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Old 03-09-2008, 06:37 PM   #11 (permalink)
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
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Heres chapter three guys. wow i've written two chapters in one day. record for me. Thanks to moonchicc07 and everyone else for reading
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Hermione and Hugo jumped at the sound of the door. before they could move Harry was barging in.
"Hermione," He said when he saw her on the floor
'he looks really worried' she thought to herself.

"Hermione...," He said again "I have some really bad news.... er...well i hate to say this but Ron's in hospital."he finished slowly. He waited for a load of questions which came is a instant.


"Is he alright?...how bad is he?...how did it happen?...when did it happen?..." she asked
"Calm down Hermione, he's alright. someone attacked him from behind. He's in st mongos now and he wants to see you." he said calmly

Hermione starred at Harry with tears in her eyes.
"Is he alright Harry? please tell me" she asked while a tear rolled down her swollen cheek. He looked away from her sad face, he avoided her question

"Hermione...."he began

"please tell me Harry, is he alright"

Harry looked back at her face. A single tear rolled down his face.
"No" he whispered
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Albus lay awake in his bed listening to the noise's outside his dormitory window
'Rose i miss you so much' he thought to himself. He started to cry into his pillow and before he knew it he cried himself to sleep.

He was walking along a dark path in the forbidden forest, all alone. suddenly there was a bright light a few meters away from him. It moved its head to look at him a second before walking away. Albus starred after it a moment before running to catch it up, but it disappeared. He looked around the cold, dark forest.He was starting to get scared.Just when he thought nothing more bad could happen he heard a high-pitched scream coming from the direction of the lake. Before he could think twice he was running towards the scream. He ran into the clearing of the lake just in time to see a familiar-looking girl's limp body fall to the ground. Albus ran to her and fell to his knees. He looked at her then slowly took hold of her shoulders and turned her to look at him. He looked at her face once and gasped
"Rose"he said. he looked at her battered body and screamed.


Albus woke screaming, he was drenched in sweat. He started to cry.

"Rose"he said through his sobs

"Al"

"Whats the matter?"

all his roommates gathered round his bed looking worried. He looked up
He stopped crying.

"Bad dream" He gave them a fake smile

"your not, im getting a professor"his roommate colin said running out of the dorm

"I'm fine really, it wa..." he began

"Mate you were moaning in your sleep" another roommate interrupted

"I said it was a bad dream, i'm fine"

" you don't look it" a voice behind them said
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Ok what do you think?
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