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Morag · 05-06-2010, 09:04 PM

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Chapter 12- Part 1
Another competition

"Ginny" I heard someones muffled voice. "Ginny, Dear" I opened my eyes quickly to my mums smiliy face. I noticed Harry beside me. He smiled sleepily at me then looked at my mum. "Would you like to come down to the kitchen. I've made some sandwiches and you haven't eaten since lunch today." Mum said. I yawned, nodded my head then streached. "Ok. We'll be down in a minuet." Mum disappeared out the room and I turned to face Harry. "Good evening Miss Weasley, did you sleep well?" He asked.
"Well obviously Mr. Potter. I was asleep in your arms after all." I told him, kissing him on the cheek then wrapping my arms round his neck and hugging him tightly. "Did you sleep well?"
"Yes, I did and after all, I did have you cuddled close to me."
"Ok," I told him getting up and pulling him with me, "We are far too soppy." He laughed and followed me downstairs to the kitchen.

Part 2

Ron was not pleased from what he saw earlier and when all the adults left to go into the living room he glared at me and Harry from across the table. "Ok," I said breaking the silence, "Who wants coffee?"
"I'll have one." Harry said
"Yeah thats not all you want." Ron growled at Harry from across the table.
"Ron," I butted in getting two muggs from the cupboard "Must I remind you what I walked in on this morning when I was looking for Harry?" He ignored the question and grunted at the blackmail "Well do I?" I liked my angry tone. It gave my more athourity. I laughed inside to myself.
"Ginny, I know what you saw, and maybe you didn't like it but it was nothing like that!" He said quite exasparated.
"Actually it was. We at least had clothes on!" I barked at him.
"Well you might as well not have, Ginny 'cause that was far to..." He struggled for words, "...intiment."
"Oh, Ron. Get over it!"
The conversation was interupted by someone entering the kitchen "Ginee, Aarry. I am to say sorry." It was Gabrielle who had spoke.
"Ok." I told her in a blank tone voice.
"I ope we can start ovour."
"No." I told her. She began to plead with me. "No." I told her again. "You can't just randomly curse innocent people." I had no patience for the girl. She finally left the room. I collected the plates and cups. I washed the dishes and Hermionie dryed them. There was a clear tention between Harry and Ron even though Harry was at least making an effort but a sluky Ron wouldn't give up his little act. Right, I'm going up to bed. I need my beauty sleep if I'm going to be walking down the isle with the two beautiful people."
"Gin, You always look beautiful." Harry told me. Ron made noises as if to pretend he was being sick.
"Are you trying to imply something about my beauty, Ronald?" I asked him.
"Of course not Ginerva!" He replied, pretending to be appaled that I would ask such a question.
"Coming Harry?" I asked him.
"Yeah." He said "Night Ron," Harry held out his hand to Ron who instead of shaking it, gave him a man hug. "Night Hermionie" Harry gave her a hug and so did I. Despite my annoyance with Ron, I gave him a hug and kiss on the forehead. I can never stay mad at Ron. He is my favourite brother, and best friend.
Harry took my hand and lead me upstairs. He kissed me at my room door. "I'll let you get changed." He told me "It means I can get changed too."
"Ok" I kissed him quickly and went into my room and changed.

Tell me what you think and like the last competition, can you leave your name (or desired character name) and a comment, Ta x

