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Connie · 12-20-2009, 07:30 PM

Hello, to all who is following my story. This isn’t written in my story, but,
~OtterySt.Catchpole, put me to wonder if I wasn’t to vague when I said, ”He did however just at that moment regret fabricating the hoax on Lily." Yes, I’ve decided that is pretty vague. I have all along wanted Lily and Severus’s relationship to be pure, without deceit. Severus is a bad person, probably because of his upbringing,
However, you can’t blame that entirely. For instance, Harry was brought up (starting with the time he was only with the Dursley’s) without love, and he is a good person.

I wanted Severus to have a good quality about him that would enable him to change his life around if he chose to. What I’ve done to rectify the problem, is to write a little page from Lily’s diary. Again, this isn’t written in the main story, but I wrote this today for a gift to my readers from me. Merry Christmas, to all, with my love.

Dear Diary,

I was wondering what I could get Severus for Christmas. He is such a loyal friend to me. I realized just how loyal, after he repented his deception of all these years pretending to be Petunias friend only to assure my friendship. I was so angry at first, but I had to realize his home life. He hadn’t been taught morals and principles as I was, and he was very lonely. Besides doesn’t it show he has his own set of morals by coming forward with his apology?

He is so very poor and I’m afraid if I get him something he’ll naturally, feel obligated to buy me something. I know this will cause much trouble for him at home, so I can’t get him anything. Then, now that I think of it, I don’t have to buy him something. I’ll make him a present. If he feels, he has to give something in return then he can make something for me.

I got the black heavy satin dress that I had to wear to Uncle Ben’s funeral two winters ago that was way too small for me now. Then I cut seven strips and sewed the edges inward. After that was finished, I pressed them in between some fabric to keep the satin from getting shiny. I wrapped these seven strips in some parchment, and tied it with one of my hair ribbons.

I ran to the playground where we always meet, and sat on the swings until he finally came. I was so excited when he came bearing a gift for me, wrapped with parchment.

He smiled that little smile he has that’s only for me, and handed me his gift. I gave him mine, and we opened them at the same
time. He was very happy when he saw what I gave him, even though he didn’t have a clue what the strips was. He savored the feel of the satin for a moment then asked what they were. I told him I made him a cravat one for each day of the week. Still he looked at me not knowing what I was talking about, but smiled and thanked me graciously for them.

I took one of them from him and tied it around his neck in the customary way then tucked the ends under his vest. I told him that he would be a proper gentleman when he wore them under his robes at school.

He was really happy with my gift and made sure he knew how to tie them properly, before I could get back to my gift from him. It turns out that he made me a broche. A, Lily, to be more precise. He rather squirmed when I told him it was beautiful. It’s made from pewter and he said with a smile that his momma was now missing a serving spoon from her kitchen. I kissed his cheek, said Merry Christmas to him, and then thanked him for my gift.

He kissed my lips and said, “Merry Christmas, Darling.” I’m sure I blushed, but still, I told him I wasn’t his darling.

He just smiled and said he wanted to be able to call someone that once in his lifetime.

The rest of the day was spent visiting, and enjoying each other’s company.

Now, Dear Diary, I must close this entry so, Tom, who is sitting here reading each word I write, and I can get to bed.

12-20-2009, 07:30 PM	#13 (permalink)
Connie Puffskein Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Florida Posts: 1,415 Hogwarts RPG Name: Janet Lynn Gordon Fifth Year	A gift for all my readers. Werecats are people too! Reader of Fan Fictions Hello, to all who is following my story. This isn’t written in my story, but, ~OtterySt.Catchpole, put me to wonder if I wasn’t to vague when I said, ”He did however just at that moment regret fabricating the hoax on Lily." Yes, I’ve decided that is pretty vague. I have all along wanted Lily and Severus’s relationship to be pure, without deceit. Severus is a bad person, probably because of his upbringing, However, you can’t blame that entirely. For instance, Harry was brought up (starting with the time he was only with the Dursley’s) without love, and he is a good person. I wanted Severus to have a good quality about him that would enable him to change his life around if he chose to. What I’ve done to rectify the problem, is to write a little page from Lily’s diary. Again, this isn’t written in the main story, but I wrote this today for a gift to my readers from me. Merry Christmas, to all, with my love. Dear Diary, I was wondering what I could get Severus for Christmas. He is such a loyal friend to me. I realized just how loyal, after he repented his deception of all these years pretending to be Petunias friend only to assure my friendship. I was so angry at first, but I had to realize his home life. He hadn’t been taught morals and principles as I was, and he was very lonely. Besides doesn’t it show he has his own set of morals by coming forward with his apology? He is so very poor and I’m afraid if I get him something he’ll naturally, feel obligated to buy me something. I know this will cause much trouble for him at home, so I can’t get him anything. Then, now that I think of it, I don’t have to buy him something. I’ll make him a present. If he feels, he has to give something in return then he can make something for me. I got the black heavy satin dress that I had to wear to Uncle Ben’s funeral two winters ago that was way too small for me now. Then I cut seven strips and sewed the edges inward. After that was finished, I pressed them in between some fabric to keep the satin from getting shiny. I wrapped these seven strips in some parchment, and tied it with one of my hair ribbons. I ran to the playground where we always meet, and sat on the swings until he finally came. I was so excited when he came bearing a gift for me, wrapped with parchment. He smiled that little smile he has that’s only for me, and handed me his gift. I gave him mine, and we opened them at the same time. He was very happy when he saw what I gave him, even though he didn’t have a clue what the strips was. He savored the feel of the satin for a moment then asked what they were. I told him I made him a cravat one for each day of the week. Still he looked at me not knowing what I was talking about, but smiled and thanked me graciously for them. I took one of them from him and tied it around his neck in the customary way then tucked the ends under his vest. I told him that he would be a proper gentleman when he wore them under his robes at school. He was really happy with my gift and made sure he knew how to tie them properly, before I could get back to my gift from him. It turns out that he made me a broche. A, Lily, to be more precise. He rather squirmed when I told him it was beautiful. It’s made from pewter and he said with a smile that his momma was now missing a serving spoon from her kitchen. I kissed his cheek, said Merry Christmas to him, and then thanked him for my gift. He kissed my lips and said, “Merry Christmas, Darling.” I’m sure I blushed, but still, I told him I wasn’t his darling. He just smiled and said he wanted to be able to call someone that once in his lifetime. The rest of the day was spent visiting, and enjoying each other’s company. Now, Dear Diary, I must close this entry so, Tom, who is sitting here reading each word I write, and I can get to bed. Last edited by Connie; 11-21-2010 at 07:31 AM.