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Originally Posted by samthehpfreak 
THAT IS AWESOME! ... seriously it must be pretty good I stopped reading Series of Unfortunate Events, just to read it.
You have some crazy ideas, but I like them
Harry has a OLDER sister, Draco loves the older sister
thats some awesome ... yet confusing ... stuff right there
PAMS! Hehe, Thanks Sam, I am truly grateful for your comment!  *hugs* Quote:
Originally Posted by city_girl_95 This is just sooooooo cool cuz like lots of fan fics I dot like but this one is amazing!!! PAMS! Thanks, Im sure you will love this chapter aka chapter four!  Thank You All, You Are The Ones Who Keep ME Going When I Write This Story! Chapter Four: The Lies And Pain Harry and Ron looked at each other as they had woken up because of the scream, They looked around, Draco was nowhere to be seen. They ran into the girls room, There was Hermione, laded down on the floor, probably just fainted or someone but her asleep, but she as alive, she was breathing.
“Hermione, Wake up!” Harry said as he shook her up and down, Alice was gone and so was Draco, they may have been in love but they would not have ran off together, well, not Alice.
“Ughh, He was here” Hermione said with shock written all over her face.
“Who was here” Ron asked looking into Hermione’s eyes.
“You-Know-Who” Hermione said, Alice was gone and Draco was also, Harry saw this coming, why didn’t he stop it? He knew that he should have never trusted Draco, and know this was Harry’s punishment is.
Alice was being dragged along the ground not to far from there, she was being dragged by one of the death eaters, standing next to the death eater was none other then Voldemort, Alice was silent as she was unionise, her clothes were getting filthy as she had been dragged across all the mud and dirt, there was hope though, A hope to find freedom.
As Alice’s eys opend she was not being dragged on the ground, she was in a pitch black room, there was no one to be seen, tears were running down Alice’s cheek, she was scared, where was she?
“Hello Alice” said a voice coming from the distance, who was this?
“Who are you?” Alice asked as she wiped the tears off her face.
“Thats not important, what I want is you” The voice said, Alice listend, it was a male.
“What do you want from me?” Alice asked
“Join me, I can help you, away from the danger of heart break, away from Draco” He said, where was this going?
“Why did Draco do this?” Alice asks
“Because it was the Dark lords plan, to bring you here, but I can help you, I can help you stay away from danger, you will be safe with me, just take my hand and all your troubles will fly away” He said, there was a hand, you could not see who this was but you could see his hand.
“Ok” Alice said she took his hand, her arm stung with pain as a mark was coming on her forearm, what had she done? This was no nice man, this was Voldemort, he had tricked her into joining, he then came out of the darkness, Alice screamed with pain and she was dead scared.
“Welcome to the team” Voldemort said as he let go of her arm, there on her arm was the dark mark, she looked at it, once again she cried, why did she take his arm? She was now a Death Eater and there was nothing she could do about it.
Last edited by PureBlood64; 03-07-2011 at 11:44 PM.
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