alyweasley:Very unexpected

hrmy luv 4eva: Your post made me laugh. Cause she'll come out of teh coma before she reaches 75. It either she does or dies

Lol!!! posting more soon
8 chapters left to write then its finished. But don't worry im doing a sequal guys. But i wont start posting the story on here until i've finished writting it up. That way you don't have to wait long

Evangeline
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UPDATE:

Here is the next chapter guys. Chapter 21:

Lily’s mind was racing. She was scared, everything was black, she couldn’t see. She began to cry
“Mummy, Daddy” She shouted into the darkness.
She wanted them, she missed them dearly.
“Where are you?” She asked the empty space before her. She looked around once more.
“Am I dead?” She asked herself, “Because if I am I hate it, I don’t want to be dead. I want mummy and daddy” She was getting extremely scared now. She was lonely, no one to talk to, no one to be her friend
“I hate it here” She shouted through her cries. She started to band her hands onto the floor, the black emptiness floor. Lily didn’t see nor care about the missing floor, all she cared about was that she was missing her family.

Lily stopped suddenly
“A-h-h-h” Lily gasped, shuddering as if in pain, shuddering time after time as if under repeated blows. Then all at once she fell.

And at the same time thousands of miles away from the black emptiness she opened her eyes to be greeted by friends and family.


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Evangeline
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