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11-11-2007, 06:58 PM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Hogwarts
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Melina "Mel" Abraham Second Year | Afraid to Love - Sa13+
I think I am afraid to love. Or at least loving Luna. Which is a problem. Because I
do. She's truly amazing but now is not the time for romance. The Ministry has
fallen and Voldemort has openly seized control. But what can I do? I, Neville
Adam Longbottom, am a coward. I always have been, but now is not the time for
cowardice either. I guess I need to look for the Gryffindor in me, if there is
any... I should start by going to Hogwarts, but I don't want to. See, I am a
coward.
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The train loomed above me, scarlet and this time ominous. I saw less people
there. But I saw familiar faces. Ginny, Pavarti and Padma, Seamus, Dean,
Lavender and others, but I did not see Luna, my heart skipped a beat.
"Hello Neville." I heard a soft voice say to me. I whirled around and there, to
my relief, was Luna.
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11-11-2007, 11:08 PM
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|  F&G's Chicken Wing Ting Ting Imp
Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: :) ;) :D :P :| XD B)
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Candy Jean Quinn First Year | awee. it's a very cute start! poor Neville! PAMS!!
x b r o o k e.
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11-12-2007, 02:13 PM
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| Snidget
Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Far away from you...
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Jake Chatich First Year | FanFic Enthusiast Soo cute! I like your style of writing!
-*~ Shirel ~*-
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11-12-2007, 11:53 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Reading my two FF's
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Hufflepuff and proud of it! Fifth |
SOOOOO Cute, can't wait for next part.
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11-13-2007, 12:14 AM
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| Lobalug
Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: DRESS REHERSAL!!!!!!
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Clementine Reynolds Second Year |  love it!!!
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11-15-2007, 05:54 AM
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| Horklump
Join Date: Oct 2007
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Hogwarts RPG Name: unsorted | pams, this is cute |
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11-15-2007, 03:22 PM
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| Jarvey
Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: diagon alley
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Diana Hayden First Year |
its cute!!
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11-17-2007, 08:03 AM
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|  DMT Jarvey
Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Colorado
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Rilen Taylie Green Fifth Year | New reader. Yay! A Neville and Luna story. I can't wsit to see how it goes.
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11-18-2007, 03:39 PM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Hogwarts
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Melina "Mel" Abraham Second Year |
"Luna!" I exclaimed. She seemed to have matured in the months we were
apart, her hair was longer, her eyes brighter and she stood taller. Every
strand of her hair was a different shade. Ranging from milky white to golden
like the dawn... Quit it Neville! I thought You're acting as if you're in
love with her hair!
"How was your summer?" she asked me.
"It... it was ok... you know apart from the whole... ministry thing..." God
Neville relax! You can't even talk to her!
"Oh, yes. I just found out about that actually. My father and I were in
Mexico looking for the Smooth Coated Filibinger. It's a cousin of the nargle
you know..."
(Just so you know I am the queen of short posts... XD)
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11-18-2007, 04:39 PM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Hogwarts
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Melina "Mel" Abraham Second Year |
The rest of her words were drowned out by the train whistle.
"Shall we find a compartment then?" Luna asked.
"S-Sure lets find ginny..." I said sure i cound not stand being in the same
compartment as luna alone...
***
"Hello Luna, Neville." Ginny said as we sat down in the compartment with her,
pavarti, dean, seamus and lavender.
"How sound proof are these things?" Seamus asked, examinging the walls for
flaws in the strusure that might let a peep through.
"Lets find out shall we?" Ginny asked.
"How-" Seamus began but was intrupted by an earsplitting scream.
"by the fact that no one has come running i'd say very." Luna said.
"Ok than we can talk..." Ginny said. " Ron, Harry and Hermione escaped at the
wedding we knw this, and knowing Hermione i'd say they went somewhere with
lots of muggles..." It went on like this for several hours, people arguing,
sharing ideas and worries when the train slowed down.
"Five more minutes till arrival." the driver said over the load speakers.
(I realized my tenses are a bit off... oh well
X Susi
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11-18-2007, 07:38 PM
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| Snidget
Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Far away from you...
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Jake Chatich First Year | FanFic Enthusiast Oooh! Those were great!
You have talent girl! 
PAMS!!
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11-18-2007, 08:25 PM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Hogwarts
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Melina "Mel" Abraham Second Year |
Ships that will be included in this ff:
Dean and Parvarti
Seamus and Lavender Harry and Ginny
Ron and Hermione
The red means only a little bit because it is not focued on those characters
(I am a terrible spell and my grammer ain't the best but..."
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11-18-2007, 08:31 PM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Hogwarts
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Melina "Mel" Abraham Second Year |
(This ones short but sweet i really love this ship)
"Oh good, i'm rather hungry..." luna said. there were murmers of agreement. I was
relived. The train stoped and we hustled to get a carridge. the great thestrals,
which I've seen since my frist year at hogwarts, were eyeing the students and a
second year screamed.
"well," Dean said. "I wonder how many teachers up and quit."