05-06-2010, 09:04 PM	#89 (permalink)
Morag X-treme Horcrux Slayer! Puffskein Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: Killing Rob! Posts: 1,159 Hogwarts RPG Name: Sophie Potter First Year	New Post! Ruadh gu brath! \| \| Friendships are better than normal Ships SPOILER!!: Comments Quote: Originally Posted by emilyblack I didn't mean for you to change your story. I think we were just trying to guess at what might happen. It was a great idea and I was able to incorparate it into my story Quote: Originally Posted by Connie Hello Sophie, I am so sorry, and I feel so bad, but you misunderstood me. I would never ever suggest to a writer what to write about, unless the writer was stumped on what to write about and specifically asked for suggestions. It is your story, your writing it, you write it the way you want. It is natural for readers to think of things that they would like to see happen when the story is written well enough for the readers to get into it, such as yours is. So, if ever I say anything again, please don't change your story to accomadate what I say. Most of the time it doesn't work. But, you did very well with how you handled it. And I might add that Ginny handled the Dursley's great! I'll be watching for your next post. Like I said to emily, It was a great idea so if you do have an idea, I don't mind suggestions. Quote: Originally Posted by KatielovesHP This was fantastic Sophie. Good luck for SNP on Thursday. I can't wait, it will be very funny. ( Everyone that doesn't go to our school, I am the Green Party) Well Done today at the debate! Chapter 12- Part 1 Another competition "Ginny" I heard someones muffled voice. "Ginny, Dear" I opened my eyes quickly to my mums smiliy face. I noticed Harry beside me. He smiled sleepily at me then looked at my mum. "Would you like to come down to the kitchen. I've made some sandwiches and you haven't eaten since lunch today." Mum said. I yawned, nodded my head then streached. "Ok. We'll be down in a minuet." Mum disappeared out the room and I turned to face Harry. "Good evening Miss Weasley, did you sleep well?" He asked. "Well obviously Mr. Potter. I was asleep in your arms after all." I told him, kissing him on the cheek then wrapping my arms round his neck and hugging him tightly. "Did you sleep well?" "Yes, I did and after all, I did have you cuddled close to me." "Ok," I told him getting up and pulling him with me, "We are far too soppy." He laughed and followed me downstairs to the kitchen. Part 2 Ron was not pleased from what he saw earlier and when all the adults left to go into the living room he glared at me and Harry from across the table. "Ok," I said breaking the silence, "Who wants coffee?" "I'll have one." Harry said "Yeah thats not all you want." Ron growled at Harry from across the table. "Ron," I butted in getting two muggs from the cupboard "Must I remind you what I walked in on this morning when I was looking for Harry?" He ignored the question and grunted at the blackmail "Well do I?" I liked my angry tone. It gave my more athourity. I laughed inside to myself. "Ginny, I know what you saw, and maybe you didn't like it but it was nothing like that!" He said quite exasparated. "Actually it was. We at least had clothes on!" I barked at him. "Well you might as well not have, Ginny 'cause that was far to..." He struggled for words, "...intiment." "Oh, Ron. Get over it!" The conversation was interupted by someone entering the kitchen "Ginee, Aarry. I am to say sorry." It was Gabrielle who had spoke. "Ok." I told her in a blank tone voice. "I ope we can start ovour." "No." I told her. She began to plead with me. "No." I told her again. "You can't just randomly curse innocent people." I had no patience for the girl. She finally left the room. I collected the plates and cups. I washed the dishes and Hermionie dryed them. There was a clear tention between Harry and Ron even though Harry was at least making an effort but a sluky Ron wouldn't give up his little act. Right, I'm going up to bed. I need my beauty sleep if I'm going to be walking down the isle with the two beautiful people." "Gin, You always look beautiful." Harry told me. Ron made noises as if to pretend he was being sick. "Are you trying to imply something about my beauty, Ronald?" I asked him. "Of course not Ginerva!" He replied, pretending to be appaled that I would ask such a question. "Coming Harry?" I asked him. "Yeah." He said "Night Ron," Harry held out his hand to Ron who instead of shaking it, gave him a man hug. "Night Hermionie" Harry gave her a hug and so did I. Despite my annoyance with Ron, I gave him a hug and kiss on the forehead. I can never stay mad at Ron. He is my favourite brother, and best friend. Harry took my hand and lead me upstairs. He kissed me at my room door. "I'll let you get changed." He told me "It means I can get changed too." "Ok" I kissed him quickly and went into my room and changed. Tell me what you think and like the last competition, can you leave your name (or desired character name) and a comment, Ta x __________________ Last edited by Morag; 12-09-2010 at 06:25 PM.