
I just feel angry and i hear myself cuss
Because i cant stand that i dont hear you

I want to keep lookin into your eyes
But we both now that it's gone
Now when i look i see what others used to despise
And now I feel the jealousness too.

Here's another one, when a close person to me .. died. This one doesnt rhyme but it means a lot to me. It was hard to write, so it's kinda sad, but it's the way i felt. If a close one never died to you you may not understand, but i was so confused at the time.


Gone

Gone.
I can't explain it
It's just so empty
Nothing can replace it
Gone.

I cant hear the laughter
Or the crying
Or the heartfelt
Or the anger
Gone.

I try to find hope
I try to replace it
It's so hard
Why did you do this to me?
Gone.

How could you leave me
Dont you have any respect
The truth is i love
And i always will
Gone.

How can i not
Still feel you
Memorys they say
Its different.
It's just...
Gone.


I love you so much Sarah.

That is so deep.

Thanks.

Okay I'll make a funny poem now about Harry Potter.

It's Potter!

Who is that boy with the weird hair?
It's Potter! It's Potter!
Who is that boy with not a care?
It's Potter! It's Potter!

Many think he's quite weird.
Potter's strange! Potter's strange!
Snape says once he grew a beard.
Potter's strange! Potter's strange.

Draco said that Potter flunks.
Potter fails Potions! Potter fails Potions!
Ron said Harry creaks in the bunks.
Potter's annoying! Potter's annoying!

What is my conclusion, wizards and witches?
That indeed, our friend Potter has many glitches!
It's Potter! It's Potter!

Dedicated to TOM FELTON

Can't you look into his eyes forever?
You never want to stop, never.
He's so handsome and plays Draco well.
If his face is on a magazine, that magazine sure will sell.

Many know this young man as Tom
The young girls call him "Da Bomb!"
The teenage girls call him hot
And elders don't really know what he's got.

But still, with Harry Potter fanatics, Tom will live on
We'll remember him as Draco, our memory of him will never be gone.

I Can't Believe


I can't believe we used to sit together on that bench.
I can't believe used to play with each other all the time.
I can't believe you used to tease me and call me "wench!"
I can't believe you would be with me when I made a rhyme.

I can't believe that we used to watch TV on that couch.
I can't believe that when my phone rang it would always be you.
I can't believe how we would play hide-and-seek, and you would always crouch.
I can't believe how I would always laugh with you, and you would laugh with me too.

I can't believe that I'm actually writing this out.
I can't believe that you aren't ever, ever here to help me.
I can't believe that my life has taken a different route.
I cant believe this all happened just 'cause we weren't meant to be.




That's prolly one of my favorite poems. Please, PLEASE, reply and tell me what you think about it. If you don't like it, just tell me, and I'll stop writing and stuff, but please it would mean so much if i could see the different views on my poems. Thank u!!!

lol! That one's funny! I like the 'Can't Believe' one too!

lol thanks a lot k i'm postin my next poem up soon..

Nature Walk

As I walk through the woods, there are leaves under my feet
They crunch with every step in a rhythemic beat
The music sounds in my ears while my back is warmed by the sun
The natural sounds put me to peace, so there's no need to run
Because I love being part of nature, just so everything's one.

Hey can people comment on how they like my poems, and which ones? Then I'll write more thanks.

This is really good poem...good job

Harry Potter Couples

Who is the greatest couple there could be?
Which Harry Potter characters make symmetry?
Could Harry and Hermione come as one?
They've been friends, so they'll have fun.
Or is it Ron and Hermione that make it nice?
Ron would entertain Hermione.. and at a low price!
Hermione and Draco.. hmmm.. what about that?
Draco wouldnt be as mean to Gryffindor.. not so much as a rat.
Or do you want Ginny and Harry, together at at last, yes, so cute!
They would socialize, 'cause Ginny wouldn't need to be, then, so mute.
There are many, many, other choices of boys and girls
It all depends on JK Rowling, or your imagination, with so many twists and twirls!



Comment please and I'll write more! Thank you so much!

Okay, now, I feel like writing a lot of poetry. Serious poetry, not having to do with Harry Potter.