"None, except the muggle studies teacher. They made snape headmaster though."
I said miserably, Severus Snape was not a nice man.
"WHAT?!?!" Dean yelled, he was muggle born and didn't get the daily prophet.
"If i had known that i wouldn't be here." dean muttered. Just then they turned a
corner and Hogwart came into veiw, I had been going there 7 years and it still
took my breath away.
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11-19-2007, 01:51 PM
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| Streeler
Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Home, sleeping with the enemy♥...
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neville and luna...soo great
post soon, good job
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11-19-2007, 09:05 PM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Hogwarts
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Melina "Mel" Abraham Second Year | Thanks I hope this post is good...
"This way please!" Professor McGonagall said ushering us inside. I was glad to
see the familiar Great Hall. Luna parted with us and sat at the Ravenclaw table.
The sorting began and lasted for a half and hour and ended with " Zeller, Kate."
becoming a new Gyffindor.
"Finally." Seamus muttered, no longer able to stop his stomach from rumbling.
The meal appeared before our eyes and a 1st year gasped, nick had just appeared
through the table.
"Hello Nick, how are?" Lavender said cheerfully.
"Perfectly dreadful, thank you." he replied. "The new headmaster has forbidden me
to go anywhere near the Quidditch pitch, no fun for nick this year, now us ghost are
working for Filch." he said disgusted. I glanced at Snape.
"Will the headmaster be continuing DADA?" Dean asked.
"No," I said, "The deatheater Acymus will." I said scathingly.
"And his sister Alecto is teaching muggle studies." Pavarti added.
"Isn't this going to be an interesting year." Seamus said sarcasticly.
I agreed with him.
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Last edited by dark_emeralds; 11-20-2007 at 01:08 AM.
Reason: i am a bad speller
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11-19-2007, 10:32 PM
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| Formerly: hrmy_lvr_4evr  Love Detective Jobberknoll
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Aurelie Rylen Sixth Year | Fiyero ♥ | RED VINES! | FOR NARNIAAAAAAAAAAA | "Always." ♥| SupermegafoxyAWESOMEhot! Love it girl! There really aren't enough Luna/Neville ships out there...PAMS! I'm thinking of adding one myself...
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11-19-2007, 10:52 PM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Hogwarts
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Melina "Mel" Abraham Second Year |
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11-20-2007, 12:36 AM
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| Mackled Malaclaw
Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Maryland
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Ooo, I like this. This is interesing
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11-20-2007, 01:10 AM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Hogwarts
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Melina "Mel" Abraham Second Year |
Thanx i know my grammer and spelling aren't great but bear with me
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11-20-2007, 01:33 PM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Hogwarts
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Melina "Mel" Abraham Second Year | The evil cliffe! Ok next post.
We left the Great hall after the feast and headed toward the Gryffindor
Common Room.
"Huckleberry." Seamus said sleepily, it was after 11:00. The fat lady swung
open to admit us. Stumbling a bit we made our way to the boy dormitory.
"It's good to be back." I said.
"Yeah." Dean said flopping on his bed.
"Uh oh..." Seamus said, "Dean you gotta get out of here."
"Why?" Dean asked, obviously puzzled.
"Look." Seamus said and pointed to the Evening Prophet.
"Oh man this is bad." Dean said.
"What?" I asked. Seamus held up the paper the headline said... Oh I am evil CLIFFE! :evillaugh I am such a doofus!
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11-20-2007, 02:36 PM
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| Streeler
Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Home, sleeping with the enemy♥...
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oooohhh...c'moooon....you aaaare sooo evil
pamsoid
__________________ My first FF: Tough Choices Sa16+  Just because my eyes don't tear, doesn't mean my heart doesn't cry.
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11-20-2007, 03:10 PM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Hogwarts
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Melina "Mel" Abraham Second Year |
I have the next post all written up but i am going to make you wait becasr i am evil like that... besides thats the whole point of a cliffe.
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11-20-2007, 03:26 PM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Hogwarts
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Melina "Mel" Abraham Second Year | forget that, i'm nice XD !
ALL MUGGLE-BORNS MUST REPORT TO MINISTRY FOR REGISTRATION
"That's not good." I said.
"I got to go... NOW!" Dean said. Just then the door burst open.
"Have you seen the Prophet?!" Lavender asked.
"Yeah, Dean's just leaving..." Seamus said.
"Leaving?" Ginny asked.
"Yeah." Dean said.
"Where are you going?" Parvati asked.
"I don't know." Dean said and slipped down stairs and into the night.
"He'll be OK" Seamus said, unconvincivly.
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11-20-2007, 06:04 PM
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| Streeler
Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Home, sleeping with the enemy♥...
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i really wonder where he's gone... :think:
__________________ My first FF: Tough Choices Sa16+  Just because my eyes don't tear, doesn't mean my heart doesn't cry.
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11-20-2007, 08:04 PM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Hogwarts
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Melina "Mel" Abraham Second Year |
He went to Narnia jk lol
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