Glass Tears

Glass tears fall
From glazed eyes
Jumping from the wall
A wall made of lies

They shatter
When they hit the floor
Pieces of sadness scatter
For a love that is no more

She bends and sweeps
Away all the glass
But a few pieces she keeps
They will remain even after the tears pass

Sleep evades her each night
All the glass she had, she broke
Happiness is out of sight
All dreams of love gone up in smoke

A shard of a tear cuts her
Her blood freezes
She cries and the world is a blur
A blur of sharp glass and cureless diseases

Inferior

You can't ever understand what goes on
Inside the mind before out words have gone
It's hard to know that it's my life I'm living
Not anyone else's life that I'm giving
It seems so simple to another
So it's like they don't bother
But they say that everyone is the same
And I want to believe that goes with my name
I can't express how it feels to be inferor
And how other's aren't supposed to be the superior
But then I remember that it's my life
And then I understand the blade of the cold, hard knife.

Shrill

The sounds goes through her mind
It's shrill ringing repeating and repeating
She can't leave her past behind
But she turns around and walks away
Her heart madly beating
It stops and she lightens a bit
But then she freezes
Unable to breathe
Unable to think
Unable to remember
As the shrill sound goes through her mind again
Then she walks further away
Images still in her mind
Fear gripping her heart
Unimaginable places to go
And yet she stays.
With the shrill tone of the phone
Still ringing
Still keeping her staying
Unable to leave
She can't go into the future
She can't leave the past.

Don't Know Me

They don't know me.
This is the low key.
Judge me by my appearance.
Think I'm an interference.
Don't want to get to know
Just look at the show
That's not the way it's supposed to
We're not in a movie, actors and go at the que
This is real life I'm talking about
This is the path of everyone's route

These are really good!

My favorites are:
Shrill, and Don't know me...

Thanks for the comments.

I'll write more today prolly, but right now I have to go upstairs, so I'll be back later.

Fire

Only she can feel it
The smoke choking them
Noone else is in it's prescence
But she goes on to death
Trying to save herself
But only running away
From her own self
Others cannot tell
What happens in her mind
It's enclosed with the flames
The flames licking her brain
Taking over when noone watches
She tries to get out
But she's trapped in her own nightmare
It's not situation that's wrong
It's her
Just look into her eyes
And see the fire that once arose.

I like Don't Know Me, pretty flexible, nice rhyming.

These lines:

"Don't want to get to know
Just look at the show
That's not the way it's supposed to"

are confusing to me, not fully finished?

Hmm, I wrote that yesterday, I probably missed a word by accident, I can't remember now though.

Remember

It's your golden touch that led the way
Your voice was the one I hear whenever I pray
Even though you're not really here with me
I still know that you're watching our whole family
We still remember you and always will
You're memory is the one thing no one can kill
All I have is one favor for you to do
When I try to talk to you, let me feel your prescence too
If you can't do that, it's fine of course
I'll never forget you, I will always remorse.
Or I'll take my life on the high way like you always did
And I'll be thankful for every moment of my life, be as happy as any kid
But remember, remember, that every time I feel happiness around
It's only because I can feel that your prescence is to be found.

Arrow Through My Heart

Can't you see my heart
It's bruised and it's broken
By so many others
It's so easy for them to make a dent
So many did, it's breaking
But only you can put the arrow through it
And you did
How could you do that
Don't you get that my heart's fragile?
Don't you understand I devoted all my heart to you
And you took it and used it
And tore it apart
But your heart is still full
Because you took another
To fulfill it
While I lay here
In purple and black bruises
My heartache.

These poems are really good. You're really talented. :up:
You can show that you can both rhyme in your poems well, and you can also do other kinds of poems, showing a lot of emotions. Write more!

Really good poems! Keep up the good work.

Thanks

Depths of My Soul

It's into the depth that you must look
My mind is not to be read like a book
Look deeper, look harder, see more
Don't you know my heart's the door?
Go through and memories you will see
And all the heartaches you will be
Look in deeper, you're not looking hard enough
And you'll see all the times I was tormented and tried to be tough
Or the time when I was a kid when I was abused
And then, when I got older, by boys I got used
Then, older, I didn't get into college at all
And I started smoking so I didn't stand tall
Then, look, later it goes
At the reunion I meet up with my foes
Do you see any friends there?
No, no one would dare
Now finally look at me now
Want to die but don't know how
All I wanted was for you to look inside earlier than this
Then maybe when I was innocent, I would have gotten the gist.